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Hey guys, so here I am, frustrated with what's happening in the show and tired of everyone's lame theories and Sin's over smartness!! I mean poori family ki cunningness and smartness is in her! She tinks for all of them!! HATE HER!!

Anyway so tired of the crap we have to watch day after day im going to take the story from NOV 29th's episode and form it how im sure most of us want to see it… or for now just me but im sure u will all agree with me

So here it is

RECAP: Sin's plan is to get aniket blamed for her evil plans and she started off being placing his taveez in the hallway where the attacker escaped from. Rathod says he has narrowed search to those who will benefit most from Sagar's death and theres three people…

AB AGAYE!

S: kaun hain woh teen log chinu, bua ji, vidya bharat, di...

Rathod: Apki patni!

Sagar: aapka ka demagh to theek hay Mr Rathod bhala Vidya aisa kio karey gi?

Rathod: aapko ager kuch hota hai to, sab sey ziyada faida inhi ko hoga, apki jaidad, property business sab …

Sagar's frustration is obvious from his face, he is abt to cut Rathod off when Rathod says

Rathod: Sagar Sahab, mainey kaha nah humari investigation keh liye narrow down karna bahot zarori hai, hum asli gunhegaar tak tab tak nahi pohanch saktey jab tak keh hum aik aik shaqs kay faiday or nuksaan ko nah pehchan lein,

Bua ji who is listening to all this cuts in

Gaytri: Dekhiye hum jantey hain keh aap ka aik tareeqa hai kaam ka aur app usshi ka istemal karien gay, laikin hum apko ko itna batatey chalien keh Vidya ki waja sey hi ajj sagar ko dosra janam mila hai, unhi keh karan woh ajj theek thaak hai, jismani aur demaghi roop sey… hum kaysay maan liyen …

Rathod points at her to stop n nods

Rathod: Ma'am main sirf apna kaam kar raha hoon … main Mrs Singh per koi ilzam nahi laga raha, I am just trying to narrow down the list. Mr singh (turning to Sagar) I am aware of your past quiet well, humari investigation main jo teen naam aye hain woh main idher mention nahi kar sakta, I was merely trying to inform you that I have reached the next level of my investigation. I tink you are all reacting to this a bit too much, Mrs singh is a very strong piece in all this puzzle, and believe you me Mr singh, we will get to the real culprit, (looksing over the room and stoping slightly at Sindoora, then moving to Chinu), very soon.

After Mr Rathod leaves Bua ji and Vidya are discussing the events of the past few hours.

Vidya: (sobbing slightly) Bua ji appney dekha nah didi ney phir sey in per hamla karvaney ki koshih ki, aur shayed who kamiyab bhi ho jaatien, ager inhey kuch ho jata to hum kya kartey ….

Gayatri: Vidya beta app na haq pareshan ho rahi hien … sagar ko kuch nahi hua hai beta… balkey humay nahi lagta keh iss vaar sey sindoora ka maqsad nuksaan pochana tha!

Vidya looks up wiping her tear looking somewhat hopefull.

Vidya: kya matlab apka bua ji?

Gayatri: mehaz yeh keh sindoora ko bhanak thi keh sagar kuch kar rahay hain … keh sagar sachai tak pohanchney ki koshih kar rahay hain … aisey haalato main beta app khud batayein kya Sindoora chup chaap tamasha dekhti rehti?

Vidya: pur bua ji in per humla karvaney sey to shak bhari unglia phir sey deedi ki orh hi uthti nah, to kya maqsad tha is hamley ka …

Gayatri: yehi baat to hum bhi samajh nahi pa rahay keh aisa kya hasil kar liya sindoora ney is hamley ki koshish ki adh main … kuch to hai unkey mann main jo hum samajh hi nahi pa rahay… (looking at vidya sees how tensed she has gotten so to break the tension she changes the topic) kher yeh sab chodiye un key mann ki baat bahot der raaz nahi reh sakti … aur waisay bhi Shambunath per poora bharosa hai nah apko?

