BA SS: An Evening w/ Bharat & Aditi Last Prt PG 12 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowwwwwwww not just cute...hot, sexy, romantic and yes ur gifted alright.....I wish i cud wright like you gg.....Oh Amar stupid man all u do is cry all day long...C'mon go handle that client and let bharat be alone with the lover of his life.....my poor baby was forced to go....kidher invitin n sedusive wife or kahan one borin client talkin business....
Marvelous job yar...just fantastic!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏 I have one word for this. WOW. That was......amazing. I am in shock after reading this. It's just.......tooooooooooooooo good. GG please share your talent with me....so I can write as good as you.😃
Hey Priya! Thank you Thank you! 😳😳😳 Seems, so far, everyone is enjoying AE w/B❤️A. 😊😳😊
As for sharing ... the only thing I can tell you is read, read, read; and read some more. Anything and everything. That's what I do - you just never know what might inspire a thought, an idea, or even an entire story. Then I just let my imagination take over. 😊😳😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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GG its amazing HOT HOT yaar

im still in ur story lemme get out of it...........uffffffff
LOVED it
hey dear u should have put an note in the beggining for us to warn hehe
Mindblowing
Awwww ... thanks so much Khakshan! 😊😳😊
Hmmmm ... sumfin like ............ *~*Cold Cloth Alert*~* L😉L

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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW GG YAAR!! BRILLIANT!!! How can someone right soo well???? You are just too GOOD!!! Wonderful!!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was totally awesome, GG!!! I can't wait for the evening now and besides Aditi, I will be thinking of Bharat all day!! LOL!!!!

Beautifully described scenes!! Totally speechless! I need to recover now!
Please pretty pweese continue soon.....Also can you please post parts 2 and 3 together, so we are not kept hanging? LOL!!! JK!!
Loved it, GG!!⭐️
Hey Rama! Thank you so, so much - happy you enjoyed! 😳😊😳
Well, not sure Parts Two and Three are quite ready to make their debut as twins. But, I have already started working on both; in bits and pieces. So I kind hafta sort things out a first. Dat's a "lefty" brain for ya! Well, actually, it's probably jes a gg~ "lefty" brain thing! L😳L
Besides, a bit of suspense & anticipation isn't always a bad thing ... 😈

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowwwwwwww not just cute...hot, sexy, romantic and yes ur gifted alright.....I wish i cud wright like you gg.....Oh Amar stupid man all u do is cry all day long...C'mon go handle that client and let bharat be alone with the lover of his life.....my poor baby was forced to go....kidher invitin n sedusive wife or kahan one borin client talkin business....

Marvelous job yar...just fantastic!!!!!
Thanks so much Noshi! 😳😊😳
Aww ... don't be mad at Amar ...he'll do his good deed ... wait and see! 😉
I had never written any fiction before GC. So all you need is an idea .... then run with it! That's what I did. You'll be surprised what happens - you just need to start. 😊😳😊 And dat's all da advice I gots to give - promise! 😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
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GG, that was a surprise.
OMG!! i am speechless again😳.I need to regain my composure after reading this. I had a big smile thru out reading this😳.Aditi from BMTD shud read this to see what she is missing out on everytime she runs away from bharat's kiss😆.
Thanks for entertaining us. You are so amazingly talented gg, How do you do that again & again?


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Posted: 16 years ago
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ANother lovely work,,,,

But uuuggghh phone call in midstof romance wonderful, job!!!!!!
Really loved it!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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gg di, i m speechless!!!! my god, it was soo romantic, hot, sweet, passionate,etc!!!!! it was soo passionate di.....................uff!!!!!

can't wait for bharat to come home😳😉 why couldnt that Mr patel come later huh!!!! but di, you are soo good yaar!!!! loved loved loved loved loved loved loved it!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Just trying my luck!! The last time I posted asking for an update, you posted in 15 minutes!!! LOL!!! Update soon, please???

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