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next part will be in a mint



Edited by prabha.abha - 11 years ago
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PART 7:

Sohum attended the call by still closing the eyes and tears were flowing down "Hello, sohum it's me Rajji maa. Did Rajji came safely??". By hearing those words he opened the eyes widely. Rajji mom was waiting for the replay but ter was non ten oly she remembered and had a smile in her face and told " I know i know she is with u, so oly it took time to take the call. My dear son i know u both had some fight so oly Rajji didn't speak to any one and lost in some thoughts always. I know by now all ur problem will be solved i know it, she brought laddos for u specially made by herself for u. ok ok sorry for disturbing u at this time ,Take care of u and my daughter I know u will do it " sohum was unable to believe the words he is hearing, he tried to speak but his trout was stuck. " Don't worry maa, i will take a gud care of MY WIFE" with that Rajji mom was relived for her daughter's life.

After cutting the call sohum ran out by shouting Rajji name. He was running in the road like a mad dog. He shouted her name more than his breath. So many thoughts came to his mind. Did anything happen to her while coming on the way? Or she meets with some accident or she is talking with someone in the road or someone kidnapped her or the most feared punishment of his life time came true. He was not able to think clearly, he shouted her name and searched every were. He saw the falling star in the sky he closed the eyes and made the wish in his heart " I want my wife back, yes i truly accept it am in love with her, I need her she is my angel. She is my love more than that she is my mother, my friend and my whole life is Rajji Rajji Rajji oly" he kneel down and cried very hardly. Something on the ground caught his attention it was laddos spread every were, he took one piece and smelled it, it was the same sweet smell as Rajji do and he tasted it, it has the same taste, the taste of love now oly he understood it very clearly. She used to put cardamom more as sohum love it. By little distance away he saw Rajji shall and her back, he also saw the tire print of car. He followed the prints of the tire.

The print let him to the white color car in the side of the forest road. By seeing that car Randeep face was flashed in his face. He slowly entered the forest and noticed the car was empty. He then searched car fully but he did not find any proof of Rajji been ter. He went inside the forest by making no noise. Rajji who was tied to the tree was remembering the time tey spent together. He used to fight lot with her but not even one day he had asked her to move out of the house. He had not even spent a night or even had a food outside the house till date and she knows he did not hate her and it was the one of the main thing she admires about him and all ppl love him for his carrying nature. Sohum saw a camp fire from a long distance his eyes oly scanned for Rajji. The long search for his angel came to an end wen he saw his angel who was tied to a tree. The tears in her cheeks were glittering due to the light of the fire. He was unable to move from the place his leg were ready to run towards her side and his hand ached to touch her and hug her and want to wipe out her tears out. His chest ached for her head her to rest on him and to consol her heart. He didn't move her eyes for a second also, he was bought back by a sound of glass breaking. He turned to the direction of the sound and then he saw the devil dog Randeep sitting near the fire and having liquor his heart was right in guessing. Sohum who was burning like a forest fire ran toward Randeep and kicked him to the ground by using his right leg foot. Randeep who fall near the ground and his liquor bottle were poured in to the camp fire which was now burning very high but while comparing to sohum's forest fire it was low. Rajji saw sohum who was standing like a warrior in front of the fire. "How dare u kidnapped MY WIFE" the word my wife was echoing in the forest and by hearing those words Rajji smiled with the tears of happy and this one word is enough for her remaining part of a life to live without him or she even can die tis moment itself. Sohum went near the fire and dragged him out and gave a very hard punch in his face. Randeep tried to escape from sohum grip but he was unable to do so bcz his grip was very strong than the iron rock. Sohum was holding his shirt collars by both hand "did u forget that she oly saved ur life once from me" his hand were pointing towards Rajji and his eyes were fixed towards Randeep with the anger. "But now ur going to pay for everything" by telling that he dragged him towards the car and pushed him inside the car and drove off. Rajji was tensed, sohum went missing for more than 20 min ter is no sign of him any were. Her heart was beating faster than a machine, his eyes were wider and searching for her love, her man, her husband in all direction but emptiness and darkness was the result.

Precap: No precap bcz next is the last part


Quote of the day: some time by making small things for ur loved once will make a special bound with tem forever

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Edited by prabha.abha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏...wow superb...😃...loved it...😳
quotes are really superb...😃
😲...what next part is the last one......why...

Btw...r u from TamilNadu...😛
Edited by poorvika - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: poorvika

👏...wow superb...😃...loved it...😳

quotes are really superb...😃
😲...what next part is the last one......why...

Btw...r u from TamilNadu...😛




Yes dear i am from TN ( chennai)😳
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🤗 👍🏼 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: nehageet


🤗 👍🏼 👏 👏



ur the 1st friend i got in this IF, ur all ways special to me

Edited by prabha.abha - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: prabha.abha



ur the 1st friend i got in this IF, ur all ways special to me


ur welcome friend...dil se...❤️
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Originally posted by: prabha.abha




Yes dear i am from TN ( chennai)😳

😃...im also from TN( tiruvarur )😃

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