(FF) Kyun Nahi Hua Pyar? NOTE Pg. 78!!!!! - Page 10

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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
Sorry for the late reply Maya...ahem mera matlab Meera ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†

AWESOME AWESOME part...I loved the 50's heroine idea...and poor Vidya, she likes to think it's a compliment ๐Ÿ˜†

And awww...that's such a pretty dress Saagar chose for her ๐Ÿ˜ณ

and wow...Meera...you colored in the tie to blue?! ๐Ÿ˜† good job ๐Ÿ˜‰

awesome part hun!! continue soon! ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: *Reemz*

Haha!! That was the best written episode yet meera! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Wow Reemz di....that's def a major compliment!! I'm so glad you liked it!!!๐Ÿ˜† The jealousy and their reactions to each other was brilliant! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ I'm really happy that you liked it.....will surely try to keep all updates at that level!!!

Luv ya loads,

Meera๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 18 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Nabihah

haa ha!! maya ๐Ÿ˜‰ lol jealousy chooo cute! ๐Ÿ‘ awesom..cant wait to read more



lol....yup instead of Surili I added a Maya into it!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ I'll def try to update twice tom!๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: inavars

Sorry for the late reply Maya...ahem mera matlab Meera ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† Srav.....tum bhi na? I'm not gonna be a permanent fixture in this ff, and even if I am, then it's not gonna be with any BMTD characters....I will never steal Sagar from Vidya...now Sharad, is def an option!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

AWESOME AWESOME part...I loved the 50's heroine idea...and poor Vidya, she likes to think it's a compliment ๐Ÿ˜† I'm really glad you liked it!! I laughed when I wrote that part....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

And awww...that's such a pretty dress Saagar chose for her ๐Ÿ˜ณ Isn't it though...lekin saara credit Sameer le gaya....๐Ÿ˜ณ

and wow...Meera...you colored in the tie to blue?! ๐Ÿ˜† good job ๐Ÿ˜‰ How cool am I srav??? If you can make sigs, I can color things!!!๐Ÿ˜†

awesome part hun!! continue soon! ๐Ÿ˜› Thanks again for liking it!! I'll update with hopefully two parts tom!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
I will try to continue this ff sometime today! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
Part 6


Recap : While Sagar and Vidya were getting close, one of Sagars old friends walked in, Maya. Now what will she do in the party??



Maya leaves Vidya and Sagar alone...

Vidya: aap jaaye na....aapki dost aapka intezaar kar rahi hogi...

Sagar: tum jal rahi ho?

Vidya: nahin to...hum bhale kyun jale?

Sagar: kyunki tum Tushar ke bina nahin reh sakthi...

Vidya: aacha? Kam se kam humko subhe sham angrezi mein to baat nahin karni parti!! Aapki woh madam ko to hindi aati hi nahin hogi!

Sagar: excuse me? Maya ko bahot aachi Hindi aati hainโ€ฆaur usse French bhi aati hain....

Vidya: frunch?

Sagar: Vidya, Vidya, Vidya....tum nahin samjhogiโ€ฆto koshish bhi maat karo..

Vidya: aap humko har baar aise hi keh dethe hainโ€ฆ.humko aacha nahin lagta! Aap jaaye unke paas....hume aap akela chor dijiye!

Sagar: Vidya....(turns around in frustration) Arre, tum to ro pari...aaj ke din kamse kam nahin rona chaiyye...

Vidya: isme humari kya ghalati? Aap hi har baar humko rulate hain!

Sagar: aacha baba, sorry! (Holds his ears and does sits ups) Mujhe maaf nahin karogi?

Vidya: Kardiyaโ€ฆaap chale?

They both hold hands and walk down the stairs together, everyone starts clapping and saying how wonderful the two look together, aur kisi ki nazar na lage.

Maya: Sagar? I think you forgot...you owe me a dance...

Sagar: I forgot? How can I forget? Iski sazaa yaheen hain, ke main tumhare se puri raat dance karu!

Uma: Sagar, yeh kaun hain? Arre Maya beta? Tum kab aayi?

Maya : (touches her feet) Bas aunty aabhi abhi...

Vidya: Yeh to sabke saath ghul mil gayi hain....humari jaaga lene ki koshish zaroor karegi...

Aniket: Sagar? Vidya? Tum dono ka phela dance hainโ€ฆ

Vidya : hum? aur dance?

Sagar : ya jeeju....rehne do, main Maya ke saath hi dance karongaโ€ฆ

Uma: bilkul nahinโ€ฆ..aaj ka din Vidya ka hainโ€ฆaur phela dance tum uske saath hi karna!

Sagar: (rolls his eyes, but then smiles) Chale my darling wife?

Vidya nervously nods

Sagar leads her out to center of the dance floor and the DJ starts the music, and the song Suraj Hua Maddham bellows out, and Sagar starts dancing, pulling Vidya along with him, who trys hard to follow and match his steps, and surprisingly she does well. By the time the long seven minute song ends, Vidya is resting her head on his shoulder and she feels startled by everyone around them clapping.

The DJ announces that now they will play a few more slow numbers and then the actual dancing will start.

Maya walks up to Sagar: hum chale? You owe me one dance you know?

Sagar: of course I remember...

He lets go of Vidya's hand, but her grasp is still tight on his hand, right as he looks at her face, he sees tears in her eyes,

Sagar: Maya, wait a sec...

Maya: not now, Sagar, this is all a part of my plan!

Sagar: plan? What plan?

Maya: tum chale to sahi, let's dance, and I'll explan everything to you as we dance.

Sagar leads her out to the floor and puts his right hand on her waist and pulls her closer, enjoying the green shade of jealousy taking over Vidya's face. Maya puts her left hand on his shoulder and they begin dancing...

Sagar: so kya plan hain?

Maya: suno aabhi baatati hoon...

That's it guys!!!

I really hope everyone liked it!! And even if you didn't you can atleast pretend that you did!!! Lol...

Luv ya loads,

Meera


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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
Pretty Good! Are you gonna make another today? ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: noodles

Pretty Good! Are you gonna make another today? ๐Ÿ˜Š



Thanks for liking it Noodles...I'll try....I cant; guarantee though!๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
awesome part meera ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

at least now we know the reason why maya's here ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰

aww...poor vidya all jealous ๐Ÿ˜†

suraj hua maddham?! one of my favorite songs ๐Ÿ˜ณ I can just imagine SV dancing to it ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 18 years ago
Eeeeshhh!!! SHM...haila!! I can totally imagine them 2 dancing to it! The jealousy is so cute and seems real!! Great job Meera! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

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