my version from S's prospective

i am trying to write sagar;s feeling though his prospective..

why??????????????? why do i feel like i am lost in my own world, why am i becoming an insane person, why do i see her everywhere, why does she lives in every breath i breathe, why does she wander in evry prospect of my dream??? why does she dwell in evry tear that drops from my eye? why does she obstruct evry thought comes across my mind?


she lied to me!! i am disheaten with her? aren't i? i though she killed the existence of sagar with her lie, but why???????????????????????

why does it still fell like she runs through evry vein in my body, why? why does it feel like my heart is being scattered into a million pieces when she disappears from my sight. i want to knw why??????? why does my heart start beating soo fast when i feel like she is near me?

what right does she have to do this to me?
first she lied, but now?
what right does she have to elimante any kind of taste that touches my toungue?
what right does she have to make me imagine her in evry object i glance upon?
why does her presence embrace me in evry prospect of my life?
what right does she have to do this to me?
why am i lost? who am I? why do I exist?

what right does she have to ignore me and hang up? doesn't she love me? how could she leave me like this?

What right does she have to sufficate me by snatching my like away from me? why??????? why can't i understand anything?????????? 😭 😭

come back Vidya, I knw its my mistake i can't live without you, my heart is yearning for you, please come back? give me back my life, give me back my happiness, come back to me. I need you vidya!! please!!! 😭

this sounds preety stupid, but i tried to make it realistic.

plz coment on wat i wrote!!!
-priya

well did Priya....nice ...

have to say that u were really seeing sagar whn u were writing this post...like seeing sagar infornt of u ...u made this post...u did soo well...

nice job...dear... 👏

thanks nandooooooo, i tried to wriet, but i kind of cant really and i make all these sillys attempts, i sum how felt i could feel sagar's pain and just decided to put it down in wods, thanks alot for ur coments they mean a lot to me

u r welcome dear...priya...u did it really well.

i felt the pain of Sagar while reading and the questions are too good...exactly wht Sagar is aksing to himslef...

good job 😊

Priya...u did such a good job...i dunno how u all do it...whn it comes to S...I cant...cause im too choked up with emotions to think right...but u did a wonderful job.... 👏

Wow!!! You know Priya I tried to write about it too. You did such an awesome job. If I have read your version, I would've never written my stupid version...

Weldone. You should start a FF. You do have a gift!

nishi, mine isssssssss soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo bad compared to urs, i don't think u should compare ur grt work with sumthing as stupid as mine and in fact if i read urs earler i wouldn't have posted it either, u r just toooooooooooooo nice nishi!!, but writing about his feelings was pretty hard, i din't no wat to say at all

and nishi u should start an FF, i bet it will turn out as wonderful as ever