FF: Pyaar Hua! pt 24 pg72 6/23+NOTE pg 68 - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY HUNZ! I AM SOOOOOOOOOO SORRY THAT I DIDN'T UPDATE YESTERDAY! SO NOW, YOU GUYS HAVE TO THINK ABOUT A PUNISHMENT FOR ME! I SHOULDN'T HAVE MADE A PROMISE KNOWING THAT I PROBABLY COULDN'T FULFILL IT! SOO SORRY! BYE! LUV YA! AND QUICKLY THINK OF MY PUNISHMENT CAUSE I DESERVE IT. I MEAN COME ON, IT'S MY 1st FF AND I LET MY AUDIENCES DOWN! SOOOOOOORRRY! 😔
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
Ok !
Please Update Soon !
Now your punishment will be to update soooon !!!
Its ok yaar , We are not that cruel to just throw you out because you didnt update ..
Ofcourse you had some work .... So its perfectly fine ...
You'll never let s down in anyway !
Continue soon !
Vidya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Vidyaa

Ok !

Please Update Soon !
Now your punishment will be to update soooon !!!
Its ok yaar , We are not that cruel to just throw you out because you didnt update ..
Ofcourse you had some work .... So its perfectly fine ...
You'll never let s down in anyway !
Continue soon !
Vidya

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Thanks! Will update soon! Bye! Luv ya! 😊 Yay! I feel soooooooooo happy to know that! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94
UPDATE....more than once TODAY lol thats your punishment
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its okay!!

hmmm, punishment- how bout 1000 pushups?!?, nah, all ya have to do is update, we'll go easy on you cuz its only the first time!! lol!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
Thanks guys! I will definately update today! But, it won't be that long! To make up for that, I will try to write 2 huge updates on the the weekend! Okay! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97

Hello my bffs! Sorry I didn't update yesterday or the day before that! I got caught up with some work! So, here's the next update! I promise that on the weekend, I'll make the updates wicked long! Thik hai!

S: Okay!----- Smiles while looking down.

Sagar then goes to take a bath. He comes out with a towel around his waist and his hair which is wet.-----Basically, he is looking really hot! Hahahaha

Knock! Knock!-----Vidya knocks on the door.

S: Kaun hai?

V: Jee, Vidya!

Sagar smiles really wide and quickly gets dressed. He opens the door while carefully trying to dry his hair since he doesn't want to touch his wound on the head.

As soon as Vidya sees Sagar, she freezes because he's looking sooooooo cute. Sagar notices this and smiles sheepishly. He waves his hand trying to get Vidya to awaken from her daydream. Vidya realizes what she was doing and tries to make up an excuse by saying'''

V: Whooww, ummhm'.I was actually looking at your head. Looks like you need help drying it because of the injury.

Sagar knows that Vidya isn't telling the truth. He smiles again and says''..

S: Oh, that! Yeah, just trying to be careful so I don't touch it! ----keeps on trying not to touch his injury, but isn't very successful. Then, Vidya says'''

V: Ummmmm! Do you mind if I help you with it since it's kinda hard for you?

S: Sure!

Vidya smiles and takes the towel out of his hands and tells him to sit on the bed. Sagar does as he is told. Vidya stands in front of him and then carefully tries to dry his hair. Sometimes, she sticks out her tongue a little bit -----you know, for accuracy. Sagar just stares at her as she dries his hair. Vidya notices this but tries to avoid eye contact. Then, her cheeks start getting red because she's shy. Sagar sees this and smiles while looking down. He then stops staring at her since he can clearly see that she's somewhat uncomfortable. Vidya finishes drying Sagar's hair and says....

V: There you go! Where's the medicine that you need to apply on your wound?

S: On the table.---Vidya then goes and gets the medicine and bandage. She starts applying the medicine to Sagar's head and then bandages it!

S: Thanks!

V: You're welcome! I'll go now!----she turns around when Sagar calls out to her.

S: Vidya!

Vidya smiles and turns around.

V: Yeah?

S: Did you want to tell me something?

V: Oh yah! Dinner's ready!

S: Oh! Okay! Let's go!

Vidya and Sagar then go downstairs while Sagar tells Vidya a joke. Vidya giggles in a cute way and then trips over something. As she is about to fall, Sagar grabs her. Vidya's eyes are closed so she slowly opens one eye and sees that she didn't fall down. She then realizes that Sagar is holding onto her. They both look at each other. Vidya looks down and tries to get out of Sagar's arms. Sagar realizes the situation and then helps her stand.

V: Thanks!----looks down again!

S: No problem!

V: The kitchen's right there!

They both walk into the kitchen and see Shalu, Riya, and Chinu already there.

Sh: Hey di! What took ya so long?

