(FF) Kyun Nahi Hua Pyar? NOTE Pg. 78!!!!! - Page 28

Originally posted by: Nabihah

thanks for such an adorable update..cant imagine karthick sooo nice to his wife 😆 lol but i like it though!! also maya is soo nice 😳 😆 awesome!! update!

Thanks for liking it Nabs....no need to thank me for it!!! I love imagining Karthik nice, becuase he seems like if he wasn't such a jerk he could be really nice....Maya is really nice....obviously! I'll try to do two updates tom!😳😳

Originally posted by: inavars

I love how i accidentally wrote "if only saagar was good" when I meant Karthik...and you still assumed I meant Karthik even though i obviously wrote saagar😆

Problem is....I know you too well!!!😆 I know where your mind was thinking...considering that it is Thursday today!😳

Originally posted by: tweetylicious

continue fast meera, oh and i think how about a few romantic scenes, btwn sagar and vidya, oh and tushar with chachi 😆

I'll try to continue tom Tweety!! And about the romantic scenes...have patientence...they'll come between SV but Tushar and chachi...no way sorry!😆

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Thanks Ruchika!!! I'm sorry for leaving you dazed and confused...but that is my main goal!😆 You really think now I'll add some new character in?? You never know...it cud even be someone bad like Harsh....😕😕😕

there u go again meera di! confusing me! 😆 😆

-Ruchika

Originally posted by: stargirl345

there u go again meera di! confusing me! 😆 😆

-Ruchika

I know Ruchika....and I'm sorry!!! But even I don't know who it cud be...I'll think about who wud be the best....who do you honeslty think it shud be??😳😳😳

I'll try to continue this ff in about 20 mins! 😃 😃 😃

Part 12

Recap: Vidya asks Maya in front of Sagar, if she loves Sagar or not? Maya declines, leaving Vidya happy. As Maya leaves someone grabs her hand and pushes her against the wall. The person also puts his hand over Maya's mouth to stop her from screaming.


Maya: (muffled) mujhe choro!!!

The person takes out a lighter and brings it close to her eyes. Finally after gazing into her eyes for two minutes, he lets his hand down from her mouth.

Maya: tumne mujhe asse kyun......I mean Tushar, I don't even know you....

Tushar: pata nahin Maya, jabse mujhe pata chale hain ke tum Sagar se pyaar nahin karti, tabse mere dil mein kuch ho raha hain....

Maya: Tushar, main tumhe theek se janti taak nahin, to tum assi kaisi baate kar sakhte ho? And by the way, would you please let me go?

Tushar: oh...uhh...Sorry. And Maya, agar Chachi tumhe kahin mile, to please usse mat batana ke main yahaan hoon...

Maya: ok Tushar, but why did you say all that stuff to me?

Tushar: ok saach kahu?

Maya: please, lekin phele please mujhe choro...

Right before Tushar lets go, Rahul, who was watching them from the side turns away.


Rahul: (thinks) woh do kori ka Tushar, Maya ke saath....main usse nahin chooronga...

Vidya: arre Rahul, tum yahaan? Kya soch rahe ho?

Sagar: kiske khayalon mein khoya hua ho??

Rahul: assi koi baat nahin hain Sagar...

Vidya: theek hain Rahul, lekin itne ghusse mein kyun ho? Kisi ne kuch kaha kya?

Rahul: kaun kya kehega?? Waise bhi…mujhe neend aa rahi hain...tum mujhe bataogi ke mere kamra kaunsa hain?

Vidya: haan woh ek minute, hume Tushar aur Maya ka dance performance dekhna hain…

Rahul: maya aur Tushar dance karne wale hain?

Sagar notices that hearing this made Rahul's facial expressions change. He smiles at the thought of Rahul being jealous of Tushar.


The lights all dim and the song "Hai Ishq Yeh Kya Ek Khatha" from Bas Ek Pal, (please be listening to it if you can when you are reading this!)

The song is a quick dance floor number, if anyone has seen the movie they will remember how Sanjay Suri and Urmila Matonkar were dancing, imagine Tushar and Maya dancing like that also.


Sagar hands Rahul a drink while they are watching the dance, and throughout the dance Sagar keeps looking over at Rahul, who is clutching the glass tightly.

Right as the song finishes Maya is in Tushar's arms and he is holding her tightly, right at that moment Rahul clutches the glass tighter and so it breaks in his hand and shatters into pieces.

Vidya notices and is about to go to Rahul, when Sagar grabs her hand and stops her from going.

Vidya: yeh aap kya kar rahe hain? Hume jaane dijiyE....usse jot lagi hain...

Sagar : Vidya mujhe pata hain ke tumhe sab ke chinta rehti hain, lekin iss baar Maya ko jaane do...


Maya runs to Rahul and quickly takes him to his room, and finds a spare towel and performs first aid on him.

Maya: Rahul, what is your problem? Why did you do this?

Rahul: Why were you dancing with tushar...


Maya: (thinks) lagta hain ke yeh jealous hain…hmm….aab main isse kya jawab du??

I'll have to stop it here, but I promise another update in about 3 hours!!! I wonder what Maya will say to Rahul?? Please do leave comments and once again no pm's sorry!! Running late!!!

Luv ya all loads,

Meera

Good job Meera! I can't wait for your next one!