Koi Tumsa Nahin--FF! Updated! pg 15!

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ADITI

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Posted: 18 years ago

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gaurie again a gr8 part daer 👏nice pics 😳 😳 😳 dey add flavour nd spice to ur fic thts why i totally luv it...do cont soon!

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Posted: 18 years ago

#72

finally u brought some new guy in story........... good going......... now it makes full sense...... 😛

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chefa

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Hey Gaurie,
keep it up yaar very interesting its starting too sound good!! 😊 😊

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Gaurie

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Aww! Thanks for such lovely comments you guys! And for all who is reading but not commenting, I hope you are enjoying but I would enjoy it if you comment! Will update soon!

Gaurie 😳 😳

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Ruchika

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Posted: 18 years ago

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awesome update gaurie! 👏
gr8 outfits, all red. 😆
cant wait to see wat happens next. 😛

-Ruchika

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Gaurie

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Part 9

RECAP
Mahi and Diya decide to switch spots on the date. Tushar and his dad have a talk. Tushar and his friend Raj make a plan...

"Theeke theeke, voh red penri hai. Lekhan tu kab ayega?" Raj asked impatiently. Tushar was already flying out the door.

"Hold on yaar, mein toh traffic mein pasgaya. Paanch minute dedo." he lied, easily. His friend Raj was a very good friend but was a real neat and organised freak. He would really throw a heck of a tantrum if Tushar told him he wasn't even in his car yet. The reason he chose Raj though, was that he was better with the ladies than anyone he knew. And if Mahi fell for him, then he would know it was not meant to be.

Later at the resteraunt...

"Okay Di, you sit there, you will have the perfect view. Mein yahaanpe betthi hoon. I'll wait for him here." Diya explained and tried to shoo her off, but Mahi stood there.

"Lekhan Diya. Mein akeli betke... kaise lagega." Mahi asked, unsure. It was late at night and it wouldn't be smart for her to sit by herself.

"Arre yaar," Diya rolled her eyes. "Chinta mat kar. I'm right here! if something goes wrong, to hum chale, kay? Don't worry!" Mahi looked at her confident sister for a second, then smiled.

"Tum bahut bari hochuki hai," Mahi said. Diya laughed and rolled her eyes again. Mahi walked the a table at the side andsat down. She looked at the lake to the side. The full moon was reflecting brightly on the surface. She closed her eyes and made a wish. Please, let him be the one...

She opened her eyes and saw man wearing a red sweater walk in. Diya waved him over and the man sat down. He's not that bad... she told herself. But he's not as cute as that Tushar another voice in her head said. Mahi opened her eyes in shock and saw herself face to face with Tushar himself.

"Is this seat taken?" he asked politely.

"Uh," Madhuri stuttered. Tushar smiled and sat down.

"I'll take that as a no." he said. She looks very beautiful, very simple, sweet he mused to himself. He looked at Raj and his Mahi from the corner of his eyes. I hope she's the one he thought again. He started fretting that maybe Mahi wasn't as perfect as she sounded and therefre sent Raj to be his decoy. He was going to sit at this table only, but seeing Madhuri already sitting here, he decided it would be better if he joined her instead of sitting off by himself seperatly.

Madhuri on the other hand, was delighted that she was sitting with someone. She was hating sitting alone. She would have been a little happier if she wasn't sitting with the boy she was just thinking was very cute.

"What are you doing here?" she asked abruptly. Oh great, he must think I'm an idiot now! Tushar looked at her nervously.

"Uhh... I was supposed to meet a friend here, but he never showed up." he lied quickly. He'd been doing a lot of lying recently, and was unfortunatly getting quite good at it.

"Oh, I see" Mahi took a sip of her water.

"And you?"

Mahi choked on her water hearing this. What will I say? i can't lie! Well actually, you can argued that same voice in her head.

"I'm waiting for a friend as well," she said, coolly.

"Oh," Tushar looked disapointed. "I'll just leave then..."

"No!" Mahi yelled slightly. Tushar looked at her, surprised. "I mean... I don't think she's coming either..."

"Okay..." And Tushar sat back down. The atmosphere turned awkward. Both glanced over at Diiya and Raj's table, where they seemed to be having a great time. That's odd, they both thought. How can they have such a great time without me?

I guess because Diya is so confident.

I guess because Raj is such a charmer.

They both scowled and ordered food. Mahi stared some more at Diya's table and sighed a bit too loudly.

"Aap kya dekhreho?" Tushar asked.

"Tum," Mahi said automatically, not even realizing Tushar had asked he something. "I mean, please mereko aap mat bulao. Tum chalega."

"Sorry, tum kya dekhrahe ho?" Tushar asked again.

"Kuch nahin." Mahi answered and smiled. Then she caught Tushar looking at the table as well.

"What are you looking at?" She asked him.

"Huh? Kuch nahin." Tushar blushed. After some time, Mahi laughed a little.

"The atmosphere... kitni awkward hai, na?" she laughed. Tushar laughed as well.

"Kuch zyaada,"

"Voh couple kitna romantic hai, na?" Mahi asked, realizing Tushar had been staring there as well.

"Huh? Haan, I guess." He looked at his food.

"Kya hua? You've never been in love?" Mahi asked. Tushar raised his eyebrows in shock. The seedi saadi ladki who's house he was just at for a marrige proposal, just asked him if he had been in love.

"No, I mean Haan. I mean, I don't know..." he stammered.

"You don't know?" She asked, curious.

"It's difficult." he said finally. "What about you? Kya tumne kabhi pyar nahin ki?"

"Kiya na. Lekhan... it's difficult," giving the same reason he gave. They laughed.

Meanwhile at Diya and Raj's Table...

"Can you believe they haven't figured it out yet?" Diya laughed.

"I know! This is so much fun. Here we are acting as if we are in some secret plan, and there they are, falling in love with each other, again, without a clue!"

"I'm so glad that you are here, and not some other guy. Otherwise we would not have been able to get these two together!"

A/N Well I'm going to end it at that (even though I can go on and on😆) but I haven't thought it out that far and I wouldn't want it to sound like ranting! Please Comment! At least 5 before I update! I'll PM if you don't comment!

Gaurie😳😳

Edited by Gaurie - 18 years ago

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Ruchika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#77

gr8 job Gaurie 👏
i liked diya nd raj's plan...
secretly getting them together! 😆 😉
continue soon.

-Ruchika

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Gaurie

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: stargirl345
gr8 job Gaurie 👏
i liked diya nd raj's plan...
secretly getting them together! 😆 😉
continue soon.

-Ruchika

Thanks so much Ruchi! Was begining to think no one was gonna comment! If there are any ways I can improve, please don't hesitate to tell me! It can only do good!

Gaurie😳😳

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ADITI

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Posted: 18 years ago

#79

gr8 part gaurie 👏...agree with Ruchika for bringing 'em secretly 2gether...

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Gracella

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Posted: 18 years ago

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hey Gauri!! here i'm back to comment yaar! well u got me totally! unexpected yaar, what a surprise, Raj and Diya planning behind their backs and succeeding in linking Tushar-Mahi 😆 👏 😉 GReat part yaar! loved it! Do continue 👏 👏

i hope tush-mahi will not dicover soon that it was a plan 😉

Love,
Gracella

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