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Hi everyone !
I've been wanting to write a FF, but never had time. But now I do, so I'm gonna write one. Sorry if I'm annoying y'all, I know there's alot of FF:s but I hope you will give it a chance and read it. Hopefully y'all will like it ! Smile
I don't want to have any spoiler predictions, so I won't write any deep description of the main characters the first part. I want you all to have some excitement when you read it, and don't know much before. The first part is extra long, so don't get bored lolz. So here i start:
Introduction: This story takes place in the big jalebi, Delhi year 2008. The time is 7 o'clock in the morning and we hear an alarm clock ring : BRRRRRR
A girl wakes up. She has shouldered long black hair. We don't see her face though. She gets up and goes to the bathroom. After that she puts her clothes on: a knee longed turquoise skirt with a white top. With the clothes she chooses to wear a 3 inch high heel shoes on, and goes to the mirror. From 7.20 to 8 o clock, the girl is in front of the mirror, putting make-up on. At 8 o'clock the alarm bell rings one more time: BRRR
The girl shouts: Priyaaaa, wake up!
Up rises a girl, with a smile in her face. The song hum to jaise hain from Veer-Zaara is playing in the background. She has long hair. The girl opens her eyes and we see it's our own Divyanka. She looks at her clock.
- OH FISH ! she says loudly
She rises up quickly, goes to the bathroom, then comes out. She doesn't know what to wear, and just grabs whatever is in the closet. A pair of jeans and a white striped shirt. She combs her hair hurriedly, grabs a hair crunchy and then goes to door. She sees her sister is already there, with a smile on her face.
- Madhu I...Priya says
- Overslept? I know, but you better hurry, or else you'll be late for school! You have 10 minutes. Madhu says
-But I haven't even...
- Here's a banana, and here's your bag. Go, go, go!
Priya runs out from her house, and walks fastly to her college. Luckily it's nearby. All the way she was thinking about how this could happen? She was never late!
15 minutes later, Priya was in her college outside her classroom. She didn't see anyone else.
-Ayy rabba, yeh kya hogaya? she said to herself
-Priya? someone said
She turned and saw her teacher Mrs.Sharma
-Mrs Sharma! I'm so glad i found you. I am soooo sorry, I apparently overslept myself. I'm sorry, It won't happen again...
-Liken Priya tum to ...
-I don't know what happened, my alarm clock.. I was so sure.. I'm sorry, It won't happen again I..
Mrs Sharma giggled.
-Priya take a deep breath. You're not late.
-What? I'm not? But..
-Actually you're early. 30 minutes early to be exact. That was why I was chocked to see you. I know you usually come 15 minutes early, but not this early.
-But my alarm clock, it ..
-I don't know what has happened, but check your calender.
-Check my calender? Priya took her calender out from her bag. What did Mrs. Sharma mean? It's just an ordinary monday, monday the 1st april...
She understood everything now. She felt something vibrating in her bag. It was her cell-phone. She got a sms from Madhu: My dear bewakoof sister. I told you naa, someday i'd fool u. Haha Who's miss smartypants now? love Madz
Priya started laughing. Then she took a deep breath, and sat down on a bench. She braided her hair, as always, and started to eat her banana.
-BUUU someone came from behind and scared Priya. It was Madhu
-AHHH
-Haha twice on the same day. So how does it feel to be not so organized and perfect?
- You should be ashamed of yourself Madhu. Fooling your older dii like that. But it was funny, i must admit. But I'm just happy I wasn't late like..
-Normal people lol.
-No, normal people come on time. Careless people come late. Like the boys in my class. They are sooo...
-Cute!
-Madhu. Is that all you think about? Boys, clothes and make-up? There are other things in life you know. And the boys in my class are stupid.
-No, my dear older dii. You are stupid. Do you know how lucky you are? The hottest guys in college goes in your class. Teri prem kumar waha hai!
- Aur wo premi kaun hai?
- Pichee deko!
Now we see a guy stepping out from a red cabriolet. We don't see his face. In the background the song bachna ae haseeno is playing. The guy is tall, has dark hair. He's wearing jeans and a white shirt. He looks very stilish. The wind is blowing, and he turns. It's our very own Sharad!
People, guys and boys are whispering and saying: There's Prem!
Promo for part 2: Mrs.Sharma says something and both Priya and Prem are thinking loudly: You got to be kidding with me!
I know the first part was very long, but it's the first part, so it's extra special and long.
