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Posted: 17 years ago

Mushi- AWw hun don't cry...and Thanks! Alia is sweet but not as sweet as Divya... You'll see how she cares 4 Divya as well....

Ramsha- Thanks hun! Yep Amar is the sweetest.

Ravjot- Aww sorry i kept you waiting. lol why is everyone crying? don't cry...ull cry more next update...thanks!

Ashu!/ Ayesha- Thanks hun! Do i get sad when u hurt sv...no right? lol...so i can drift ad apart a little right? lol.. Alia's not bad..not to worry...thanks once again!

Sonali- Thanks!

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Posted: 17 years ago
Divya and Alia are so sweet. Alia is really nice. Divya is just wow. She's wonderful but i feel bad for her because I think she has feelings for him.
I think Amar and Alia might get back together and that's when he'll realize his true love for Divya. I don't know..im just guessing.
Loved the update!
Continue when you have the time.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
*sniff*
Divya is such an angel... I love her<3
But please Amar don't go with Alia!
You life and everything is Divya and only DIVYA!
Cont soon!
Love Charri<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
Poor Divya............😭
Hope she gets Amar once again into her life..............
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Posted: 17 years ago

Kalee- Yep Divya is sweet. You'll find out if Divya has feelins 4 amar no worries...and hmm interesting guess..let's see what happens.. Thanks!

Irika- Thanks!

Cherry Berry- Yea my Divya is an angel. Amar not go with Alia??? Think agian...muhahahahaha...how do you know his life is Divya? lol...just w8 and see..

lexie- Thanks!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 8:

It is morning time. Amar is still sleeping. Divya is lying in the bed looking at the ceiling. She keeps repeating her conversation with Alia and then the words of the manager run through her head. "Sach mein you are an angel…I hope ke tume tumhara pyar bi mile…" Divya sighed. All of a sudden Amar's phone began ringing. Both of them sat up startled. Amar rubbed his eyes. Divya found that cute. He answered his phone.

Amar: Oh hey Sonia!

Sonia: Happy birthday Amar!

Amar: Thanks!

Sonia: Here mom and dad want to wish you too. Sonia hands her parents the phone and they wish them too. Amar shuts the phone down and places it on the table. He lays his head back on the sofa.

Divya: Who called? Amar looks at her.

Amar: My parents and Sonia to wish me happy birthday.

Divya: It's your birthday? Amar nods.

Divya: Oh happy birthday. Amar smiles.

Amar: Thanks.

Divya: Do you want to do anything special today?

Amar: Yea! Stay in bed.

Divya: Why? It's a special day for you.

Amar: Yea not really. Ever since the incident nothing is special to me anymore. Divya's smile fades but then comes back after realizing her plan.

Divya: Ok then as you wish. She gets out of bed and heads for the shower. As she is passing by Amar her bracelet gets entangled in Amar's chain bracelet. Divya steps back as Amar sits up. Amar began roughly taking it out but Divya stopped him. She then gently takes it out.

Amar: Divya why is this bracelet so special to you?

Divya: Because someone special gave it to me. She smiled as she stepped back.

Amar: Who?

Divya: Someone… She walked to the bathroom and Amar yelled from behind.

Amar: Are you trying to make me jealous? Divya turned around.

Divya: Now why would I do that when there is obviously nothing between us.

Amar: Good point. Divya turned around and proceeded back into the bathroom. Amar got out of his sofa bed and folded the blankets and put everything back. He also folded Divya's blanket. Divya came out of the bathroom dressed in a red shalwar kameez. Amar went to the bathroom after her. Divya quickly picked up the hotel phone and called Alia.

Divya: Hey! It's me Divya.

Alia: Oh hey! What's up? How's Amar?

Divya: He's fine. Just wanted to tell you Amar really doesn't care where I go so if you want I'll go shopping with you to get you your saree and stuff.

Alia: Oh really that's great! You see I myself am not a saree expert. Divya laughed.

Divya: Ok then…I'll come by your house as soon as I can.

Alia: I'll be waiting. Oh and Divya do you know anything to get rid of bags under your eyes.

Divya: Yea why?

Alia: Umm because I was so excited that I couldn't sleep at all last night. Divya smiled.

Divya: I figured. Put two cucumbers on your eyes for a little while. That should do the trick. .

Alia: Thanks!

Divya: No problem… I'll see you in a while.

Alia: Ok. She shuts the phone and Amar comes out.

Amar: I'll order breakfast. Divya nods.

Later at night: Amar is sitting in bed while Divya nervously plays with the ends of her duppatta. She gives up and sighs.

Divya: Hey Amar?Amar looks at her.

Amar: yea? She goes to get something and comes back. She hands him the bag.

Amar: What's this?

Divya: Woh kya hai na today's your birthday so I went out and bought you this. He smiled and opened the bag to find a suit in it.

Amar: Nice. Thanks.

Divya: You're welcome. Can you try it on to see if it's the right size? Amar sighs and nods. He comes back and to Divya he looks handsome.

Divya: Perfect! Amar looks at himself in the mirror.

Amar: Yea I do look nice. Thanks once again.

Divya: You're welcome. Hey Amar…Can you take a walk with me downstairs? I want to show you something. Please? Amar looks at her smile and melts.

Amar: Ok. Divya jumps up and then takes him out. But as they are in the elevator Divya's heart begins aching but she doesn't stop. At last they reach the lobby. Divya drags Amar to the hall. Alia is standing there with her back to them.

Amar: Divya who's that? Divya smiled.

