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Jaz1990 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Leena glad ur writing again...Loved it...waiting 4 dat sanraj moment =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ azna

🤗 glad that u likes it.......next will come soon......
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Posted: 15 years ago


Pain of away from love Part 2

At next morning Santu wakes up little late from her regular time but today she looks little week & tired. Actually she got little fever b'coz she witted in rain on last night so much. But without caring it she wake up from bad & takes her bath & after that she also completes her morning prayer.

Then she goes in to kitchen that time only Champu was there.

Santu: Champakali is breakfast is ready?

Champu: yes malkin.

Santu: then u put it on dining table. I am coming in some time.

Champu nods her head in yes. After that Santu leaves the kitchen & comes in living room. Then she goes to near the phone & picks up the receiver. She starts to dial some number & makes the call. Toral sees Santu & comes near to her.

Toral: sasu maa whom u r calling?

Santu: I m calling to malik but it says this number is not reachable plz try after some time.

Toral: ohh!!! May be papa was busy u don't worry when gets time from his work he will call u or after some time u will try again. Now come let's we take our breakfast.

Santu being upset puts the receiver on phone & goes with Toral for taking breakfast. Hiten, Birva & Suraj was already sited now Santu & Toral also sits on table for breakfast. Now Maulik is also came there & sits on table.

Now Champu starts serving the foods to every one. Every one starts to taking there break fast. Still Santu lost her self in her world so she didn't start. Toral sees Santu.

Toral: what happen sasu maa why u r not eating?

Santu: (comes in her sense) nothing & gives silent smile starts to eating.

Suddenly Hiten's phone rings he takes out the phone from his pocket. Santu being little happy by thinking may be its Dm's call. Hiten sees on mobile's display

Hiten: Taru Fai… (He picks up the phone) ya Taru fai tell me How r u all?

Moti (Taru Fai): we all r fine here. How r u all there?

Hiten: we all r also fine here. How was ur yatra? Is u get proper darshan of khodiyar maa?

Moti: yes all r done very nicely. Lesion in afternoon we r lifting from here & we will reached at Dharampur on tomorrow. So tells this Naanka & other family members okay.

Hiten: okay jai shri Krishna Taru fai.

Moti: jai shri Krishna. (Hiten cuts the call.)

Hiten: (looking at all family member) the call was from Taru fai.

Maulik: we know this Hiten bhai but what maa says?

Hiten: she says that she, Baa & Bapuji will left Ahemadabad's khodiyar maa's temple in afternoon & they will reached at Dharampur on tomorrow.

All are being happy by hearing this news. All completes their break fast. Then Suraj & Birva takes their Tiffin box from Champu & goes in to their school. Maulik & Hiten goes at factory. Toral comes at Santu.

Toral: Sasu maa I m going at my friend's house u want to come with me.

Santu: no u carry on I have some work at home.

Toral: u r not looking good is every thing is okay?

Santu: yes every thing is okay just I feeling little tired ness.

Toral: ohh!!! Then I am staying at home & not going any where.

Santu: no… no don't spoil ur program. I tell u I m okay & Champa is also here for me. So u don't worry just carry on.

Toral: r u sure?

Santu: yes I m sure.

Toral: okay then u takes proper rest & if u having any problem just call me okay. I will try to come at as soon as possible.

Santu: yes sure.

Then Toral also leaves the house. Now Santu & Champu was alone at home. Santu again goes to near the phone & tries to call Dm but still his phone sounds not reachable. She tries more then 4 to 5 time but whole time same answer not reachable.

Santu became more & more upset & her silent fever is becoming more & more higher with every passing moment. She didn't take care abt her self. She didn't take medicine for her fever.

At afternoon she again tries to call Dm but same answer not reachable she puts the receiver on phone angrily. Then also she didn't take proper lunch at afternoon b'coz of anger & sadness. In whole after noon she was sited in her room alone b'coz she was missies Dm a lot.

She is thinking before this malik (Dm) was gone so many times at Antwerp for more then a week & on that time she never feels his absences so much then why this time. She thinks abt this for much more time but still she didn't get the answer.

To be continue…..

Prcap - Dm comes back 🥳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Leena my dear I loove it sooo much. 🤗 . aww poor santu's sick and then not being able to reach dm on the phone 😭 Hope all is well in ur next FF 😃
U rock thankx for sharing 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wowww...so nice...santu missing dm a lot...she doesnt take care of herself...i lyk toral's care on santu...Santu has severe fever...OMG...waiting 4 dm's arrival
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Posted: 15 years ago
Leena...oh Leena..leena leena..Dil tune cheena..(You stole my heart ).....SUPERB FF I am waiting..like Santu..when will our DM come..please continue...whenever you find time dear...
well point to be noted..Why is Santu feeling so restless..awwwww..Is she preggy..awwww...??CHO CHWEET leena.. Love-Hema
Edited by HAOOY - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
leena welocme bck.i m soo dam happy 2 c u bck with ur ff......lyk alway dey dey rck.luv u...dm bck...santu happy now...but she have fever...dm will take care of her
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Posted: 15 years ago
comment for sanraj dance:
so glad your writing leena - i always love your FF
loved santos imagination so sweet - and DMs arms around her😳
awwwwwww
lovely to the core
so when is DM saab coming back?
comment - for pain of away from love:
awwwwwwwwwww - santo misses him so sweet
i feel the same her at the mo - miss DM
woo hoo DM is coming back🥳😳
Edited by s000 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Leena...i'm so glad that Dm's back... Miss him soooooo much...😍 Pls post the next soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
leena super FF plz post again soon :)

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