Vidya nods

Gayatri: to apna bharosa kabhi mandh mat padney dijiaye ga … humay poora bharosa hai sab behtri keh liye hi hoga ab … aur ab sindoora ka bach pana bahot mushkil hai!

Bua ji says it to Vidya with utmost faith, but the truth is she herself isn't so much sure anymore. The incidents of the night before have gotten her spirits down too but she is hopeful that the same way sagar was somewhat prepared for this attack he will be cautious from now on and will find the truth. After Rathod had said it with so much conviction that there is some1 in the house trying to take his life sagar will think along those lines. He will ponder who it is dat will benefit from his death.

Gayatri: waisay aik faida to hua Vidya.

Vidya: who kya bua ji

Gayatri: Rathod ka app per ungli uthana

Vidya is all confused

Gayatri: dekhiye app per lagay ilzam keh app ko sab sey ziyada faida hai sagr ko nuksaan pohanch ney sey, iss baat per beta sagar to vishwas hi nahi karein gay nah… to yani who yeh to zaror sochien gay keh dosra aisa kaunsa shaqs hai jisko itna faida hay keh unki jaan leney tak sey nahi katra raha… aur beta sagar iss barey main sochien hum yehi to chahtay hain …

Vidya now sees the logic in bua ji's point and smiles a bit.

Chinu and Shalu are discussing the events of last night

Chinu: humay bhabi ki bahot chinta ho rahi hai… woh dada ko ley kar bahot hi ziyada pareshan ho jati hain ...

Shalu: yes yes Chinu ji hum bhi nah yehi thinking kar rahay thay… Vidya nah bahot dar gayi thi last night … (then fluttering her eye lashes) wiasay nah chinu ji hum bhi app sey utna hi pyaar kartey hain jinta Vidya chote thakur sey … (n then her usual shy smile)

Chinu smiles and nods… just then sagar enters the living room and sees the two in an eye lock session so with masti up his sleeve all the time he decides to become the most annoying kabab in the haddi

Sagar: Shalu, Chinu yeh kya chal raha hai … tum dono ko koi kaam vaam nahi hay … dekho nah ghar ganda pada hai … garden main pani nahi diya kissi ney, jao shalu jakay yeh sab kaam karo aur chinu tum bazaar sey sabji, aur ghar ka baki sauda saman ley aoo …
Both look at Sagar with utter annoyance but nod and are about to get up and leave when Sagar notices and laughs out load

Sagar: arey main to mazak kar raha that tum donno itnay cute lag rahay thay keh mujhey bas masti soojh gayi aur kuch nahi

Shalu does her usual silly laugh and chinu just smiles. Sagar is about to leave when chinu says

Chinu: Dada woh hum kuch kehna chahtay thay aapsey.

Sagar: haan chinu kaho kya baat hai?

Chinu: Dada who Rathod sahib wali baat, dada bhabi aisa sapney main bhi nahi soch sakti… humney dekha hai dada bhabi din raat apki seva main lagi rehti, jo aapko pasand hota wohi karti, aapki kushi main hi unki khushi rahi hai dada aur ab yeh ilzam un per woh dada kaysay sehan kar payengi…

Then a little hesitantly

Chinu: dada kahi app Rathod sahab ki baat per kuch ziyada dehan to nahi dey rahay ?

