BA SS: An Evening w/ Bharat & Aditi Last Prt PG 12 - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG!!! I can not comment now!! when i will start breathing and come to my senses... i will update...

Hey Smita! Glad you enjoyed. Hope you've recovered. <grin>
Hmmm ... maybe I need to add smelling salts to the items I need to keep available for readers. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG GG!!!! I need a ice cold shower now😳I held my breath as i read it.
Really not in a state to comment...later

Hey Priya - can't wait to read your comments. Glad you liked it. 😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG....GG i think you'll kill us all....with holding our breath.....πŸ˜‰ ACK! now that won't do - can't harm the readers, who'll want to read my SS/FF's if that happens ... LπŸ˜‰L

it was mindblowing.........aditi was wonderful...and bharat..ooooooohhhhh...it was too good yaar!!!!πŸ€— Thank you so much Emmy! So happy you liked it. And, that you didn't get bored with the length of it. It sort of rambled on and on. 😳😳😳
plzzzzzzzzzzzz GG dont make this the last part...... wellllll ... I really hadn't planned for any more than this Emmy. It was only supposed to be just "an evening", and no more. Besides, I need to get back to GC - otherwise those stale donuts are gonna become rocks! πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

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Posted: 16 years ago

Wow, GG!! This is outstanding, mindblowing and fantabulous!!!

Thank you so much Rama! I am really happy you liked it! 😳
I had to wait for a bit to catch my breath.....I like this bold audacious Aditi!!!
I think I have "bold" Aditi down - now I need to practice "shy" Aditi ... tho' I don't seem to be too good at that. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
What a surprise Bharat was in for!!
Heh! Good for him to be caught unawares by his patni occasionally, doncha think? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰
Your attention to details is just amazing!!! I love the way you write - unfortunately for BA, I felt I was in the room with them!! LOL!!!
Wellll ... hmmm ... I think I am jes gonna say thank you, an dat's all! πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜³
I am so glad ur PC problems are done with!!!
Me too ... sent up special thanks to the pc gods for taking pity. πŸ˜‰
Thank you!!!
You're welcome Rama. Thank you for enjoying my version of B❀️A. 😊
Have a fantastic Sunday! You too!! 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
Snack???????????
I need my whole meal GG !!
I'm still reading it , you need to my dear perfectionist!
Ufffffffffffffffffffffff..............
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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG!!!!!! Glad you enjoyed it Pooja! 😊😳😊
Am going to take a long cold shower.......the cold-cloths didn't help.....ur writing warmed them dry.......

L😳L Pooja! Hope you are feeling recovered after the shower. πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 16 years ago

A very Goodmorning jaanu,

You have stolen my heart with this beautiful BA SS !!! I'm speechless dear...it was so so beautiful...amzing..awesome !!! More than perfect !!!This part is full of magic...
The way you describe the details about everything is just awesome...so good..I just can see it in front of me. You are such a wonderful writer...the way you write your beautiful ss's is just amazing.
Bharat and Aditi are simply outstanding !!! I really loved it.
This last part has really touched my heart...and I'm totally fida on it.
Thanks for making my Sunday so beautiful...It was a beautiful long update. I also want to thank you that you make time free to write this wonderful ss for us all...you are such a great, warm and very sweet person
Wish you all the best and luck in life dear
Hamesha khush rehna aur apna khayal rakhna
Have a wonderful Sunday jaanu πŸ€—
Aapki dost Reena
Awww😳😳😳wwww .. thank you so much Reena! Nothing like a bit of masala with your morning cuppa, eh? <grin>

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Posted: 16 years ago

omg loved it loved it loved it! πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› was so wonderful honestly i cant describe it really admire your patience in writing so much and with such detail I could truly visualise every moment πŸ‘

and what suspense...
loved the way aditi behaved and bharat reacted πŸ˜‰
and so romantic too, even though it was so full of masala, you still got across how devoted they were to each other 😍
wonderful SS cant wait 2 read more by you about BA - absolutely besotted! 😍 πŸ˜› 😊
Oh my! My face is tomato red now for sure! Thank you so much TJ! Seriously, so happy you enjoyed it so much! 😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG!!!! THAT WAS AMAZING GG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What and ending!!!! Omg...toooooo good!!! OOH NO!! Does that mean this is the last update to your FF??????????? NOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

that was so sweet yaar plz continue soon i just loved it

Hey Mariyum! Thank you - happy you liked it. 😊😳😊
Oh, sorry, this was the end of the SS. I hadn't planned to write more than a three parter. Tho' it probably coulda been four, the way I rambled on at the end. L😳L!

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