My Sanraj Scene-Luv Never Fails.... - Page 32

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Posted: 15 years ago
Glad that u guys liked it.Ur support makes me 2 create such scenes.
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow sheela wow man your too gd at writing scenes - i should posting mine in next few days but there are nowhere as romantic as this - i fink sfter i post this one i shoud make it really romantic
loved part one both them in black and looking at eachother and then DM calls with eyes
his eyes šŸ˜
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Posted: 15 years ago
Glad that u liked it sapna.Im unmarried sapna.waitin 4 ur post
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wonderful sheela, we are just surviving on ur romantic scenes these days as cvs do not show what we want to see...
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@ Sanraj Romantic Scene P 1 @ At night,Dm is waiting 4 his santudi in their room.She doesnt come yet.He rests his head on the chair.Santu finishes al the housechores & goes upstairs.Dm hears chan chan of her payal.She enters the room & locks the door.She looks very tired becoz of the work.She says him "Maalik,i hav 2 go to take bath.Then only i wil get relief"He replies "Ok.I wil wait 4 u."Then she goes 2 take bath.After taking bath,she comes outside & goes near the mirror.She tries to tie the dori of the blouse.Bt she cant.After trying so many times,she is frustrated.Dm watches al tis.Then he goes near her & ties her dori.During tis,his finger touches her soft bak.He brushes it & turns her around. Bt santu says "Maalik,i feel very tired becoz of heavy work.I cant maalik.Sorry my dear"Dm is frustrated after hearing tis.He goes 2 sit on the chair.She ties her hair,places bindi & then she corects her saree as she feels tat saree is incorect.Dm watches her with frustration.Then he stands up & goes 2wards the bed. During correcting her saree,an insect fals on her.She starts screaming & wipes off her saree.She jumps here & there.She tries 2 remove that insect bt she cant.The insect already falls on the floor.Bt she didnt c it.She stil screams.She runs 2wards dm & hugs him.Dm smiles with suces & says thanks 2 that insect within his heart.Dm tightens her grip around her.She njoys her hubby's hug.Then dm releases his grip & starts 2 kis her cheeks & lips. To B Continued in Part 2...
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Posted: 15 years ago
😳 wowie..............even i wolud lyk 2 thank d insect...........................
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Posted: 15 years ago
šŸ‘ wow ... am breathless after reading your scenes ... CVs hope that you atleast show us scenes somewhat like this ... we want our SanRaj back
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow!!!! Mind blowing. How can you express their love so well? You write in such a way that I can see it and even feel their warmth. Superb job. Eagerly waiting for your next post.


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