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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
hey you are back hehe
Great story can't wait to read more
I love Vidya's character and Sagar is being sneaky i wonder what he is planning
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ravjot- My yummy raviolišŸ¤—šŸ¤—How are ya? Of course, I remember you...what kind of question is that?🤪 thank you so much for your awesome comment! And yeah, Vidya is totally TAPORIšŸ˜† Wait till you read more scenes between sagar and heršŸ˜†
Sheetal- You so did not need to remind of your name! I so remember youšŸ¤—šŸ¤—Thank you so much for your comment😳 I'll try to continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
Oye oyeee
I'm totally loving Sanju and Chinu jodi....very fun. Was smiling and laughing when I was reading it...LOL
Love Sanju's bubbling and bold character šŸ˜Ž
And V is falling for S already....hymmmm I likes šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sagar was still smiling hearing that Vidya has agreed to work with him. Honestly, he was quite shocked. He was expecting her to question him more before she gave in. But he didn't mind that she gave in too quickly. As long as he got what he wanted, he didn't care. Vidya sees him smiling and asks "So what do you want?" Sagar looks at his watch and says "Right now, I want some lunch. I was just headed out. Would you like to join me for lunch?" Vidya looks shocked and doesn't know how to take that offer and says "As far as I can remember, I was here to discuss a business proposition." Sagar as he gets up from the couch says "Then consider this a business lunch. We can discuss the business matters there." Vidya finds Sagar very strange and keeps looking at him wondering what to do. Sagar sees her confused and says "Is there a problem?" Vidya shakes her head and gets up from the couch and he takes that as a yes to the business lunch. Sagar starts walking and Vidya follows him and is surprised to see that he is not walking towards the main gate. She stops and asks "Where are we going?" He turns around and still walking says "To my garage. You didn't think that we were going to walk to go get lunch, did you?" Vidya shakes her head and keeps walking behind him and he punches in a security code and opens a door. She finds herself in a room filled with cars. Her jaw drops as she looks at all of them and says "How many cars do you need?" Sagar smiles as he tries to decide which one he should drive today and says "I have told you, it's not about my needs it's all about my wants" He points towards a red sports car and says "see that one. I bought it two years ago. Never drove it since." Vidya gets angry and says "See. That is why we steal from people like you." Sagar looks at her in confusion and says "Excuse me? People like me?" Vidya still in anger says "Yeah. You have so much money and throw it away without a care and then there are children on the streets starving for a bite of food." Sagar taps his chin with his index finger and says "I never actually thought about that" Vidya as she raises a brow in anger says "why would you?" She wanted to add "rich scoundrel" to her sentence but thought it was best for her to remain quiet. Sagar goes back to looking at his cars as he is still trying to decide which one he wants to drive. Vidya in the back shakes her head in frustration and says "Pick a freaking car already. It doesn't matter." Sagar gives her an angry look and says "I pick the black one." Vidya starts walking towards the car and sees that Sagar is still standing at the same spot and calls for his servant. Vidya turns around and says "Now what?" Sagar pointing towards a cabinet full of keys says "I need him to find the key for me." Vidya raises a brow and says "Seriously?" She walks towards the cabinet and sees that keys are neatly labeled. She looks towards Sagar and says "You need a servant even for that? Can't you do it by yourself?" Sagar walks up to her and says "I suppose I could." He looks at the keys for a minute and finds it and smiles and says "I found it!" Vidya starts walking towards the car and says "Great! Now you can receive your PhD." Sagar doesn't hear that and still looks very happy as if he accomplished something great. He starts the car and opens that garage door and as the car starts moving he looks towards Vidya and says "So do you remember the code I pressed into the system to open the garage?" Vidya looks towards him in confusion and doesn't say anything. So he asks again. Vidya thinks about it for a second and says "7346194" Sagar smiles hearing that and says "And that is why I want to work with you! You weren't even paying attention to the code and remembered it correctly; now imagine if you were to concentrate on saving some information in that brain of yours."

She smiles hearing that as she sees that Sagar is driving very fast. She looks at the road and says "How long had you been spying on me?" Sagar doesn't look at her and says "Long enough to know that you have the skills that are required for this job" She keeps thinking as she studies him for a while and says "So all the cars in your garage, did you steal them?" Sagar smiles and says "No. I bought them." She raises a brow and says "So how are you so rich?" Sagar turns in shock and looks at her and she says "I mean, what do you do?" Sagar smiles and says "Like I told you, money was never an issue for me. I steal every once in a while for the things that money cannot buy for me. I find it thrilling. Getting your hands on something you had yearned for a long time, that is where the thrill lies." Vidya is still not convinced and asks "Where did you get all the money?" Sagar smiles as he sees that she is not going to leave him alone and says "I inherited it!" Vidya raises a brow and says "So your parents were the rich ones, huh?" Sagar at the mention of his parents looks upset and says "We are doing business together…there is no need for you to learn about my family background. After this job, you are going to go your way and I am going to go my way. So let's not get personal." Vidya sees that he seems to be upset and quiets down as she starts looking towards the road as Sagar is still driving very fast. She was going to ask him about what he wanted her to do but thinks that it would best if he is the one who starts talking first.

