Hey guys and dolls,
Lets give the uncreative creatives some ideas on how to end this Creepy cheapy Gauri track. Maybe they cannot find a nice way to end it so are prolonging it. I know some of you FF writers have fantastic ideas. So lets give them some....
Heres mine
Its the night before KC and Gauri comes to ask A what he wants to eat for Breakfast. A tells her tht he won't eat as he will be fasting ( remember he fasts with D on KC). Gauri remembers its KC and thinks he is keeping it to give her company. She starts to do her preparations for KC. Evil eyes bhabhi sees this and gets very very angry. She goes and instigates the blue mom against Gauri and tells her how can she keep a fast for this man who is already married and who should be with his wife. She tells blue mom to samjaho DAD to tell the truth or else some thing bad will happen as none of the post death rituals for shivam have been done, Blue mom gets angry and tells Gauri that she should not keep the KC fast. When G asks why,blue mom yells at her that this man is not Shivam. G gets shocked and then runs to A room and asks him if he is Shivam, A does not answer her and she realizes the truth. She then asks everyone where Shivam is and evil eyes bhabhi tells her he died in a car accident by Amar. Then G goes with a knife to kill Amar and the DAD comes in the way and gets knifed. The he tells her the truth. Amar rushes him to the hospital and he is saved. Then he thanks Amar for helping him and tells him to go home to his wife who must be waiting for him. On the way out of the hospital he meets G and says sorry to her.
The he drives at super fast speed to Delhi.
Divz has been waiting for him and its late night and she is still waiiting for him on the terrace. A reaches and calls out to her. Mahua meets him in the hall and tells him D is waiting for him on the terrace.
He runs up and sees Divz crying. He runs to her and hugs her close and tells her he loves her so much and has missed her so so much . She says the same things to him. Then they complete the KC.
Now its your turn guys...
I bet you can come up with a much better story than mine.... so try it.
Edited by gr8love - 16 years ago