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Posted: 16 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Suha_18

Kiran and Yashika...great FF...just finished reading all the udpates...uff...typical Neira...she just had to forget Sharad's name ddn't she?? Hmm...I wonder what's gonna happen when SD meet...please udpate soon!!



Thank you, as I said before you have to wait and see what will happen next😊


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Posted: 16 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: kookie_29



Hi thanks and you'll just have to wait and see what will happen next,it's up to kiran to update the next part😊

Looking forward to the update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
Dosti Hain Ya Aur Kuch
(Part 8)



Sameer and Sharad reach the restaurant


Sameer: Um Sharad, I have to use the washroom you go ahead and find a table for Neira's friend

Sharad: Okay but come back quick!

Sameer: Okay

To Divya

Divya reaches the restaurant...

She goes in she sees a man sitting at a table



Divya: Exuse me is your name Shahid? *she says to to a man*

Man: Yeah that's me, why don't you sit?

Divya: Ok, well I'm Divya, and I came to pick up Neira's project

Man: Oh yes, it's in my car, Could you help me with it?

To Sameer in the washroom

Sameer's phone rings

Sameer: Hello

Neira: Sameer, could you stay there with Shahid and Divya to see if the plan is working?

Sameer: You mean Sharad, not Shahid

Neira: Omg!

Sameer: What?

Neira: I told Divya, the guy's name is Shahid, Who knows who she is talking to right now!

Sameer: Shit, I will go find her

Neira: Not you wait!
Neira tells Sameer the plan-

Sameer goes out of the washroom

He looks out and he sees a man chasing Divya!


Sameer: OMG I should help Divya wait I'll go get Shahid I mean Sharad

He runs to Sharad

Sameer: Sharad, You know the person who you were going to meet right?

Sharad: Yeah

Sameer: Someone is stocking her and she thinks he is Sharad! Go save her, you're are the strong one!

Sharad rushes out the door to see man coming after a woman

The man catches Divya, and tries to kiss her

Divya spots Sharad

Divya: Help me! (looking toward Sharad)

Sharad runs, pulls the man away from Divya and beats him up with Divya behind him


After the man is beaten up

Sharad: Are you ok?

Divya just hugs Sharad and cries in his chest


Sameer spots them and smiles


Sharad pulls away


Sharad: Are you looking for Sharad which is me, but you must be thinking i'm Sharad, well Neira said the wrong name it by accident

Sharad puts his coat around her and goes back in the restaurant with her


Divya: Where is Neira's project?

Sharad: Huh? what project? Sameer told me that Neira wanted her friend to meet me

Sharad spots Sameer

Sharad: Hey Sameer, come here

Sameer goes to them

Sameer: Hey! Divyanka

Divya: Oh you!

Sameer: I have to go to college now, you guys talk

Sameer leaves


Divya is about to leave when Sharad holds her back


Sharad: Please stay, we just met

Divya: Sure *smiles* you saved my life anyways

Sharad: Btw, i'm really sorry about what happened to you

Divya: No it's okay

Sharad: Ok (he understands she doesn't want to talk about it)

They talk for 2 hours and finally Divya says she has to go


Sharad: Umm, could i have a ride because Sameer took the car?

Divya: Sure

Divya: Hey wait aren't you that guy who beat up Sameer?

Sharad: Yeah *ashamed and embarssed*

Divya: Oh, ok, come

Divya and Sharad both come to college

The bell rings for lunch

Divya and Sharad part ways; Sharad went to eat, while Divya stormed to her dorm

Divya turns the knob

Divya sees Neira dancing


Divya: Neira! what yare you doing, you lier

Neria turns around shocked!


Neira: Ow! my l-e--ggggg *tumbles down*

Divya: would you give it up, Why did you lie? *angry*

Neira: Because i wanted you to meet S-

Knock on the door

Divya opens the door

Divya: Hey

Sameer: How are you feeling?

Divya: I'm fine, please come in

Neira: Hey Sameer

Sameer: Hey!

Sameer: Divya didi, would you mind to leave us alone for a few minutes

Divya: Sure, i'm hungry anyway I'll deal with Neira later

Divya leaves


Sameer: Do you know what happened there?

Neira: What?

