DOUBLE DHAMAL - Pg 22 Part 10 Pls Read. - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago
hi remad so u r a kind of newbie ... welcome to the forum .. u dont need to be sorry .... infact i m glad tht there r many silent readers like u who read my FF ... otherwise i use to always think tht those who comment r the readers... i will hopefully update this ff by tonight or tomm morning.... i was and actually i m busy in my studies n intership but still i cudnt resist anymore ... i ll updt .... thanks a lot once again !! :))
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 10

It was the day of party in Vidya's uni due to the winner from her colg. All of them including Sagar, Sindoora. Kirti were enjoying but Vidya was upset because she wud no more get a chance to remain attached to fashion designing.

She went inside the girls washroom to freshen up when after few minutes Kirti knocked at the door.

Vidya : whose it ? (she opened) yes Kirti come in ...

Kirti : what r u doing over here? Hes waiting for u.

Vidya : whos waiting?

Kirti : Rohan! the second winner from the competition.

Vidya : oh come on ... if i wud have nt saved him tht day he wud never knw i existed!

Kirti : but nw he does. go and ask him for a date.... i m sure he wont refuse it...just leave Sagar.

Vidya: but why wud he care for me at all ... there are thousands of girls drooling behind him and they r smart n beautiful too.

Kirti: come on Vidya.. he is funny, creative and dont u knw he is the fresh face in the fashion designing.

Vidya : Aah ... come on ... i knw all this .... (Vidya gets up and starts moving)

As she comes out of the room she just knocks at Sagar. Kirti tease her from behind.

Kirti : lk whose there?😛

Sagar lks at her with confusion (while Kirti goes away from there)

Vidya : Hi ... sorry shes crazy ...

Sagar : hi .. no prb...

Just then Vidya gets a missed call on her cell ..

Sagar : so its ur boyfriends call?

Vidya : (excitedly) nah .. mom and dad ... err.. i mean my mom and dad .... i wud be so funny if someone calls his girl friend on my cell by mistake .. i mean if he gets my no. as her girl friends no. ... imagine? (Vidya tells stupidly while Sagar gets bored)

Sagar: Can i ask u something?

Vidya: yes anything😊 ...er .. i mean sure ... (she lks at him)

Sagar : (he sweetly tells her) Can u pls ...

Vidya : yeh .... 😳

Sagar : MovE.

Vidya: wha..what ?

Sagar: (he tells louder this time) MOVE.

Vidya : oh yeh ..... (Sagar goes away)

As he goes Vidya listens few girls laughing from behind. It was Sindoora n her friends ...Sin imitates him.

Sindoora : MovE! 😛

Vidya as usual didnt pay attention , took her bad and starts going while Sindoora was nt enuf.

Sindoora: try next time😉

Vidya starts going when Kirti stops her.

Kirti: hey where u going? just stay ...

Vidya: no ... i m bored .... really no mood... (n she leaves)

She reaches home sadly ... she just closes the room door when suddenly Sameer comes up with the camera. He starts recording Vidya.

Vidya : just stop it Sameer otherwise u r murdered today ...

Sameer: (he removes something from behind) then who will give this to u (it was the plastic bag Kirti gave her)

Vidya: Sameer give it to me .. (she runs behind him..he climbs the stairs n she follows him... suddenlt Vidyas dad comes. She stops.

VD : Vidya where were u ? did u see the time ?

Vidya : i m sorry dad .. party is still on but i came early... it was the party for the winners during intercollege comptn.

VD : ok if thts the case then hw was the party?

Vidya: its better nt to dig the hole more dad... good night..(she left n her dad lked at her weirdly)

She entered her room and saw the plastic bag kept on the table. She took it.

Vidya : today i ll open it for sure.

She sits on her bed and opens the plastic bag hurriedly ... She was taken aback when she saw Divya Nanda's photo shoot pics like below.





Vidya: Divya Nanda! its so great to be her 😔 (she tells sadly. then once again she lks at it...) why does her picture always lk familiar to me ...maybe we were sisters before .. haha (she laughs at herself and keeps the pics aside and goes to sleep thinking will she ever get a chance to be like Divya.

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Over here Divya was sitting in her night suit underground in her damaged car.

Divya : hello is it Food Inn ? Yes i wud like to order few french fries ..umm .. and 2 pani pooris....and (before she cud say there was engaged tone) hello .. hello .... (she lked at the phone.. her mom came from behind..she switched the phone off from the other line.)

DM: ... chinese .... (Divya gave her the phone to do the rest. She ordered chinese n italian.)

Divya : oh mom so nw u have started keeping an eye on my eating too... cant i have pani poori.

DM: come on sweety ... u r a model ... dont act like a street child....learn from ur brother... ok bharat has his sports events frm tomm so i need to leave with him tomm..

Divya : (extremely happy) Bharat n u r going ? 😃 (her mom lks at her with eyebrows raised.) Oh i mean i ll miss u two ... we ll keep contact with emails😛

DM: i knw sweety u r bored of all this but when u turn 25 n u get retired u ll remember me....

Divya: (she starts going to her room) oh forget it i m already retired!😕

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Done with the part . Pls do comment. Thanks.


Edited by talkativetaurus - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
thank you talkativetaurus ..i really like IF..i shouldnt have made this late to be here,anyways......
Thanks again for the wonderful update....it was really good and a long one too😃😃...thank u so much...
i feel sorry for both vidya and divya....poor girls😭....and i wonder why sagar is not giving her much attention😕...he definitely needs to....i hope the day soon comes when he will be the one to be all exited and eager to meet our vidya😳😳...i hate this Sindoora..as irritating as always😡😡....but vidya is smart to ignore her......

BTW i am deepthy😊.and again thanks for the update...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
no prb deepthy .... thanks for ur comment ..... theres going to be a real twist in vidya n divyas life n so in sagars too ..... and yeh i m Affy :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey! That was excellent! I wonder why Sagar asked Vidya if it was her boyfriend's call.....maybe he's starting to like her! Yay! Stupid Sin! Finally, Vidya knows that she looks like Divya! What's gonna happen next? Please continue soon! Bye! Luv ya!
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Posted: 16 years ago
aahhh ... well u misunderstood ... sagar already has a gf ... he thought maybe vidya has a bf too .... just a modern say boy ... lol ...

and vidya is still nt aware tht divya lks like her due to their change in dressing..she only feels she is familiar .. u knw a kind of doubt .... it mght go one day ?? .... btw whats ATB? ?
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks for the awesome spot di!!
wow!! i just erad your whole ff, and it is really, really,really good!! awesome job!! stupid sin!! wonder wutz gonna happen next?!?!? update when u can plz!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
^ thanks fr the beautiful comment friend ... i ll soon updt :)))
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Posted: 16 years ago

hey talkitivetaurus.. im saniya. i was just goin through some FF's when i saw urs.. weird.. i dont recall seeing ur FF u probably didnt update for a long time but i luv ur FF it kind of gets addicting!! yea im kind of new so im trying to catch up on all of these FF's... luv urs by the way!! plz update soon!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: BMTDlvr8

hey talkitivetaurus.. im saniya. i was just goin through some FF's when i saw urs.. weird.. i dont recall seeing ur FF u probably didnt update for a long time but i luv ur FF it kind of gets addicting!! yea im kind of new so im trying to catch up on all of these FF's... luv urs by the way!! plz update soon!!



yes saniya u r right i havent updated since summer .... i got busy in studies n then i updated nw .. thnx fr ur precious comments...😳😆
Edited by talkativetaurus - 16 years ago

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