FF-Episode 1-MY FIRST ONE!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guyz...

This is my first FF, so sorry if u dont like it, but plz comment so I can write some more, this is after S gets better though... (DEEP BREATHE) Here goes nothing:

Sagar remembers the past, when Sindoora tried to kill him b4, he was first going to reveal her but then he thought of sumthing else revenge...

Next day in the morning...

S: Vidya! mera briefcase, mujhe office key liye der ho rahey hai!

V: Je, hum aate hain

S: jaldi karo naa

Vidya cumz into thje room

S: Vidya mujhe tumse juroori baat karni hain, di ke bare, he tells her everything that he remembered. Aur mujhe tumhari madat chaahiye, badlaa ke liye!

V: hum aapke har har kadam pe saath ho gae!

S: teek hai, pir aaj se tumhara office jaana shuru

V: Lekin hum wahaan kya kerange?????

S: bus dekhte jaao, he gives a big smile, she smiles back

in the living room...

Sin: beta, ab hum chale?

S: Um, di?

Sin: Um, haan betaa.

S: Aaj se... Vidya jae gi...office, aap ki jiju ko zarurat hai, Sin stares at him, shocked, like he suddenly stops supporting him,

Vidya cumz downstairs, wearing black jeans, a back and white stiped top, and hoop earrings and her hair down!!!!!

Sindoora feels that Vidya won!

V: ab hum chale?

SM: ek minute, ab tum office pehli jaa rahi ho, tum Shambunath ji ka ashirvad to lai ke jaa rahi ho naa?

V: Unke aashirvaad to hamesha humare sath hota hai, aur hum kabhie unke aashirvaad ke bina kabhie gaye to nahi haaina?

Shalu: Vidya, tum bahut smart aur smiley lag rahi ho!

Chinu:(laughs) ha bhabi, aap hamesha aise rahaa karo!

S: chale?

V: jee

Well that's it for today...stay tuned for Episode2... hope you all liked my first FanFic!

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afreen13 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it's very nice plz cont soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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woow wat a wunderful first part something different to the ohter FF well done it greaat! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG 😛 !! What dialogues 👏 👏 !! if only that could really happen in BMTD 😉 !! wonderful fanfic and keep it up 👍🏼 !! I'll be reading them 😃 .. 😃

Mrs. Malhotra 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great work..keep it up..
I like it very much..please cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow that was great 👍🏼
write more
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Vidya in black jeans and white top!! Wow! That's an imagination!

Wonderful episode 1! Good job! 👏👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow vidya in westernized clothes...continue soon...would love to see what happens next...and i can soo imagine sindooras face expressions. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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The best part is.. that in epi. 2, there is going to be some serious consequences with Sagar's DI!-->but she wont get exposed just yet... she needs to feel the BURN!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome!!!LOVE IT!!! great dialoguess....eek...sindoora down the drain in fronnt of her bro..finally... 😃
Ananya

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