So what did you all think? Please leave comments. Good/Bad. If you want me to continue. And critics, or improvements i need to do? 😊
Thanks // theflyingdonkey
I've been wanting to write a FF, but never had time. But now I do, so I'm gonna write one. Sorry if I'm annoying y'all, I know there's alot of FF:s but I hope you will give it a chance and read it. Hopefully y'all will like it ! Smile
I don't want to have any spoiler predictions, so I won't write any deep description of the main characters the first part. I want you all to have some excitement when you read it, and don't know much before. The first part is extra long, so don't get bored lolz. So here i start:
Introduction: This story takes place in the big jalebi, Delhi year 2008. The time is 7 o'clock in the morning and we hear an alarm clock ring : BRRRRRR
A girl wakes up. She has shouldered long black hair. We don't see her face though. She gets up and goes to the bathroom. After that she puts her clothes on: a knee longed turquoise skirt with a white top. With the clothes she chooses to wear a 3 inch high heel shoes on, and goes to the mirror. From 7.20 to 8 o clock, the girl is in front of the mirror, putting make-up on. At 8 o'clock the alarm bell rings one more time: BRRR
The girl shouts: Priyaaaa, wake up!
Up rises a girl, with a smile in her face. The song hum to jaise hain from Veer-Zaara is playing in the background. She has long hair. The girl opens her eyes and we see it's our own Divyanka. She looks at her clock.
- OH FISH ! she says loudly
She rises up quickly, goes to the bathroom, then comes out. She doesn't know what to wear, and just grabs whatever is in the closet. A pair of jeans and a white striped shirt. She combs her hair hurriedly, grabs a hair crunchy and then goes to door. She sees her sister is already there, with a smile on her face.
- Madhu I...Priya says
- Overslept? I know, but you better hurry, or else you'll be late for school! You have 10 minutes. Madhu says
-But I haven't even...
- Here's a banana, and here's your bag. Go, go, go!
Priya runs out from her house, and walks fastly to her college. Luckily it's nearby. All the way she was thinking about how this could happen? She was never late!
15 minutes later, Priya was in her college outside her classroom. She didn't see anyone else.
-Ayy rabba, yeh kya hogaya? she said to herself
-Priya? someone said
She turned and saw her teacher Mrs.Sharma
-Mrs Sharma! I'm so glad i found you. I am soooo sorry, I apparently overslept myself. I'm sorry, It won't happen again...
-Liken Priya tum to ...
-I don't know what happened, my alarm clock.. I was so sure.. I'm sorry, It won't happen again I..
Mrs Sharma giggled.
-Priya take a deep breath. You're not late.
-What? I'm not? But..
-Actually you're early. 30 minutes early to be exact. That was why I was chocked to see you. I know you usually come 15 minutes early, but not this early.
-But my alarm clock, it ..
-I don't know what has happened, but check your calender.
-Check my calender? Priya took her calender out from her bag. What did Mrs. Sharma mean? It's just an ordinary monday, monday the 1st april...
She understood everything now. She felt something vibrating in her bag. It was her cell-phone. She got a sms from Madhu: My dear bewakoof sister. I told you naa, someday i'd fool u. Haha Who's miss smartypants now? love Madz
Priya started laughing. Then she took a deep breath, and sat down on a bench. She braided her hair, as always, and started to eat her banana.
-BUUU someone came from behind and scared Priya. It was Madhu
-AHHH
-Haha twice on the same day. So how does it feel to be not so organized and perfect?
- You should be ashamed of yourself Madhu. Fooling your older dii like that. But it was funny, i must admit. But I'm just happy I wasn't late like..
-Normal people lol.
-No, normal people come on time. Careless people come late. Like the boys in my class. They are sooo...
-Cute!
-Madhu. Is that all you think about? Boys, clothes and make-up? There are other things in life you know. And the boys in my class are stupid.
-No, my dear older dii. You are stupid. Do you know how lucky you are? The hottest guys in college goes in your class. Teri prem kumar waha hai!
- Aur wo premi kaun hai?
- Pichee deko!
Now we see a guy stepping out from a red cabriolet. We don't see his face. In the background the song bachna ae haseeno is playing. The guy is tall, has dark hair. He's wearing jeans and a white shirt. He looks very stilish. The wind is blowing, and he turns. It's our very own Sharad!
People, guys and boys are whispering and saying: There's Prem!
Promo for part 2: Mrs.Sharma says something and both Priya and Prem are thinking loudly: You got to be kidding with me!
I know the first part was very long, but it's the first part, so it's extra special and long.
So what did you all think? Please leave comments. Good/Bad. If you want me to continue. And critics, or improvements i need to do? 😊
Thanks // theflyingdonkey