Sagar: Dehan to dey raha hoon Chinu… (both look shocked) laikin iss baat per nahi keh merey hamley main vidya ka haath hai … iss baat per keh koi to hai jissey meri maut sey faida hasil hoga … itna faida keh who meri jaan leney per agaya hai … aur who jo koi bhi hai uska pakdey jana bahot zarori hai … main baar baar Vidya ko is imtihan main nahi dal sakta … kitna ghabra gait hi woh bechari kaal aisi halat main uska tension lena theek nahi hai …

Sindoora who just enters when sagar is saying how scared Vidya got last night is annoyed that sagar shud mention only his wife

Sindoora: sagar jaan to hum sab ki hi nikal gayi thi … beta humarey hi ghar main koi ab tum per hamla karney agaya… main sochti bhi hoon to dar sey seham jati hoon keh merey betey per koi … chii (with disgust) woh jo koi bhi hai beta sagar uska pata jald hi chal jaye ga yeh mera vada hai sagar, aik behn ka apney bhai to vaada.

Sagar: (hugging her) Di ap pareshan mat ho, hum jaldi hi uss tak pohanch jayengay jisney yeh jaal banaya hai.

Sindoora thinking: Yeh kaho sagar keh jaldi tum uss tak pohanch jao gaye jahan tak janay ka raasta mainey tumhey dikhaya hai (evil smile)

Aniket's room

Aniket is thinking to himself.

Aniket: Aisa kya hai jo Sindoora karna chahti hai ab… kaal raat usney phir sey sagar per hamla karwaya … aisi kaunsi baat hay jo main samajh nahi pa raha … kuch to hai jo uskey demagh main chal raha hai janay kya …

At this point sindoora enters.

Sindoora: Aniket kiyun befizol ki pareshani lagaye hai apney? App kiyun sochtey hain itna… ab app bas jaldi sey theek ho jayen … aur dosron ki fikr karna chod daine.

Sindoora: (Thinks to herself) app ka who hashr karongi app ko samajh hi nahi ayega keh sindoora nay vaar kiya kaysay aur kab…(evil smile)

Just then sagar walks in n notices Sindoora smiling but thers something about her smile. Extreme joy, as if she in that moment is the happiest being on the earth.

Sagar: Di app aisey kiyun muskura rahi hain…(sindoora is shocked to see him, he notices) mera matlab kiya waja hai iss muskurahat ki zara hum bhi to janayen.

Sindoora: (after composing herself from her shock to see sagar) dekho nah sagar main andar ayi to aniket, aniket apna haath hila rahay thay… magar shayed thak gaye yah phir himat haar bethay ab haath hi nahi hila rahay…

Sagar: Kya di yeh to waqai khushi ki baat hay!(walking over to aniket's side of the bed) jijo app ney haath hilaya. (aniket is lost as to whats happening) jijo aik baar phir sey try kijiaye nah … koshih to karien im sure app kar payengay.

Aniket is still shocked

Sindoora: Rehnay do sagar(with crockodile tears) mujhey lagta hay aniket theek hi nahi hona chahtay … (addressing aniket) app kiyun mujhey iss tarhaan torture kar rahay hain aniket (sitting down on the bed and touching his feet) main app key pare padhti hoon … koshih kijiye.

Aniket: (thinks to himself) yeh kaunsa naya drama hai sindoora ka

Sagar: Di humay foran doctor ko bulana chaiaye shayed woh hi bata payen jijo ki halat key barey main … im sure who medicine badalien gay kuch to karien gay jijo ko theek karney ki.

Hearing this sindoora loses all coolour in her face. She didn't expect this or was she being stupid to miss out this possibility?

Sindoora: Tumhay kya lagta hay sagar yeh baat mere man main nahi ayi … nurse ney bhi yehi kaha hay kai baar keh unsay aniket ho hiltay huwey dekha haath uthatey huwey mager jaysi hi nurse pohanch pati waha woh sub movement band kar detey hain … mainey doctor sey bata ki hai … woh kuch hi dino main aniket ka poora check up karien gay … he is the best specialist in town, Dr. Mehra. Ab aniket bilkul theek ho jayen gay … (looking at aniket) Haina?

Bas folks abhi itna hi … according to me this is wat shud be in the next episode or close enuf … if not den wat the hell right?