Sanju was in the kitchen trying to prepare food for Chinu before he wakes up. She was busy working when she hears Chinu shout Vidya's name. She stops working and immediately rushes up to see what is going on. Chinu still sleeping seems to look terrified as he seems to be experiencing a bad dream. His eyes seem to be shut tight beyond control as the dark images play in his head. The image of a woman being beaten to death as a nine year old Chinu watching stands there terrified. Then images of a seven year old Vidya on the street crying out of hunger, then the image of him leaving her there to get some food, followed by the image of her screaming as her little feet try to find the ground as a man grabbed her. Just as the nine year old Chinu in the dream shouts Vidya so does the currently dreaming Chinu. Sanju opens the door and immediately rushes up to him. She places her palm on his bare chest and feels that his heart beat is too fast to be normal. She shakes him as she calls out to him as she realizes that he is dreaming. Sanju is finally successful at getting him out of his dream and he sits up terrified and Sanju notices the sweat on his face and the fear in his eyes. She was about to grab her duppatta to wipe his sweat away when he grabs her and hugs her as he closes his eyes as if all the sudden he was nine years old again. Sanju hugs him back as she slowly runs her hands up his bare back and says "You were dreaming. It was just a bad dream!" Chinu as he still has his eyes closed finds all the comfort he needed in the Sanju's arms and for some reason the things he had kept only to himself for years decided to come out. Chinu as he hugs Sanju more tightly now says "it wasn't a dream! He killed her! He killed her in front of my eyes and I couldn't do anything." Sanju hearing that looks shocked as she tries to pull herself away to look at his face. But she realizes that Chinu is not going to let go of her. She gives up trying to pull herself away and asks "Who? Who killed who?" Chinu as he rests his head on the curve of her shoulder says "My dad. He killed my mom."

Sanju hearing that looks even more shocked now as she feels Chinu's tears on her shoulder but doesn't know what to say. He keeps talking and says "The alcoholic. When he didn't have the money to buy his booze he wanted to sell my mother for couple of bucks and my mother said she would die but not do what he said. So he beat her to death, right in front of my eyes. I just stood there and couldn't do anything." Sanju hearing that tightens her grip to Chinu as tears roll down her cheeks. Because she had known that Chinu and Vidya had a tough childhood but she didn't know it could be this bad. She tries to comfort him and says "It's not your fault. You were just a kid, you couldn't do anything." Chinu as he opens his eyes now and backs away to look at Sanju's face says "But I did. I grabbed Vidya and ran away from home. Because I knew that sooner or later he was going to try to sell Vidya too." Sanju sees the tears in his eyes and extends her hands as she grabs his face and wipes his tears and says "You did the right thing." He looks at her as she is still holding his face and says "But the world Iwas trying to protect Vidya from followed her even on the streets." Sanju looks confused as he keeps talking and says "That night when she was hungry and I went to get food for her…when I came back…this man who was trying to take Vidya away…God knows where he was taking her or what he was going to do with her…" Sanju as she looks terrified now asks "what happened that night Chinu?" Sanju notices that as she asked that question the fear in his eyes turned to piercing anger and he says "He was taking my Vidya away! I grabbed the sharpest object that was around and I stabbed him!" Sanju as she hears that goes numb as she keeps looking at him as she tries to make sense of everything. She keeps looking at him and then hugs him again thinking about how he must have felt living with all this. He has kept all these secrets to him since he was nine. Not even Vidya knew all this. Chinu again rests his head onto her shoulder and says "I didn't mean to kill him. I just wanted him to leave Vidya alone" Sanju as she again comforts him says "It's alright Chinu. I would have done the same thing." Because she knew how much he loved Vidya, and for her he could even kill. He pulls Sanju away from him again and says "It was for Vidya that I started stealing, to put a roof over her head. And because I couldn't leave her behind alone ever again, I taught her to steal too." Then she sees the anger appear in his eyes again as he says "If someone even tries to hurt Vidya again or comes near her with bad intentions, I will kill again!"

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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Excellent update Farah di..woow Chinu and Vidya do have a very baad past..hope everything works out for them soon and SV hmm what are they up to can't wait to read more šŸ˜›

Edited by *|Heena|* - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
Vidya still in anger says "Yeah. You have so much money and throw it away without a care and then there are children on the streets starving for a bite of food."

^^ I see Sagar as the guy who'd say "Your point being..?" hehe I guess he's rich and spoiled, but not entirely heartless in your story. I wonder what Sagar's past is...

Poor poor Chinu! I feel so bad for him. I'm glad Sanju was there for him though...I'm sure he's going to push her to the floor as soon as he gets his senses back šŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
OMG!! Lovely FF! Continue writing!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
ohhhhhhhhhhh myyyyyyyyyy god!! i really luv this ff. you put your magical touch in every single update. It is really amazing. the story line so far is really good. I feel so bad for chinu. he's really sweet though. and sanju is soo nice!!! uhoh- he doesn't know what sagar's doing....problem for sagar. but he is a smart guy, being able to keep a tab on vidya. Vidya is a very shmart girl!!! Like the two seperate stories- they go together really nicely!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
so sad really feel sorry for the poor Chinu.the dream was really scarry. Sagar's car garage was intersting. RICH SCOUNDREL šŸ˜† superb update šŸ‘want to know about sagar's background. waiting for the next update

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Edited by alien55 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

Oh man I just loved this line 'Great! Now you can receive your PhD'....it made me laugh so much for some reason....but she is right though...can't Sagar do things for himself šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

Anyway...I'm guessing there's something murky about Sagar's family...otherwise why would he get so upset when Vidya mentioned them?? But Farha Di...when is Sagar gonna let Vidya (and us!) know what his supposed business proposition is??

Aww man...poor Chinu and Vidya...such a harsh childhood...and Chinu must love his sister immensly to be ready to kill for her....aww...no wonder they had to turn to stealing šŸ˜”
Anyway...perfect update like usual Di...I love the way you've written this story so far...and I'm sure Forbidden Attractions is gonna be...infact...it already is...one of the best FFs we have....please continue soon!!

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