Sameer tells the whole story


Neira: Omg really I guess the internet is the safest way right now

Sameer: How are you going to get her back on?

Neira: Oh don't worry, that is really easy

Sameer leaves, Neira goes on the laptop, and Divya comes back


Divya: Aren't you hungry?

Neira: No, I ate before

Divya: Oh, what are you doing?

Neira: I'm on the online dating site

Divya's thoughts: OMG, i promised those people I would go on but..., omg they are going to be mad

Divya: Neira: Can I use the computer?

Neira: Not now i'm busy

Divya: Ok, i'll go shopping with Anusha and will come back in a hour, you better be off by then

Neira: K, bye

Divya leaves and Neira calls Sameer


Neira: Sameer does Sharad have an account on the online dating site?

Sameer: Not sure, I'll call you back when i trick him to find out, or I will make him create an account

---Done---

Too bad now you have to wait to see what Neira says back to Sameer or the rest

I hope you like this update and sorry for taking long

From Kiran

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Posted: 16 years ago
#94
Yay...Sharad saved Divya!!! Woooh...go Sharad!! Aww...great upadate Kiran...but I can't believe they talked for 2 hours...jeez..they must have talked about lots of stuff...hehe...and I wonder what Neira is gonna say to Sameer...hmmm...please update soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95
Awesome update Kiran.....do continue soon.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
HEYY KIRAN!!
WOW!! SHARAD SAVED DIVYA!!
GREAT UPDT!!! WHAT NEIRA IS GONNA SAY TO SAMEER?
WILL KNOW NEXT TIME!!
UPDT SOON! TAKE UR TYM!! SEE YAAA!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome update, Cutie Di!!!! Yay, Sharad saved Divya!!! Hmmm, I wonder what Neira'll say to Sameer....Great work and keep it up! I love it!!! Plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Suha_18

Yay...Sharad saved Divya!!! Woooh...go Sharad!! Aww...great upadate Kiran...but I can't believe they talked for 2 hours...jeez..they must have talked about lots of stuff...hehe...and I wonder what Neira is gonna say to Sameer...hmmm...please update soon!!

yeah i was thinking 1 but ya
only one person can decide what Neira will say😆

Originally posted by: Manusha_LuvSD

Awesome update Kiran.....do continue soon.......

thanks, i hope yashy does😉

Originally posted by: _Monu_

HEYY KIRAN!!

WOW!! SHARAD SAVED DIVYA!!
GREAT UPDT!!! WHAT NEIRA IS GONNA SAY TO SAMEER?
WILL KNOW NEXT TIME!!
UPDT SOON! TAKE UR TYM!! SEE YAAA!!

thanks i wonder too!

Originally posted by: sv_4eva

Awesome update, Cutie Di!!!! Yay, Sharad saved Divya!!! Hmmm, I wonder what Neira'll say to Sameer....Great work and keep it up! I love it!!! Plz continue soon!!!

everyone is wondering what she will say! i love your ff too😆


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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
Dosti Hain Ya Aur Kuch

Hello to all of you!! Thanks for commenting and sharing how you feel with us, and I am really sorry that we don't update often, so from now on we will update as fast as we could, will weekly!! And I made this part really long so I hope you enjoy!!

Sameer: Cuts the phone, Sharad!! Tum kaha te?

Sharad: Mein yahoon hon

Sameer: Okay look, do you have a account on the online dating site?

Sharad: Ya I do

Sameer: you do? (Thinking in his head, this might be easier then I thought)

Sharad: No are you mad, why would I when there's million of chicks checking me out right now

Sameer coughs

Sharad: okay fine but I do have one

Sameer: You do, no really

Sharad: Yes baba, but I don't go on it

Sameer: well go on it!!

Sharad: Why?

Sameer: Because there is a girl who wants to talk to you

Sharad: Me?, doesn't everyone?

Sameer: Sharad you are not Mr.india, Is there even such thing?

Sharad: But who is this girl?

Sameer: Divya

Sharad: Divya, she seems nice

Sameer: Ya I know, she is…

Sharad: Okay fine I'll go on but later okay….

Sharad: But wait what about Neira

Sameer: What about her?

Sharad: You tell me….