Anyway do give me ur feedback if u like it I might even continue.

sorry if its long!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey i like it plz continue 😛
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already on it ... kinda sleepy so will do it tomoro ... but thanks guys for the feedback ... means alot :D
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okie i cudnt fall asleep so i tried to finish 2nd part... sorry its not so long

UPDATE 2
EK DUJE KE VAASTE

RECAP: Rathod says Vidya is one of the people who will benefit most from Sagar's death. Sindoora makes sagar believe aniket might be getting better.

AB AGAYE!

Dinner table has never been this quiet for the Singh parivaar. Bua ji, Sagar, Vidya, Sindoora, Chinu, Shalu, Chachi, Chacha, Mahua and Chandra… everyone is there yet there is this emptiness in the air, like there is something missing, maybe its trust, faith. Everyone is shaken up by what Rathod said, everyone but a few. Those who know the truth, and those that are the reason.
Sagar noticing how everyone is playing with their food, except shalu, makes an attempt to break the silence.
Sagar: Vidya yeh aalo ki sabji to bahot badiya bani hai. Tum khao na
Vidya just nods
Bua ji who understands wat sagar is trying to do joins in to help
Gayatri: Haan beta chinu who humay zara salad to dijiye ga… arey yeh kya app ney kuch liya hi nahi aur Mahua, Chandra app log apni plate sey khel kio rahay hain … dieting to nahi kar rahien nah app donnoo (both nod there heads to say no, each lost in their own troublesome thoughts)
Gayatri: Chandra Harsh neechay nahi arahey khanay per?
Chandra: (with some confusion) woh bua ji who harsh kissi kaam sey shehar sey bahar gaye hain… do chaar din main laut ayengay.
Bua ji and the rest of the family is quiet shocked except for mahua, who looks confused and chacha n chachi who r looking for another opportunity to create problems in the family.
Sindoora: Kamal hai Chandra tumney kissi ko bataya kio nahi? Kab gaye harsh?
Chandra: Who di humay nahi maloom kaal shaam main gaye thay…
Chachi cuts off here
Hema: woh kiya hai nah sindoora ji harsh Chandra ko bata kar hi nahi gaye haan… woh jaldi main thay aur mahua ji sey mil kar gaye thay … kion mahua ji
Mahua just nods to that to confirm dat harsh did meet her
Bua ji, Sagar and Vidya all looked confused. Sindoora look calm and happy.
Sindoora: Aisa kaunsa zarori kaam agaya keh tumhay bataye bina chaley gaye.
Chandra: (quiet frustrated) humay kya maloom di humay bata keh thori nah gaye hain … ajayen gay to app sab pooch lijiyega
Saying that, she gets up to go to her room slightly pushing her plate away.
Everyone is quiet after that. Sindoora then tinks to herself.
Sindoora: aik balli ka bakra dhoondney niklti thi dekho nah kitnay mil gaye! Rathod ka Vidya per shak, harsh ka ghar sey gayab aur aniket ka taveez! (evil laugh)



