(FF) Meri Jaan - Update page 51 - 14.06.09

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#121

Update's gonna come , yippeeeeeeeeeee.........

Vidya😛

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-CharriMango-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#122

^^ I'm not sure if you will like the update...

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: charri7878
^^ I'm not sure if you will like the update...

Oh my god , I had nearly an attack now , I just read " I'm not sure" , and I thought ki ur not sure u'll update or not...Ufff..

well dont u worry abt that , we'll take care of that part..😉

Vidya😊

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-CharriMango-

@-CharriMango-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#124

Hello! I'm back with a fresh update! I know it's boring so have a cup of coffee beside you so when you are about to sleep, take a sip of it😛
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Part 8, Where?

-Aditya's POV-

I was lying in my bed and thinking of what happened between me and Deepika. I recalled when I lowered my face and our lips locked with each other. I couldn't resist it. Her lips looked so incredible soft. I don't know what got in to me. I turned to the other side. I took my mobile from my side table. A picture of me, Gaurav, Tara and Deepika. I used that picture as background. I was thinking about when we took the picture. It was in the South Hall Park. That was the biggest park here in New York. I smiled as I recalled that day. I lay my mobile on the table and went to sleep.

Next morning I was eating breakfast with my family. "Bhaiya, remember to take Babhi to check-up today. She has appointment 1.45pm today," I said. "Arre wah, you remember it?" asked my brother. I smiled and looked down. "Laghta hai, he wants to know how the baby is," said Sanjana. We all laughed and ate. After eating I took my bag and keys and went to my car.

"Good Morning everyone," I greeted. They said good morning aswell. I walked into my office and layed my bag there and plopped on my seat. "Damn it! We were going to work over there today..." I remembered. We worked sometimes at my office and sometimes at Deepika's office. I took my file, mobile and keys and ran towards my car. On my way I got stopped of my dad. "Beta, have you seen Gaurav?" he asked me. "Mmm, no. I haven't seen him. Maybe he is at Singh Industries already." I said. He smiled and said goodbye. I said goodbye to and ran to my car.

"Uff, am I late?" I said tired of running in. "Hehe, 15min late," Tara laughed. I looked around in the room. "Tara?" I said worried. "Yes, what is it?" she said. "Where's Gaurav and Deepika?" I asked. It was only me and Tara in the office. "Varun has gone to get coffee from 2nd floor and Deepika, I don't know. I've tried to call her since morning but her mobile is shut off" she said worried. "What? You haven't seen her?" I asked shocked. I recalled the kiss. Maybe she didn't like the kiss? Maybe she thought I meant something? Omg... what have I done? Tears welled up in my eyes. Without saying anything I ran out to my car and drove to Deepika's house. I parked the car and ran to the door. I knocked on it and her mother opened. "Arre Beta, tum yaha?" she said surprised. "Aunty, is Deepika here?" I asked worried. "Mmm, no. She hasn't been home since morning. Isn't she at work?" she asked. I started thinking of where she could be. My heart started to beat faster and I got more worried. "No Aunty, she hasn't been at office and her mobile is shut off. I'll looked for here around here," I said. "Ok beta, take care" she said. I said goodbye and started to drive.

I drove from one place ot another. I called up Tara and asked her is she could call Deepika's friends and asked them is they had seen her. She had called and they said no. All 3 of us were worried. I had told them to stay in office. First they didn't agree but at last they agreed and stayed there. I stopped the car and sat there thinking of where she could be. Tears were rolling down my face. I banged my head on the stearing wheel. It hurt. Where can she be? Where? Where? Where? I banged my head once more. Then I remembered something. What if she is on the Hill? My face lightened up and I started my care again and took a U-turn.

"Deepika?" I said. She sat there on the bench, all alone.
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Edited by charri7878 - 16 years ago

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#125

Hey Charri ,

Loved the update yaar.

But , ye Aditya itna rota kyun hain???😛😛

well , jo bhi ho , he's toooo cute...😳

Badi mast jaga laal jhanda dikha diya yaar,,,😛

Chalo I'll wait for the next update.

Loveeeddd the update~

Thanks for the update!

Fantastic job done as usual !

Your Doofy😊

Edited by Vidyaa - 16 years ago

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Reena

@jaanlover

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#126

I really loved it

Awesome...amazing !!! Keep it up with your wonderful work

It was simply outstanding

Pease continue soon when you have some time

With love

Reena

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#127

Hey Charri !

Aww what a cute update .. You ended it in such a exiting moment. Haiiii, when are u updating again? 😆

Luved the update, update soon again !

luv,
gina <3