Sameer: You mean the plan?

Sharad: Ya the plan

Sameer: Well I am going to ask her if she wants to be my girl friend,

I think I'm in love with an angel!!

Sharad: So when are you going to ask?

Sameer: Sooner, or later

Sharad: No you are going to ask her today, tomorrow classes are going to start remember?

Sameer: Okay fine but I want you to be there to guide me

Sharad: No dude, do you want me to be there sitting asking for you?

Sameer: No I want to meet her tonight

Sharad: Okay but where?

Sameer: Over here

Sharad: But what am I supposed to do?

Sameer thinking in his head, oh wait I totally forgot about Neira and my plan

Sameer: Why don't you right now go on the laptop and talk to Divya?

Sharad: No later

Sameer: Please man

Sharad: No

Sameer: Sharad you can't do this she likes you….

Sharad was shocked

Sharad: She likes me, like likes me

Sameer thinking in his mind: Wait what did I just say, I didn't know what to say and it's all Neira's plan I told her I was bad at this. Now I can't tell him Anything else but I have to lie or else he won't go on the site or meet Divya, you know I will just tell Sharad to spend time with her…..

Sameer: Ya she does she like you, in fact she can't stay away, Don't you like her?

Sharad: Well she's pretty and smart but I only meant her today….

Sameer: Well just think about it you know, you don't want to break her heart. Why don't you spend time with her, You go to her dorm tonight and get to know her better…

Sharad: Okay she is really fun, and I'm lucky she likes me

Sameer: Ya you are

Sharad: Okay but wait what about Neira, go now and ask her

Sameer: I will invite her over and tell her all tonight

Phone rings

Sameer: Oh I need to take this call, I will be outside

He Goes outside

Sameer: Hello?

Neira: Hello, Sameer so what happened?

Sameer: Well, things didn't go as planned...

Neira: What do you mean?

Sameer:Well I by mistake told Sharad that well….

Divya likes him

Neira: You what???

Sameer: Sorry I panicked; when I panic I say the wrong things

Neira: Do you know how angry Divya is going to at me if she finds out

Sameer: That's why she's not going to find out

Neira: What do you mean?

Sameer: I got a plan; you tell Divya that Sharad in love with her and tell her he wants to spend time with her and she can't say no or else she will break his heart, tonight I will tell Sharad to go to Divya's room and you Neira set up a table, and then you come to my place and they get to spend time together……

Neira: Okay how on earth am I going to do all of these things by myself?

Sameer: Ask Anusha to help you?

Divya comes in the room

Divya: Hi Neira who are you talking to?

Neira: Umm Sameer I have to go now

Sameer: Umm before you go I want you to come to my dorm at 7:00 same time Sharad is gonna go to your dorm

Neira: Oh okay sure

Neira had no clue what's going to happen

Neira: Oh hi Divya

Divya: Hey

Neira: I need to talk to you right now

Divya: Okay what do you need to talk about?

Neira: Well someone in love with you

Divya was speech less

Neira: Sharad……….

Divya: Sharad, are you sure?

Neira: Yes and he is going to come here tonight at 7:00

Divya: Omg he is?

Neira: What don't you like him?

Divya: Well ya he's nice, sweet and pretty darn hot!! But I don't know

Neira: Well then I will just tell him that Divya doesn't want to see you and his heart will break….

Divya: No nooo, I didn't say that

Neira: Then no buts he is coming

Neira thinking in her head

Neira: How can I do this, I don't want to but this Sameer, but wait why does he want to see me?

Neira: Divya

Divya: Yes

Neira: The same time Sharad's coming here I am going to Sameer's dorm he says he wants to meet me

Divya: He did, omg, this might mean he likes you….

Neira: I don't know…

Divya: This might be real, I am going to dress you up

Neira: Only on one condition, if I make you get ready

Divya: Me, but why me???????(thinking in her head)

At night

Divya and Neira were getting ready

Divya: Why are you dressing me up again? you're the one going not me

Neira: Ohhh just for fun you know (lying)

Divya went out and Neira started getting everything ready she put a table with food and flowes. Divya didn't know because she went to use the washroom. Neira leaves to go to Sameer who wanted to meet her. Sharad leaves to go to Divya's dorm because some how Sameer forced him to take flowers and act like you like her or something.

