SOJI ff:an aggressive 'I LOVE YOU'part 7 updt on pg 14

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oishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: nami9j
wow oishi... very sweet😛😛😛...
do continue👍🏼

so finally u read it

i am reading your ff now

nice start

i will give my views soon..

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@nedhvik-91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Fantastic @awesome-rajji [=D>u r mindblowing ur imagination nd thought process writing script its too gud plzzz do continue its really interesting compare to da serial

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oishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: nedhvik-91
Fantastic @awesome-rajji [=D>u r mindblowing ur imagination nd thought process writing script its too gud plzzz do continue its really interesting compare to da serial

thank u so much 😛

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shehra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

very very very nice oishi!!! 👏👏😃😃😃😃👏

I loooved the amreek part and bike part especially!! pls pls continue to write about amreek coming back and soham getting jealous!! iv always wanted to see something with soham-rajji-amreek love triangle so pls continue your ff on them

btw what does FF stand for?

glad to see sooo many varieties of stories of soji written here in this forum...makes BIDK more worth it

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pinki123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: awesome-raji

thank you

and yes you are first.

deserve a trophy now 😆

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oishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: shehra
very very very nice oishi!!! 👏
I loooved the amreek part and bike part especially!! pls pls continue to write about amreek coming back and soham getting jealous!! iv always wanted to see something with soham-rajji-amreek love triangle so pls continue your ff on them

btw what does FF stand for?

glad to see sooo many varieties of stories of soji written here in this forum...makes BIDK more worth it

sehra FF means fan fiction..

and thnk u so much dear,,,, will update soon

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oishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Part 3

Rajji and sohum are taking dinner in dhaba. Sohum tries to talk with rajji and cracks some jokes but rajji is looking not interested what hurts sohum but he understands what's going on in rajji's heart. Rajji is remembering their

first dinner where sihum was said to her clearly that he couldn't never forget bani. She also remember this is the place where she felt her love for sohum for the first time.

Rajji ( to herself ) : sohum couldn't forget bani that day or not he doesn't forget her today..

Sohum is also thinking about the same day where rajji asked for their friendship and they danced with each other. A smile comes on his face while thinking about the dancing moment. Rajji notices the smile on sohum's face she wants to ask him the reason but she doesn't ask anything.

Finally they complete their dinner and both sit on the bike. Rajji holds sohum shoulder. Sohum feels her touch. His heart become so happy. Sohum starts the bike (this time the bike starts after taking some break😆 ) Rajji's hair os blowing and coming on her face, she tries to handle it. Sohum is starring her through the mirror. He is mesmerised by seeing her beauty

suddenly the bike bumped with a small rock rajji hold sohum so tightly to balance. Both feels goosebumps through their whole body. Rajji quickly remove her hand.

Sohum wants the night never ends.

He takes the long cut so he can spent more time with rajji

Rajji isn't notice that because she was lost in some thoughts. But suddenly she notices that sohum takes a long cut so she asks sohum about that.

Sohum becomes confused now what answer he should give.

Sohum says 'actually rajji on that other road thereis too much rock on the road. So tire would be puncher that's why I takes the long cut.he is looking rajji and praying inside that rajji will not ask anything.

God listen him..Rajji doesn't question anything that's mean she believes his words.sohum takes a relief breath.

Precap : amreek's entry

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Plz don't hit me guys. I know I said I will introduce amreek in this part but I couldn't. Really sorry for that. But pakka promise will introduce him on the next part.

Again sorry for the late update. .

Hope u all like the part. 😛

Edited by awesome-raji - 11 years ago

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rajji.soham

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Its very nice I loved it and looking forward for the rest of it , I cant wait to see the jealous Soham. Actually i needed a dosage of sojji very badly after receiving the most shocking and horrible NEWS yesterday.Love you dear