Mirror..Mirror...what do you see?

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Mirror Mirror

Mirror..Mirror

The reason for my furor

This incompetence flavor

Burning inside of me

Is a fire awaiting to rip me

I know you desire my merriment

You care for my sentiments

But you can't understand my emotional torments

You are right

You may convince me to forget the ongoing fight

Spreading in my heart

But I ask you a question

Will I forget it forever?

What worse can be

Than living inside a mind that is distorted?

What worse can be

Than stuck between normalcy and abnormalcy

What worse can be

Than seeing normal, but not being normal?

What worse can be

Than not being the best you can be?

What worse can be

Than living with the fact of feeling incompetent to be your husband?

~ ek choti si koshish, I hope you all like it..

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww that is really sweet Sonidi!! 👏

You portrayed our inner feelings so well! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

awww that is really sweet Sonidi!! 👏

You portrayed our inner feelings so well! 😳

Thanks for liking it Meera!😳

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Soni that was just wow 👏 👏 👏 ...its true those are our inner feelings right now...Soo mush confusion and frustration
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow Soni ji, you've put all out emotions and feelings into such a lovely poem..... just too good..!! 😳 👏 👏 love the words you've used, ahh, yes it is quite frustrating as we have to keep waiting.. although there is more hope now that Sagar is doing all of this, we will see....!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww. that was rilly amazing. u did a rilly gr8 and excellent job. 👏 👏

|[>Deena|
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wowwwww..Every word was perfect for the moment 👏

Take Care
😳 xx Shailee xx 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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You've described Saagar's sentiments so aptly. I feel bad for both Saagar and Vidya.

Both wanting so much more for each other...yet helpless to help one another...

Thanks for sharing...it is beautiful...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awww....Soniji that was too good. 👏 👏 Express' Saagar's torment so well and you can imagine Vidya just standing in front of him.

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