V: Whoooooow'I was helping Sagar with his bandage.

Riya smiles and then teasingly says...Ohhhhhhhhhhh! So you were helping Sagar with his bandage.

V: Chup kar! Kuch bhi bolti hai!

Sh: Thik hai! Thik hai! Khana tyyar hai!

V: Well, we three usually sit down on wooden mats and eat. If you want, we can sit on the table.

Ch: It's alright! We'll sit down!

V: Okay!

She layed 2 more mats on the ground. Chinu and Sagar then sit on them. In front of all of the mats are small tables.

Shalu, Vidya, and Riya started to serve them.

Vidya was about to serve Sagar some daal when he said no. She realized that Sagar was somewhat shu so she smiled and still gave him some daal and left. Sagar smiles and starts to eat. Then, the girls start eating also. Later, Sagar makes a Ummmmmmmmm sound showing that he loves the food.

S: Kitna acha khana hai!

Sh: Thank you but the credit goes to di! She made most of the food.

Vidya smiles and says'..

V: Why should I get all of the credit? You guys also made food.

Ri: Yeah, but not as good as yours.

Vidya shakes her head and goes back to eating.

Sh: Chinu-ji, aap toh kuch nahi karahey hai!

Ch: Nahi, ab toh main bohut full hoon! Mera pait phat (tear) jayenga.

Sometime later:

Everyone finishes and then go in the living room while Shalu and Riya stay back with Vidya to help her clean. A few minutes later, Shalu, Vidya, and Riya come out of the kitchen. They sit on the sofa opposite of Sagar and Chinu's sofa. Everything's quiet so Chinu says''

Ch: Arrey, why is everyone so quiet?

Ri: Kuch bolne koh nahi hai! Lekin, app kya suna chahate hai?

Ch: I dunno!

Just then, Riya gets an idea and suggests'..

Ri: Hey! Let's hear Shalu sing a song!

Sh: What! No way! I can't sing! Make Riya sing!----Everyone looks at Riya

Ri: Don't look at me! Make di sing! She's a way better singer than us!

Sh: Yeah di! Sing a song!

V: Are you kidding me? I can't'.my throat really hurts----tryign to make an excuse.

Ri: Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee di! Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please! PREETY PLEASE!

V: NO!

S: Vidya, please sing for us! You're older than Shalu and Riya na! Shouldn't you fulfill their wishes?

V: BUT!---

S: No buts! You're singing for us and that's that!

V: Fine! What do I have to sing?

Ri: How about Jhoom Barabar Jhoom?

Sh: Or Jiya Dhadak Dhakak Jaye?

S: No! I convinced her so I get to choose what she has to sing! I want you to sing Pehla Nasha!

But nobody agrees with him so they start arguing!

Ch: Stop! Let's write down our songs on separates pieces of paper and make Vidya choose one without looking! And she will have to sing that! Okay?

Everyone: Okay!

They do that and Vidya picks out a paper!

V: It says Pehla Nasha!

S: Yay! I won! Hahahahaha

V: Fine! But, who will sing the part for the man?

Ch: Sagar will! He's a great singer!

S: Really? Cool! I'll sing then!

Ri: And we all have to dance to it!

Sh: Okie doks!

Chaahe tum kuchh na kaho maine sun liya. Ki saathi pyaar ka mujhe chun liya.
Chun liya. Maine Sun liya
Pehla nasha. Pehla khumaar.
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar.
Kar loon main kya apna haal. Aye dil-e-bekaraar.
Mere dil-e-bekaraar. Tu hi bata P
ehla nasha. Pehla khumaar
Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin.
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin.
Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin.
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin.
Ek kar doon aasmaan zameen.
Kaho yaaron kya karoon kya nahin .
Pehla nasha. Pehla khumaar.
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar. Kar loon main kya apna haal.
Aye dil-e-bekaraar. Mere dil-e-bekaraar Tu hi bata.
Pehla nasha. Pehla khumaar
Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se.
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke.
Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se.
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke.
Reh jaoon jaise main haar ke.
Aur choome vo mujhe pyaar se.
(The lyrics in black is when SV both sing)
Pehla nasha Pehla khumaar.
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar.
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar. Mere dil-e-bekaraar------At this point SV look at each other and smile.
Edited by svforever - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
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oh lala...loved it. continue soon that was really really gooood😛
Edited by mushtari - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
that was so cute and romantic..............love it i want to see what happens after the singing..................update sooon.................
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bthind

that was so cute and romantic..............love it i want to see what happens after the singing..................update sooon.................

Thanks Navi! I can't update today! Sorry! Have to finish homework! I started on this update as soon as I got home from school! So now, it's homework time! Bye! Luv ya! 😊

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