FF: Sucha Pyaar NOTE page 56 - Page 31

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Posted: 16 years ago

Great update! Hope that Vidya remembers Sagar soon! Continue soon! Bye! :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
She fell on top of him, not realiaing that it was him and not the bed. She hugged him tightly, and he didn't realize anything since he was asleep. Vidya lifted her face up, and smiled. She admired his face, his hair. She played with it, and did so until he actually woke up. Sagar looked at her face, with was just a few inches away from his. He lifted his hands until they were into her hair. He pulled her face closer and closer until his lips met hers. Vidya got caught into this as she was in "nasha." She held his face in her hands, until he flipped over ont top of her. He released, and after a couple of minutes, Vidya fell asleep. Sagar clenched his fist as in a silent way of saying "darn it." He shook her so she would wake up, but she didn't budge. Since there was nothing that he could do, he went to sleep.

The next morning, Sagar and Vidya were both sleeping. Sagar woke up, and saw that Vidya was practically on top of him. (she was that close) He smiled and gently pushed her aside so he could get off the bed. He decided to play a little trick on her...knowing that she still thought that he was her "boyfriend" and not her "hubby." He took off his shirt, and he threw it on the bed, near her. Then he took some of her lipstick, and kinda drew kisses on his chest. He tried as hard as he could to hold back his laughter. Then he got under the blanket, very close to her. And he purposely moves alot so she wakes up. Vidya gets up and sits on the bed. She streches and then sees Sagar's shirt right next to her. She picks it up and see's some lipstick on it. She thought it was just her imagination and then she puts it aside. Then she sees Sagar sleeping so close to her. (She laid back down) Vidya's eyes widen. She realizes that something might've happened last night. Sagar flips over, and Vidya clenches her fist knowing that her suspicion was tight. (he was sleeping on his stomach and then flipped over) She touched the lipstick marks. A tear fell out her eye, and landed on his chest. This woke Sagar up. He got up, and extended his hand out to Vidya. She backed away.
Sagar: Kya hua Vidya?
Vidya: Kal raat..kya kuch hua tha?
Sagar: Kya matlab?
Vidya: Tum jaante ho main kya kehna jari hoon! Batou!
Sagar: Han Vidya...
Vidya: KYA?!?!
Sagar reached out his arm, and tried to get Vidya in them, but she didn't let him touch her, so he put his head in her lap. Vidya didn't put er hand on his head like always.
Sagar: Kal raat..do pyaar karne vaale ek huwe.
Vidya was crying now. Sagar quickly got up.
Sagar: Vidya kya hua? Tum kyun ro ri ho??
Vidya" Ye maine kya kiya?? Shaadi se pehle hi!! (cries harder)
Sagar: Vidya--
Vidya: Kuch mat bolo! (cries even harder..kinda fake)
Sagar: Vidya I'm sorry woh main--
Vidya held up the lipstick.
Vidya: (serious flat tone) Tume kya laga? Mujhe bewakoof banowoge?
Sagar: It was worth a shot? (as if its a question)
Vidya's jaw dropped and she picked up the pillow and hit him with it.
Sagar: Ow! U know, u lost ur memory alright but u didn't forget to always hit me!
Vidya: Really? I would hit u before too?
Sagar: Yup.
Vidya: That's good!
Sagar: So..u don't remember anything about last night?
Vidya: Not really..wait. U mean to say; something did happen?
Sagar: Yea..come closer, let me tell u.
Vidya scooted over closer to him.
Sagar: U really wanna know?
Vidya: Sagar, this is serious. Kal agar kuch bhi hua, toh...
Sagar: Paas ao.
Vidya brought her head closer, not realizing anything. Sagar leaned in closer, and kissed her. When he released, Vidya was looking down. Sagar whispered in her ear, "That's it." Vidya got up and ran to the bathroom. Sagar smiled, and put his shirt on.


***(SV were at the beach, sitting on the sand)
Sagar: Wanna go in the water?
Vidya: No!!
Sagar: Oh come on Vidya chalo na!
Vidya: Nai! Pani bohut tandha hoga, I don't want to come!!
Sagar: Well I'm sorry Vidya! That's too bad.
He lifted her up, and ran over to the water. They were in it, but he didn't let go of her.
Vidya: Nahi! Mujhe bar nikalo! I can't swim!
Sagar: the water isn't deep Vidya, u can stand.
Vidya: No!
Sagar: Yes!
Vidya: No!
Sagar: Maine kaha na yes!
Vidya: Theek hai. But if the water is cold....
Sagar: Don't worry it won't be.
Vidya: Fine. Now let's get this over with.
The splashed each other in the water for a while, and then Vidya ran laughing because her capris were soaked. Sagar chased her, and then finally he grabbed her hand.

Precap: None

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Hey guys..srry for the short delayed update..and I know..this scene is from DDLJ..i watched it last night and got inspired. I'm, realli srry for this boring update..but the next one will be better!
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Posted: 16 years ago
yeah I know where the scene was from! lol great job!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
^^ thanks Di!! lol DDLJ has alot of gr8 scenes
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Posted: 16 years ago

that was so cute! hmmm thats weird, i was watching ddlj yesetrday too, on sony!!!! plz update soon, u wrote fantastically!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
omggg...i watched ddlj too...but i missed this scene...THIS IS LIKE ONE OF MY FAVORITE SCENES...haha but i like the twist you added...it made it unique anyway...AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE SOON=]]]]]]]]]]
I LOVED IT PRI=)
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Posted: 16 years ago
That was amazing,when is she gonna remember?anyways great job,continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Amazing update sweetie.. loved it very much.. pleasee cont sooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Amazingg update sweetie.. loved it very much.. please cont soooon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Radhika--omg me 2!!! thanks hun and i will continue soon!!

Kalee--awww thanks!!! yea i noe, i didnt wanna copy it totally..so i added the twist. glad u liked it! ill update soon

Manusha--she will...not so soon but she will and thanks hun
Saniiii---aww thanks! i will😉

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