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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Kiran....
it's really gud...i really like it...hmmm i wonder what besharam stuff u've got in store for us😆...can't wait!!!...gud job and keep it up!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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love it dear! Update NOW!! Srry lol I can't wait
Jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank you dears!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
next time i will put a precap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
i bet yashika is angry at me because i wrote the part for this ff but not dosti hain ya......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
Wow Kiran !
At last you started it off !!!!
And , A great start indeed!!!👏
Well , perhaps name it Besharam Lamhe.....😆😆😆
Anyway , coming to the update ,
Love the way she said " such a cheap princi"....😆😆
But can't be cheaper than my DON"s glasses...Kyun Gina?????😉😉
So Charri , a big deal for both of us with this FF , hai na??? GG will for sure agree with me on this....😛😛
Great start Kiran !
Keep it up !
And ya , update jaldi , jaldi.....😉😉
👏
Vidya😊
PS: Yashika , please don't be mad at Kiran....😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidyaa

Wow Kiran !

At last you started it off !!!! (😆😆😆)
And , A great start indeed!!!👏 (so sweet!!!)
Well , perhaps name it Besharam Lamhe.....😆😆😆 (but it's not entirely about that but i'll change it!!)
(maybe i could have a vote)
Anyway , coming to the update ,
Love the way she said " such a cheap princi"....😆😆
But can't be cheaper than my DON"s glasses...Kyun Gina?????😉😉 (😆omg you are too funny)
So Charri , a big deal for both of us with this FF , hai na??? GG will for sure agree with me on this....😛😛
Great start Kiran !
Keep it up !
And ya , update jaldi , jaldi.....😉😉 (okay i will!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
👏
Vidya😊
PS: Yashika , please don't be mad at Kiran....😳😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
oooooooooo...besharam!!!...😳 i luv besharam ff's. i just cant wait till the besharmi in this ff starts. i hope its REALLY REALLY REALLY soon. anyways...wonderful update. it was AWESOME! i cant wait til the next update. plz continue soooooon!!!👏👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks everyone
i know you all like besharm ff's that's why I made it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ishq-E-Dil

Part two

This part is dedicated to Yashika, who's birthday is today, sorry for not writing the part on Friday, I just wanted to surprise Yashika

At the hotel

Vidya: Finally, we are here

Neira: I hope the test gets over with so we can move into the dorm!

(Note: They have to write a test before they can enter the program, they were told at the last minute)

After checking in

They settle in (by this I mean they unpack)

At Sagars P.O.V

Sagar: Oh my got I totally forgot to phone Neira!!! I should phone her before she gets angry!

Calls Neira

Neira: Hello

Sagar: Hey Neira!

Neira: Why did you forget to call this week?

Sagar: Sorry yaar, I call you every week, can't you forgive me now?

Neira: Ok, but to make it up you have to have lunch with me, and to do that you have to come to Canada!

Sagar: You are in Canada!, Cool I am too!, meet me at my hotel, Crystal-blade the one in Mississauga

Neira: Oh, I'm in Crystal-blade too!, but I'm in the one in Toronto

Sagar: Ok, come at 1:00

Neira: Okay, but only for today, tomorrow is the day I start going to college again

Sagar: Bye

Neira: Bye

Hangs up

Vidya: Who was it?

Neira: An old friend, I'm going to meet him

Vidya: Ok bye, have a good time *not noticing it is a boy*

At 12:30 Neira started getting ready she wore a pink halter top with denim jeans

When she saw Sagar, she was memorized, memorized by his abs and muscles that stuck out from his tight shirt

It took some time for her to come back to life, but she finally did

Sagar: Hey *he said while pulling her down-in her chair*

Neira: Hey, you look really nice today

Sagar: You don't look bad yourself

Neira: Shut up!!!

After having their lunch and talking, they went home

Vidya: How was your meeting?

Neira: It was good

Vidya: Who did you meet?

Neira doesn't hear the question and goes in her room to change

After changing

Vidya: Neira could I use your phone, mine is on the charger

Neira: Sure *hands it to Vidya*

Vidya takes it and goes to her room

Vidya: How do you work this phone? Wait I think I got the number in?

???: Hello

Vidya: Could you tell Marni aunty that we won't be coming to Manu's wedding

???: What? Who are you and why do you have Neira's cell

Vidya: How do you know who's cell this is?

???: Caller I.D, duh!

Vidya: So, how do you know her??

???: She's my friend, I met her today

Vidya: What's your name?

Sagar: Sagar, now stop throwing questions at me!

Vidya: Ok

Sagar: Finally

Vidya: Excuse me?

Sagar: What? Huh?

Vidya: Never mind

Sagar: Whatever

Vidya: I have to go, bye

Sagar: Wait!

The line went dead before he could say wait

Vidya's thoughts: What a loser, better not tell Neira, or she will burst her head

Gives phone to Neira

Vidya: Thanks

Neira: Your welcome, I made dinner

Vidya: Let's go

They ate dinner and went to sleep, The next day Vidya woke up and dressed into a baby pink cami with a baby blue knee length skirt. After they both got dressed they left for college to do "the test" to see if they were qualified enough to enter the gifted program

As soon as they were done writing the test, Neira started asking Vidya what would she want her dream husband to be like

Neira: Vidya, please don't tell anyone, but I really like a guy named Sagar

Vidya: Then go tell him

Neira: But I am afraid if he doesn't like me back

Vidya: Just try, ask him

Neira: Maybe later

Vidya's thoughts: I knew she wouldn't call him

Vidya: Well, I'm going shopping, bye

Neira: Bye

At the shopping centre

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Sorry guys I can't do more

But there is going to be a big twist

Not that big

I'll write the next part on Friday

Bye😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
Hey Kiran!! Great update, yaar!!!!👏 Hmmmm, I wonder what the big twist is????.....Keep up the great wrk!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
Hey Kiran !
Wonderful update yet again !👏
Good Job !!
hahaha...The phone conversation was hillarious ....just like one of my Borther and Gina had...😆😆
Fantastic update !!!
Thank you so very much
Thanks a lot
Take Care
Vidya😊

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