After dinner Vidya takes water to her room where Sagar is sitting on the bed going through some files from work. Seeing her enter the room, he puts his files away.
Sagar: Vidya! Kabsey wait kar raha hoon, tum hoke aakar hi nahi dey rahi thi, aur yeh kya kitni baar kaha hai kaam dhaam chod keh apna khayal karo mujhey keh deti, Ramu kaka ko keh deti, magar nahi madam ko sarey kaam khud karney hain.
Vidya: app bhi nah! Humarey hissay keh kaam humay hi karney hain.
Saying that she goes to her dresser and startes fixing her hair. She lets them loose and runs the comb through it. Sagar who, has taken up his files again, is watching from a distance notices how she looks beautiful with her hair loose.
Sagar: Vidya yahan aoo nah, merey pass, please.
Vidya looks in his direction and unable to resist his adorable smile walks over to her side of the bed and sits besides him.
Vidya: Ji kahiye.
Sagar: (sagar ignoring her and going through his files) kuch kehna nahi hai mera bas man kiya keh tum merey pass betho so bula liya.
Vidya: acha ab kya karine hum?
Sagar: (sagar still ignoring her) har waqt zarori hay kuch karna bas bethi raho.
Vidya gets annoyed by this and starts to get up when sagar holds her by her arm and pulls her gently back towards him. Putting his files aside he takes both her hands in his and starts to caress her fingers. Vidya is shocked and shy. Sagar notices pink in her cheek.
Sagar: Vidya pata hai jab kaal raat tumhari cheekh ki awaz suni, main bahot dar gaya tha, man main bas yehi khayal tha keh kahin tumhay kuch ho to nahi gaya, tumhay koi nuksaan to nahi pohancha, tum aur junior surakshit ho. (now holding her face in his hands) mano jaysay aik lamhe ko yeh duniya yeh kainat sab ruk gayi ho aur waqt thehar sa gaya ho. Kuch sooja nahi kuch samajh nahi aya bas dauda chala aya tumharay pass.
Hearing this Vidya;s eyes water. She takes his hands in hers and says
Vidya: Humay pata nahi kio aik ajeeb sa darr tha, aik khauf keh kuch honey wala hai, keh jaysay apkey sir per koi khatra mandra raha hai. Aik bechaini si thi mann main. Hum bahot dar gaye thay, bahot ghabra gaye thay… ager app ko kuch ho jata to hum apney app ko kabhi maaf nahi kar patay…(hugging him tightly now) hum nahi ji saktey iss tarhan, har lamhey iss khauf keh saath keh apki jaan ko pal pal khatra hai, woh bhi kissi apney sey. (pulling away from him looking him in his eyes)Un detective key nazdeek to shak ki sari soiyan hum per akay ther gayi hain, per app hi batayen kion hum apki jaan lena chaiayen gay? Apko nuksaan pohancha kar hum kya haasil kar payen gay. Humara sara jahan ap keh ird gird hai app main samaya hai… hum bhala kio(is crying uncontrollably)
Sagar wipes her tears and is about to say something when she cuts him off
Vidya: dukh humay iss baat ka nahi hai keh unho nay humara naam liya. Ager humarey zariye sey asli gunehgaar tak pohanch payen gay woh to hum sau baar ilzam sehnay ko tayyar hain
Sagar now cant take it anymore. Wiping her tears he says
Sagar: Vidya tumhay kya laga koi mujhey kahay ga keh tum mujhey nuksaan pohnchana chahti ho aur main yakeen kar longa? Kya tumhay lagta hay keh koi mujhsey kahay ga keh meri vidya, meri bholi si masoom si piyari si vidya mujhey apney sagar ko nuksaan… kabhi nahi … Mr Rathod ka matlab tum per ilzam lagana nahi tha who to sirf yeh kehna chahtay thay keh jo koi bhi hai joy eh chahta hay keh main is duniya main nah raho woh meri maut sey bahot faida uthanaye wala hai… who to bas meri samajh main nahi aya Vidya. Main samajhta raha keh koi anjaan dushman hai mager Vidya dushman wohi hota hay jo pehchan ka ho… unka matlab aur kuch nahi tha vidya.
Saying that he holds her again and this time Vidya is all smiles as she is thankful to her shambunath for making Sagar realize that its some1 close to him who wants to harm him.

hope u like it... do write ur comments
tc
LOVE TO ALL
Edited by kinxa86 - 17 years ago
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oh my good thats very very nice plzzzzzzz cont soon
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hey tat was a very very gud start..honestly it was great.......hope 2 c some sv scenes...lol
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BTW! I updated my FF!Tere Liye! Pg 4!
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gr8 story..I love the title 😃
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Okie yesterday's episode was a little progressive. But of course no one will ever figure out keh why sin wants the investigation to continue, but my bua ji is smarter she will become alert. And also I realized my FF is moving the speed of the show itself so here is a faster version and of course we all want more SV scenes :)
Recap: Everyone is shocked to see that harsh has left without informing anyone. Sagar tells Vidya that he will never doubt her ever.

