SS: Mummmmmy Part 2 pg 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Since anything is possible in Ekta's world and it doesn't make sense. Since the forum is so sad, quiet, unlive, thanks to the CVS. I wrote this just for fun and like in Amar Prem Pushpa I hate tears. I mean no offense to anyone or any rituals. This track has turned me crazy.


SS: Mum-mm-my Part 1


Hiten clad in white kurta reluctantly preformed the final ritual of his younger brother Arjan. His mind and heart both said may you be toasted and roasted you psycho murderer Arjan.

Standing near by a hallow tree, Maulik was silently crying, why she killed his beloved Arjan. 😭Suddenly he heard the chan, chan of the payals, then he saw her. His small brown eyes grew huge in fear, has beads of sweat formed dropped to the ground.
She was clad in blue sari, her hair was open, and she had blood dripping from her head.
For a minute he thought he was dreaming or sleeping. To him it seemed like she was seeing right through him, reading his mind. How he wished his mummy Taru was with him on this graveyard holding is hands ensuring him his eyes was mistaken.

Maulik, Hiten called to him. Ji Hiten Bhai. Are you ok?
I am fine Hiten Bhai?
It's cold here, and you are sweating like crazy.
I just saw Mummy.
Mummy? He repeated looking at Maulik unbelievingly.

Mummy he swallowed.

Shaking his head Hiten assured "Maulik there is no such things has mummy those are ancient history Maulik this India not Egypt."

Nahi Bhai I saw Mummy, has he pointed to the direction of burning of Arjan's pyre.

Hiten saw nothing but the flames of fire. Relax Maulik, I know you are in great grieve since Arjan and you were really close. Your eyes are playing tricks on you, you need lots of rest.

Hiten Bhai.

Enough Maulik don't create any scene here or everyone will find out about the relationship you and Arjan shared. All of Papa business partner, the entire villagers and realtives will figure out and the honor of Mahivashyi and Waghela name will be in dust.

Maulik gaped at Hiten, how did he figure out.

Bhai let me alone with Arjan and say my good bye for one last time.

Ok Hiten sighed, and left Maulik to say good bye to Arjan.

Preview: More Maulik torture😈
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Piku.. truly amazing made me laugh 🤣 The CV's have something to learn, they should read this and see what we like... 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Piku*

His mind and heart both said may you be toasted and roasted you psycho murderer Arjan.

Enough Maulik don't create any scene here or everyone will find out about the relationship you and Arjan shared.

Preview: More Maulik torture😈

🤣toast and roast of a psycho🤣
Oh yaa..thedostana relation will be revealed in front of the D'pur vaais..they will have a shock🤣
Maulik tortured😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hmm, this is a new take, Piku😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazing piku..thanks
Any torture for Maulik will be less I so hope Arjun ki aatma will hunt him and eat alive...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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so Piku do you mean that they were having dostana in M-mansion..😆....😆wow....................this line of yours cracked me up...........thanks piku
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks SRD, Uma, Malli, Anna, and Ayushi.
Malli everyone is doing Sanraj and Hiral scene and i dont have romance bone, so i will do Dostana track
Ayushi: of course they were having dostana, i know why Arjan wanted to kill Hiten😈 and it wasn't because of Khemi. I am writing the next part, will try to post tonight.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Piksss hun, we needed a good laugh and you gave us just that 😆 😆 😆

Could imagine Maulik's eyes getting bigger 🤣

Nice dear, do continue soon 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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You know why Maulik wnated Arjan to die😲😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hmm............i am waiting for ur next update piku.........this m-mansion has turned into M-museum or rather M-Pagalkhana......or mental asylum what ever you want to call it............

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