SS: Dost Ya Premi?! Upd 7th July-pg6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Dost Ya Premi?!
Big big thanks to my Bhumi umi!! 🤗

Ok guys. This is my first time writing a SS even a FF, so I don't know how it will turn out.
First update short, others will hopefully be longer.



Update Index:

Update 1- Page 1

Update 2- Page 4
Update 3- Page 6




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Posted: 16 years ago
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Update 1


I usually spend my mornings having coffee with my best friend. Talking about things we'll forget about the next hour, making jokes and laughing at any possible thing we saw. What a way to start of the day., full of energy and life.
But what about this morning?! I'm all alone having coffee, no one to make me laugh or tell me jokes. Starring at the empty chair infront of me, I wondered about last night. Did everything we didn't want happen happened?! Why didn't he call me this morning?! Why am I sitting here alone?! He said it was nothing...I said it was nothing. Yeh kya?! I hope everything isn't ruined.
Gazed away in my thoughts, my brother Shano filled the empty seat and waved at me to get me out of my daze.

Shano: Vut's up di?! Why so sad?!

Divyanka: Kuch nahi Shanz, I'm just thinking about something....(changing the topic quickly) What about you!? I'm suprised to see you awake so early!!

Shano: Vell mere pyaari di, if you must know, I'm going to ask a girl out today. Her name is Lima. And I need to start working up the courage from now!

Divyanka: Accha!?! Well good luck with that, tell me about it later. I'm getting late for work.

As I left Shano at the coffee shop, I hoped that everything goes good with him but at the same time, wondered what was it that I was feeling. Feelings?! Feelings for Sharad?! No, no....and then, I recollected everything that happened last night.


To find out what happened last nite. Check my next update...coming soon.
Edited by limaSDude - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Update 2

As we were playing cards and watching our fav. show, 'The Kuchursingh Family' and having a ball watching it and laughing at all the jokes. I reached for my glass of coke and he reached for the remote control and our hands touched. I looked up and said, "Kya bhaat hai?! Watch where you going choco boy"

Sharad: Well I would watch if you're big head wasn't blocking.

Sharad and I were comfortable with each other like we've known each other since the day we were born and not just 5 years ago. Our friendship was like no other, we couldn't spend a day without contacting each other.
Then suddenly, out of no where,

Sharad: I can take your lipgloss if I wanted to.

Thinking that he meant the lipgloss from my back pocket I immediately responded with a wicked tone in my voice, "Try it nah!" as I got up headed to the kitchen.

Then as I turned by back facing him, thinking that he'll grab the lipgloss from my pocket, but instead he grabbed my hand, turned me around and pulled me closer to his body. There was an intense eye-lock for about 2 seconds then BAM! He reached in, our lips meet and I think he even bit me (O he's so naughty!) The kiss lasted for about 15 seconds until Sharad himself pulled away.

Sharad: Oh my God. What have I done?! Sorry...oh God...I'm really sorry Divz. I shouldn't have done that. I don't know that got into me, maybe its the coke. I'll leave now.

Before I could even reply, he picked up his coat and rushed for the door.

Divyanka: No Sharad, its ok! I don't feel bad...you shouldn't feel bad... Things just happen!!

Right then and there, I ran to the door and blocked him from leaving.

Divyanka: You actually forgot some lipgloss...

Sharad: What?!

I rest my arms on his shoulder and leaned in and kissed him, and as our lips separated I said...

Divyanka: Now can we both feel guilty!?

Sharad: Why did you do that?!

Divyanka: So you won't feel guilty alone...I would too. We're friends yaar!! I won't let you take all the blame for that!! So are we cool now!?

Sharad: Are you sure its ok?! Because I feel terrible!!

Divyanka: Was I that bad of a kisser?!

Sharad (giggling): No, not a all. Its just that....

Divyanka (interrupting): Its just that its ok....things happen, we should move on...we're only friends right!!

We headed back to the table. Sharad bending his head as he proceeded to the couch.

Divyanka: Sharad...its ok..you have to stop feeling bad...We're only friends...aren't we good enough friends to understand that?!
Sharad (in a down tone): Yeh. Its ok, I guess.

Divyanka: Now can we get back to our card game?!


*jumping out of the flashback*

Stuck in traffic on my way to work, I wondered what I did wrong...why is Sharad still feeling bad?! I thought we worked out everything...I'm going to call him now!!
I called him 9 times and still didn't get an answer. I began to get worried. Wondering if I made things worst by kissing him back. Am I losing the best friend I ever had because of a kiss?!
Reaching to work, I called him again, still no answer. I was uneasy that entire day.

*Back at the coffee shop*

Shano: Hey Sharad!! Where were you man?! How come you wasn't with Divyanka this morning?!

Sharad: I got up really late this morning yaar....and my phone was dead and I lost my charger, so I couldn't get in contact with her...Did she leave already!?

Shano: Yeh you just missed her. She looked a bit down!

Sharad (softly): Maybe she's upset about last night! Maybe she was saying it was ok but she was really upset! What have I done?!

Shano: What's that?!