AB AGAYE!


Chandra is on the phone when Sindoora enters and sits on the couch beside her. Chinu and Shalu come from the other direction n decide to sit in the living room with Sindoora and Chandra.
Chandra: Ji thank you. App nahi jantey humay kitni khushi mili hai. To hum yeh rishta pakka samjhien. Dhaneyvaad. Hum rakhtey hain.(hangs up, now turns to Sindoora) Di woh log maan gaye hain. Mahua di ki shadi ab do dino main hi hogi.
Sindoora: yeh to bahot khushi ki baat hay. Mager Chandra tumney achay sey maloom karwaya tha nah larka aur family sab theek hai nah?
(Sagar and Vidya enter)
Sagar: kaunsa larka di? Kiss family ki baat ho rahi hai?
(Bua ji and Mahua who went for a walk in the garden come in and join everyone)
Sindoora: woh Mahua ka rishta tey hogaya hai. Do hi din main shadi hai.
Mahua looks tensed and they all start congratulating each other.
Sagar: good! Ab shadi ki tayyari main lag jana chaiaye hum sabko. Ziyada time nahi hai. Chinu tum phool walon ko aur mithao walon ko phone karo. Di app catering keh liye order dey dien. Hum kaal ki un logon ko sagai per bula letey hain parso sangeet and den shadi (OKIE so I took it from the show who cares? :p)
Sindoora: haan beta yeh theek hai.
Sagar: to chalo chalo sab tayyari karni hai.
Everyone leaves

Everyone is decorating the hall. Sindoora is directing the phool man to decorate the stairs too. Vidya and Bua ji r making laddo. Sagar is busy with the arrangements when his cell phone rings.
Sagar: Ji Mr Rathod kahiye.
Rathod: Sagar sahab app keh ghar key pass merey admi chaubees ghantay pehra deney keh liye appoint ho gaye hain. App key personal body guard ka bhi intezam ho gaya hai. Srif aik baat thi.
Sagar: ji kahiye?
Rathod: Woh teen log jinka zikr kiya tha, un logon ki aur baki sab hi gahr walon ki aur ghar ki talashi leni hai. Kya hai keh mujhey lagta hay shayed koi surag haath lag jaye.
Sagar: Mr Rathod app ab bhi aik hi baat kar rahay hain? Hain kaun yeh teen log main janna chahta hoon.
Rathod: I'd rather you not Mr Singh laikin app itna hi insist kar rahay hain to mujhey apki patni, Vidya Singh, apki ki behan Sindoora Singh aur apkey jija ji Aniket Singh per shak hai. Aur unkey samet sab hi ghar walo ki aur unkey saman ki talashi…
Sagar: apka demagh to kharab nahi hay(shouting in the phone now. Everyone's attention is diverted to Sagar and his phone call now)
Sagar: Main apney hi family members per shak karo, apni patni apni behan aur apney jija ji per? You have lost it Mr Rathod. Mujhey yeh investigation kal hi band karwa deni chaiaye thi. Thank you but your services are no longer required. You may remove your men from outside the house too …I will hire a security company to provide me with that atleast they will not so openly accuse my family of harming me!
Hangs up.
Vidya: app shant ho jayiye. Dekhie humay lagta hay keh Rathod ji ko apna kaam karney dena chaiaye. Shayed kuch behtri ho jaye.
Sagar: (in an angry, but milder tone now) Vidya tum jaanti ho kya keh rahi ho? Apney hi samney main tum per di per aur jija ji per shak karon? Yeh mujhsey nahi hoga. Aur ghar ki talashi apsab ki talashi loon.. mera zameer kabhi ijazat nahi deyga!
Gayatri: Beta Sagar Vidya theek keh rahi hain beta … app shant ho kar sochiye … shayed iss main koi bhalai hi ho
Sagar: nahi Bua ji nahi main aisa nahi kar sakta … please app log mujhsey yeh karney ko nahi kahien.
Vidya and bua ji exchange worried looks. They know that this investigation is necessary in order to expose Sindoora. Sindoora is more worried as this investigation is necessary to get everyone off her back!
Sindoora: beta sagar (going up to him) beta meri baat mano. Tum yeh investigation mukamal honey do beta!
Sagar looks at Sindoora with a schocked expression but even more shocked are Vidya and Bua ji.
Sagar: di app bhi?
Sindoora: haan sagar beta main bhi. Dekho meri khatir. Tum inkaar mat karo beta. Pichley kai mahino sey mujh per iss ghar main kayi ilzam lagaye hain(looking at Vidya) beta meri khatir tumhey meri kasaam.
Takes sagar's hand and places on her head.
Sagar: Di! Arey di app janti hain main apko mana nahi kar sakta. App chahti hain to aisa hi hoga.
Vidya and bua ji don't know how to react they are happy investigation will continue but shocked that Sindoora shud want such a thing! Bua ji knows something's cooking in Sindoora's head. Sagar calls Rathod.
Sagar. Mr Rathod, I've called to apologize. I think you are right we should go ahead with the investigation. Sindoora di, aur baki sab ko bhi yehi theek lagta hai. Per talashi apko 2 din baad leni hogi.
Rathod: no problem Mr Singh
Sagar: okie then I will get in touch with you soon. Bye.