Sharad knocks on the door, Divya comes from behind him

Divya: Oh hi Sharad there's no one inside

Sharad: Oh Divya

Divya sees the flowers

Divya: (thinking in her mind) Omg Neira wasn't lying he does like me, flowers, wow flowers!!

Sharad: I got these flowers for you (thinking, ya Sameer forced and bribed me to)

Divya: Oh wow there lovely, I will keep them in this vase (she smiles)

Sharad: (thinking in his mind) Wow she does like me, she isn't questioning why I brang flowers, so the bacha wasn't lying

Divya opens the door with her keys and they both go in and are shocked

The room was decorated into a place like a date, a table was there with candles, the lights were turned off…..

Sharad: Wow

Divya: Ya wow!!

Sharad: What do you mean wow didn't you do this….

Divya: No, i didn't, did you?

Sharad: No, well if you didn't and I didn't then who did?

Divya: I have no clue

Sharad: Okay, why just don't we pretend that this is just your room but with a table with candles

Divya: Ya sure

They go in the room

Scene switches

Neira: Sameer where are you taking me?

Sameer: I am going to take you somewhere I can't say right now

Neira: Okay but why?

Sameer: Well I wanted to tell you something

Neira: Okay

They reach their destination

Sameer: Neira now close your eyes or else you will wreck everything

Neira: Okay (closes her eye)

Sameer put a blind fold on her eyes

Neira: What are you doing?

Sameer: Putting blind folds on you, so you won't peek

Sameer walks her somewhere outside

Sameer: Okay now open you eyes

Neira opens her eyes and was shocked she sees a panic with a blanket and flowers and everything

Sameer: So did you like it?

Neira: A picnic, Sameer you did all of this for me?

Sameer: Yes I did, do you like it?

Neira: I do like it, well actually I love it

Sameer: Well what are you waiting for? Let's sit down and eat

After eating

Sameer: Neira I have to tell you something

Neira: Okay but I do too

Sameer: Well I will go first, look the only reason I brought you here is because I wanted to tell you that I am in love with you (blushes a lot)

Sameer: From the first day I saw you, wow that was the day I knew that you were the one (what cheesy lines, okay let's not wreck the cute moment here)

You are like an angel sent from the above, the moment I say you look soo Beautiful, I can tell that your true beauty shines. And when you get into trouble and everything I like that about you, when you talk or do what ever I feel something for you. I just wanted to know if you felt the same way as me…..

Neira was blushes and was looking down, not trying to make any eye contact!! But instead of saying anything she kisses him on the cheek….

Neira: That's the sweetest thing anybody had ever said to me, you know Sameer you make me feel special, when every you're around something happens to me and well that is that well I like you too!! Your different from all the other boys your not a jerk and only looking for one thing in girls…..

Sameer and Neira have a eye lock and then lean in closer and closer and they Kiss (owwwwlalaaaaaaaaa)

Now back to Sharad and Divya

Things were awkward between them they weren't talking that much because they thought the other person liked them and didn't want to say anything.

Divya: Sharad so do you have a girl friend?

Sharad: Oh me no I did before her name was Neha but she well…

Divya: Oh it's okay if you don't want to tell me

Sharad: No it's not that, well she just went out with me cuz of my looks, popularity and money. She wasn't the one for me, she is not the type of girl I want… so what about you?

Divya: Ohh mee well I not dating anybody right now just focusing on my studies, I had a 4 or 5 boyfriends but they were all jerks who only wanted one thing…..

Sharad: It's okay

Divya and Sharad talk even more and more for hours and hours as well as Neira and Sameer. Sharad and Divya totally forget about any awkward silence………

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Sorry everybody that's all I could write this part it's getting really long 7 pages!! Now Kiran will write the next part. And please don't forget to comment and share your feelings thank you.

Sorry everyone, i took long to edit a few reasons

Yashika wrote 7 pages

She made ALOT of mistakes

She KEPT writing Amar instead of Sharad

forgive me once again

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Posted: 16 years ago
Amazing update..........Yashy...so long tooo...u r a great writer...Kiran better continue soon..yea..we will mistake Amar and sharad..lol

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