Divya: Happy birthday Amar. Alia turns around. Amar becomes shocked. Alia's eyes tear up from looking at Amar. Amar stands there a moment and then looks at Divya.

Amar: Is she really there? Divya locks her lips together to hold back her tears and nods. Amar looks back at Alia whose smiling. And as an instant reaction both run in to hug each other. They hug each other tightly and begin having an emotional moment. As a last resort Amar kisses Alia. Divya's places her hand on her mouth and runs out in tears. (no one noticed) As she pushes the button for the elevator the song Ishq Hai from the movie Ishq plays.(Please turn your speakers on and listen to the song…)

Jab neend na aaye, aah (Elevator door opens and she runs in)

Jab yaad sataaye, aah aah aah

Jab dil ghabaraaye, aah aah aah aah, aah (She cries all the way to her floor)

Jab gham tadpaaye

Isse kya kahiye, mere rab tu bata (The door opens and she runs to her room)

Ishq hai, ishq hai, ishq hai, ishq hai

Ishq haar bhi hai, ishq jeet bhi hai (She runs in and falls on her bed on her stomach)

Dil ka dushman bhi hai, dil ka meet bhi hai

Ishq hai, ishq hai, ishq hai, ishq hai (She cries away)

Ishq haar bhi hai, ishq jeet bhi hai

(Kabhi ishq banke shama jagmagaaye (She breaths heavily)

Kabhi banke gham ka andhera yeh chhaaye) - 2

Ishq hai geet bhi, ishq hai raag bhi (She sits up and looks at her suitcase)

Dil jalaa de magar ishq voh aag bhi

Aag lagaaye, hosh udaaye (She wipes her tears harshly and walks up to it)

Dil ko sataaye, jaan gawaaye

Ek deewangi hai isse kya kahoon (She takes out her wedding picture)

Ishq hai, ishq hai, haan yehi ishq hai

Ishq haar bhi hai, ishq jeet bhi hai (She grabs a lighter and goes out to the terrace)

Dil ka dushman bhi hai, dil ka meet bhi hai

Ishq hai, ishq hai, haan yehi ishq hai (She begins burning the picture)

(Kabhi ishq dil mein khushi leke aaye

Kabhi ishq aansu in aankhon mein laaye) – 2 (Her face has no expression)

Ishq mein hai khushi, ishq mein dard bhi

Iske sau roop hai, ishq hai zindagi (The ashes fall to the floor)

Khwaab dikhaaye, phir chaukaaye

Dil ko dukhaaye, chain churaaye (She picks them up and throws them into the snow)

Ishq aakhir hai kya, main bhi hairaan hoon

Ishq hai, ishq hai, haan yehi ishq hai (She walks back inside)

Jab neend na aaye, jab yaad sataaye

Jab dil ghabaraaye, jab gham tadpaaye (She takes out her photo album from the wedding)

Aah aah aah, aah aah, aah aah...

(Aah aah, aah aah, aah aah, aah aah, aah, ho) (She sits on the bed with the album)

She begins taking every picture out. She looks at the picture, kisses it, and then rips it in half. Soon the whole floor is filled with the ripped pictures. However she left one and put that back in her suitcase. She picks up the bits and pieces and goes back into the terrace. She puts the pieces on the floor and starts a flame. She watches the flame carefully as tears fall down her eyes. She moves her hand over it to feel the intensity but in the process burns her hand however she feels no pain. She walks back in the room and comes out with a jug of water. She pours the water over the flame and watches it die down. She kicks the ashes into the snow and looks over the railing down to see the black bits and pieces scattered all over the snow. She gets so mad that she hits the jug on the railing and it breaks. She walks over the shards of glasses and her feet bleed but she feels no pain. Gentle tears drip from her eyes but instead of cleaning them they make black stains because of her kajal. She leaves her blood stains behind and closes the terrace door. She sits on the bed and pulls out sleeping tablets from the side table. Her eye catches Amar's diary. She doesn't care about anything and reads it. All over is written Alia…I love Alia… I miss Alia… I hate my parents for separating me and Alia…Ali + Amar = Love…She gets frustrated and doesn't read further…(If you remember Amar had wrote about her). She puts his diary back and holds Amar's pillow to her heart. She begins kissing it all over. She then realizes she's had enough. She takes two sleeping tablets along with crying herself to sleep. Meanwhile Amar doesn't return all night.

Precap: Divya gets a high fever. Amar sees her hand and feet and is confused..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Omg!!!It so intense............Feeling really sad for divya...............
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon.........cannot bear to see Divya in this condition.......😭
Edited by lexie - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

omg i feel so bad for divya! i can't stop crying. and she hurt herself too.

the update was amazing wonderful mindblowing fantastic awesome and other adjectives u can think of to describe how awesome it is cuz i ran out of words. can't wait to read ur next update.

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Posted: 17 years ago
sensational, sad update! keep up the great work!
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Posted: 17 years ago
I HATE YOU ALIA!!!!!! 😡
Poor Divya.. Amar man plzzz don't do thiss😭
Divya dsrling control youself.. He'll be yours..
I almost had tears in my eyes,,😭😭😭
ALIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII MEIN YEAH SUB NAHI DHEK SUKTHI...I hope she dies or finds smeone else..
Actually i hope she betrays amar and then he'll understand.. That'll be great punishmnt..
BUt the update was AMAZINGLY TOUCHING!!!👏
Oh ya, i got really mad when the dairy part came but you know i do this all the time. doodle in my diary even on my hands..😆 (A.A *Aoun+Aisha=Love)
Update Soooonnnnnnn

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