Bua ji and Vidya talk about what just happened while making the Laddos.
Vidya: Bua ji aapney dekha nah didi ney khud talashi key liye kaha inhay.
Gayatri: Ji beta per aisa unho ney kiyun kiya. Jab keh woh janti hain keh aisa karna unkey liye mushkil ki waje bansakta hai.
Vidya: Samajh to hum bhinahi pa rahay. Kahin aisa to nahi Bua ji keh didi ki koi nayi sazish ho. Humara kehney ka matlab hai keh aisey halat peda kardien who keh shak bhari nigah kissi aur ki oorh uthay? Shayed humari? Yah shayed Harsh ki?
Gayatri: yah ho sakta hai khud apney hi sindoor ki? Humay lagta hai Vidya keh sindoora aisa karney sey bhi nahi chookaingi. Ab jo koi bhi ho, humay bahot safdhani sey kaam lena hoga… sindoora ki haar chaal samajhni hogi aur unkey pal pal ki khabar rakhni hogi. Iss kaam main hum chinu aur shalu ko bhi laga detey hain. Un per sindoora ka dehan kam jayega aapki aur humari taraf sey to woh bahot alert hongi.
Vidya: humay bhi aisa hi lagta hay hai Bua ji hum abhi Chinu bhaiya sey baat kar keh aye.

Vidya goes and explain the whole thing to Chinu who in turn tells her to not worry from now on he and Shalu will watch over Sindoora every minute.

It is now the engagement day and and Choti maan arrived from her Yatra early that morning. Sagar, with a body guard, went and picked her up from the train station himself.
Seeing so much security to enter the house and armed men outside the house she freaks out but Sagar tells her its nothing to worry for. He got security to protect his family all harm as there seems to be someone who wants to harm their family Sagar's accident and recent events have forced him to do so. CM is happy as all this could only help protect her family.

