Ek pyaar Bhari dastan (FF) updated pg 35 - Page 3

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Really cute Ayushi.. The use of the song was really good.. Great work..
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Thanks sanju and Anna for liking my ff..........there is plenty more romantic scenes to come...............
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Too good,Ayushi!🤗Da song,da situations,perfect!!👏
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Good one Ayushi👏 keep it up.. cant see Sanraj worried anymore..😭
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Uma di sanraj sepration will increase the love between them.............santu will go where she belongs to and that is with DM...............dont worry
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Waiting 4 ur next episode ayushi
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hey ayushi
u rocks like always
u both part is amazing...... 👏
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Ayushi,wht abt ur next episode?
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Thanks leena and sheela for liking the ff........I am now going to post part 3
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The next scene

It's been two days since DM has touched food. Baa knocks on his door and ask him to eat something or else he will get sick. To which he replies" what more can happen, I will die thats it?" it's better to die then to live without someone whom you love the most.

Baa: Par she is the culprit and she got what she deserved.

DM: eh baa; I cannot hear anything bad about my wife… Please go away from here and leave me alone

Downstairs everyone is freaking out as DM has not eaten from the last two days. Hiten says that he will go and talk to papa and see if he will eat something. Birwa who is standing there is getting upset and says she will try to talk to papa. But Hiten says he will go and talk to him. But nothing happened. He comes downstairs and says if papa's attitude does not change then he might get sick. Baa get worried and says I don't know what has happened to this house? Whose evil shadow has fallen in our house………just then Motiben says it is obviously Santu's and she is to be blamed for her Nanaka's condition.

5 days are gone with everyone trying but no response………

Then everyone decides to go to him and talk to him together. Everyone is knocking on the door but no response. Everyone in the family gets worried and says what if something happens to DM. They ask Hitten to break the door and both Hiten, Bapuji, and Maulik tries to break the door. They are shocked to see DM on the floor. They pick him up and puts him on bed. He is not in his senses and then Taru calls doctor.

A doctor comes and examines him and says if he doesn't eat he will die. He is suffering from high fever and if the fever doesn't go away in 24 hrs then he might go in coma. I will appoint a nurse and she will take care of him. Since, he is not eating we have to feed him through tubes. I will inject this needle in his arms and he will be able to get energy from this glucose bottle. But it seems like he doesn't want to wake up. Please don't say anything to him which could increase the problem more. So doctor then take his leave and everyone thanks him. Just then Khemi says then we have to make sure that Santu doesn't enter this room or this house. Otherwise we will lose him. After hearing Khemi's words, tears drops from DM's eyes and he says to himself that he will not wake up again. He will rather die then living without santudi.

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