Sharad: Oh nothing nothing...Maybe another time. By the way, how come you're awake so early?!

Shano: Why does everyone think I'm always sleeping late?!

Sharad: Maybe cause you are?!

Shano: Well I'm not...but I'm going to ask a girl out, her name is Lima.

Sharad: Lima?! Hymmm why does that name sound familiar?!

Shano: I don't know, maybe you know her??!!

Sharad: Hymmm oh yes Lima...and Bhumika and that other girl...amm amm Manusha. Oh yeh, I remember them, they were in our school. A year younger.

Shano: Oh so you know them?! Nice, well I haven't worked up the courage to ask Lima out...will you come with me pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee!!

Sharad, not being in the mood to go out because of what happened last nite refused, but after much begging, Shano got his way and Sharad agreed. Both boys left the coffee shop and was heading to the mall.




Give your feedback and stayed updated to know what Shano and Sharad are up to!😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Update 3
Dedicated to Manusha😉
Last update- pg4



Arriving at the mall, all on Sharad's mind was Divyanka, if she was angry at him or if she didn't know how to react and if she felt awkward. Too afraid to call her as he doesn't know what the outcome might be,he worries even more. Shano interrupts his thoughts because he spotted Bhumi, the girl who always went 'Gaga' for Sharad.

Bhumi: Hey Shano!! Oh my god, Sharad?! What are you doing here?!

Sharad: Hey Bhumi, long time...I'm just here with Shano.

Shano: Sooo yeh whatever, where's Lima Bhumi?!

Bhumi: Accha! Looks like somebody is excited to see someone!

Shano: Bus Bhumi, I was just wondering.

Hearing a footstep coming from behind him, Shano is expecting the love of his life to coming from behind so he turns around with a wide smile on his face and to a huge disappointment only to sees this girl walking towards him, picking her nose and tripping on her way to him. When she reached a considerable distance...

Shano: Oh God...Manusha, doesn't this girl leave me alone in peace!!

Sharad: What happen Shano, she got a crush on you?!

Shano: Crush?! More like a stalker, that girl doesn't leave me alone...jeeez and she's always picking her nose!! :S

Bhumi: Oh shut up Shano, don't be so mean!

Sharad (in a teasing tone): Yeah Shano, don't be so mean. :P

Bhumi (blushing): Sharad you hunk...I mean goofball!! 😆

Shano: Anyway, where is Lima?!

Bhumi: She's in the back, she was helping me with some new stuff I got this morning for the store.

Shano (running in the back): Ok Bhumi, I'll be back in a while...tell Manusha I went the other way!!

Sharad: Oh god this boy!! So Bhumi how are you?! Long time, wanna get something to drink?!

Bhumi (giggling and blushing): Sure Sharad 😳

And the two went to the snack bar to get something to drink.
Meanwhile, at work, Divyanka leaves early to try and catch up with Sharad. She dropped by at his house, he wasn't there, at the coffee shop, he wasn't there, so she decided to head to the mall, and also check on Shano to see if he knew about Sharad.

On entering the mall, Divyanka sees Sharad sitting face to face with Bhumi.

Divyanka (thoughts): Sharad?! With Bhumi?!?! What?! Whyy?!?! Is this why he didn't call me this morning?! No wayyyyyyyyyy!

Then comes behind Divyanka frightening her....

Manusha: Jealous D?!

Divyanka: *screams* Oh God!! Manusha, you scared me!!! (in her head: She always does) Ammmm jealous of what?!

Manusha: Sharad with Bhumi!

Divyanka: Why would I be jealous?! Me and Sharad are just good friends!

Manusha: Yeh, thats what they all say.
And she walks away.

Divyanka: What an annoying girl!!

And she sneaks past Sharad and Bhumi as they giggled and chatted while having a drink.

Oh God, Sharad?! with Bhumi!? WAWW I still can't see this!!
But he kissed me last night!
What was that about then?!
Wait.... why am I asking about it still?! Last night was nothing. I made that clear, to myself and Sharad. Arey baap! Am I really jealous?! Do I like Sharad?! Did Sharad really like me and I just let it go by telling him we're just friends and he felt disappointed so he's going to Bhumi for comfort?!....Do I seriously like Sharad?! Haiiiii, I'm so confused.

.....All these thoughts going through and through Divyanka's mind as she hid behind a plant watching Sharad and Bhumi talk.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Amazingg update Lima ima!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!! OMG you are going out with Shano Congrats!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hehe, Vell yaar. If I can't get Divz, I gotta get her Bro!! 😉
Thenkoo ji!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Grt start of what looks like is gonna be a good story!
Shall try to keep up with it.
Good job Limu ji!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Omfg..Lima started an SS...wooo....wtf..u r dating Shano...Grrrr...well u couldn't get Divz...😆...so u had to try else where..lmao....i must say..it was a darn good start..do continue soon....hey hey...add me in this FF to...as u know who🤣..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome start Limz Di!! Woo, u going out with Shano?! Nice!! Lovely start...keep up the great work and plz continue soon.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEhe, Fara, well I must continue, I won't leave you reading like this 😆
Might update tonite!!

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