The guests have started arriving and Sagar is getting ready in his room.
Vidya is in the washroom. Sagar from outside
Sagar: Vidya jaldi karo, mehman agaye hain, tum abhi tak shower ley rahi ho, Vidyaaaa
Vidya enters the room. She is wearing a laal sari with silver work on it. She has for a change a fancy dori wala blouse on that is short sleeves. Her hair is wet and let loose, which she is wiping with a towel. Sagar turns to look at her is taken back…usually Vidya looks pretty but today she looks like an angel from the heavens. For Sagar time stops, his fret that the guests are there is long lost, all he can see think is how beautiful Vidya looks.
She moves to the dresser still ignorant of the fact that Sagar is not just staring at her but checking her out too.
Sagar: (softly, approaching her) Vidya
Vidya stops wiping her hair and looks up. She sees Sagar come closer and hug her from the back. He wraps his arms around her and gently in her ear says
Sagar: Kya baat hai wifey, ajj tum bahot khoobsurat lag rahi hoo… aik dum (even more gently) sexy…
Vidya goes red in the face and looks down. Sagar places a soft kiss on her cheek and turns her around.
Sagar: ager tum issi tarhan sharmao gi Vidya to kaisay chaley ga?
She looks up and is speechless. Sagar laughs. Kisses her forehead, she closes her eyes and doesn't want Sagar to stop. He kisses her eyes one after the other, and stops to look at her face while she has her eyes clothes. She slowly opens them.
Sagar: Pata hai Vidya main har lamha apni kismet ka shukar ada karta hoon, tumharay Shambunath ka shukar ada karta hoon, (Vidya looks at him) oh sorry Humaray Shambunath ka, woh nahi hotey nah Vidya to hum aik kabhi nahi ho patey, Main uss lamhey ka shukar ada karta hoon jis main taqdeer ney yeh faisla liya keh tum meri dulhan bano. Aur sab sey ziyada main tumhara Shukar guzar hoon Vidya, keh tumney merey jaysay insane sey shadi ki jissey shadi ka matlab bhi nahi pata tha tab. Jab main …(hesitates) pagal tha…
Vidya covers his lips.
Vidya: Humney apko kabhi pagal nahi mana, hum ney to tab bhi sirf apka sacha mann dekha tha…aisa saaf aur sacha man jiss sey humay dekhtey hi pyaar hogaya. (holds his face in her hands) app key to shukar guzar hum hain, jiss ney humay itna sab kuch dey diya, itna pyaar, itna pyara sa parivaar, Aik maa jo humsey behad pyar karti hai, Aik aisa Devar jinho ney kadam kadam per humari madad ki, Aik pyari si Bua ji, jinho ney humey hausla diya, himmat nahi harney di, teen teen nandain, aik aisey jija ji jinho ney sagay bhai ke sarey farz nibhaya, Bharat jo humari ek dost ki tarhaan madad kartey hain, aur aik pyara sa beta Sameer, jisney humay maan honey keh ehsas sey milwaya, yeh sab humari zindagi main aapkey karan aya, aur hum aapka dil sey shukar ada kartey hain.
Sagar: Haan Vidya mager yeh sab (taking her hands in his) kitney dukhon keh saath aya nah? (seeing that Vidya and the moment were both taking a sad turn he changed the topic) Aur Junior ko kaysay bhool gayi tum Vidya? (Vidya all serious now) Arey Vidya Im sorry. Main kabhi kabhi bahot bekar baatien karta hoon nah? Dekho tum itni khoobsoorat lag rahi ho aur yeh udasi tum per bilkul nahi jach rahi. Chalo meri special wali smile do
Vidya smiles and he hugs her tight.


okie i tried to make the story go a lil faster but sorry was not much success... but dotn worry my story will take two truning points in the next update... thanks for all ur feedback and do let me know wat else u want to read in thse updates? the last SV scene i added becuz dats wat we all want it doesnt help much with the story except that SV are much more in love and closer ... ur feedback is greatly appreciated. do tell me how i can shorten the lenght! maybe have less dialoges?
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thanks everyone one... and yes pinkpinkers im on my way to read ur FF ... love it too must say ... everyone is doing a great job ... i was just tired of the show moving so slow and SIN winning every chaall😭 😭 ... its time for her to GO! hooefully in a couple more updates she will b history! 😃
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