SanRaj Moments We wish For (Updated pg 49) - Page 34

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Posted: 15 years ago
Rakhie akka,did u read my sanraj scene?
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Posted: 15 years ago

@ Sheela, yes I have and commented.

SanRaj will come together I promise. But I don't want to rush it. DM will move back into his room surely. Patience ladies, sabr ka phal meeta hotha hai
Edited by Rakhie_08 - 15 years ago
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Just a short scene for you all. I'm slowly building up towards some proper SanRaj scenes. It would be unrealistic to have them all loved up so soon!!
15th February - Two Can Play That Game
Sometime later DM retuns home. No one is around and he quietly makes his way up to his room. Entering it, he removes the shawl from his shoulders and sinks into his chair.
He takes a deep breath and sighs. It is only then that he sees the picture of himself. His eyes slowly scan to the floor where the torn remains of the haar now lies.
He gets up and walks towards it. Picking up the broken pieces in his hand, he gives a small, almost silent grunt. He knows perfectly well who's handiwork this is.
Dumping the now useless haar into the waste bin he opens the drawer of his table and pulls out another. Walking over to the picture he once again adorns it with the new haar.
There was a tremor somewhere deep within him. He took a sip of water from the glass on his bedside table. Why did his mouth feel so dry? Perhaps he had done too much walking tonight. He lifted his legs upon the bed and lay back. Presently he fell into a deep slumber.
The early morning rays of the sun hit his face and startled him out of his sleep. Rubbing his eyes, he sat up in bed and swung his legs over the edge. He had slept so well, that he hadn't realised it was so late. He couldn't remember when he had last had such a good nights sleep.
In her room, Santu was already awake and sitting on the edge of her bed contemplating what to do. She had stormed into the house. She had asserted her right to be here. She had crossed words with people.
But what did she do now? There seemed to be so many things that had gone wrong with and within the family that the task of righting all these wrongs seemed almost impossible. Where did she start?
Sighing, and possibly against her better judgement, she decided to start with the one thing that would be the foundation for everything else. She walked out of her room and headed down the corridor. When she arrived at DM's door she knocked and waited. There was no answer. She knocked again. Still nothing.
Was malik really out of his room, or merely ignoring her presence at his door? She took a deep breath and swung the door open ready for whatever confrontation came her way. Much to her chagrin, the room was empty. He had left the house already it seemed. Where to? was anyones guess.
As she was about to leave again, her eyes fell on the waste bin near the door. She saw the haar. She looked up his picture and was stunned to see that it was once again adorned with a haar. A frisson of anger shot through her. She walked over to it and once again tore the haar down. She let it fall to the floor and walked back out of the room, carefully closing the door behind her.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Another fab scene as always Rakhie..
Like Santudi's attitude in this one.. The title is perfect for the scene.. I can just see grumpy DM and strong Santu, your words make the imagery so vivid in my mind...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved it,Rakhie!🤗Awesome update!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rakhie,

very nice keep it up 👏 👏
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17th February - Two Can Play That Game Part 2
It was very late in the day when DM came back home. As always he came and went as he pleased and most often unbeknown to anyone else.
Entering his room, he headed straight for his bedside table and opening the drawer he took out something. It was a small pill bottle. He dropped one out onto his palm and returned the bottle to it's place. Taking a swig of water he swallowed the pill and sighed deeply.
He sat on the bed and looked forlornly at the floor. He had a headache. It was a dull, throbbing sort of pain and it had been with him all day. He couldn't understand why. He had slept deeply for the first time in a long time last night, and had woken up feeling almost....well.....refreshed!
But as soon as he had left the house this morning the headache had started. somewhere in the back of his mind he could hear a faint distant voice whispering the word chai. He couldn't tell if it was his own or someone else's. His mind was foggy.
Ignoring the voice, he lifted his legs up onto the bed, closed his eyes and lay back against the pillow. The coolness of the fabric soothed him a little. After a few minutes of silence he allowed himself to open his eyes and as soon as they did they came to rest upon the portrait of himself.
His demeanour, his countenance, nothing betrayed what his eyes were seeing. He looked intently at the picture, his eyes narrowing to steely slits. His lips set, he got up of the bed and went to his table and as before, pulled out a new haar.
He walked to the portrait and with slow measured steps hung the haar around the picture once more. Scooping up the remains of the old one he, once again, dumped it in the waste bin and returned to his bed. He closed his eyes once more.
He tried hard not to think about it. He tried hard not to succumb to it. And yet his own heart would not let him. What did she want to prove by this? What did she have to gain by this? Why had she come back at all? She was attempting to play games with him. With Dharamraj Mahiyavanshi? He knew how to play games too. Perhaps it was and perhaps it wasn't, but one might have mistaken the small twitch at the corners of his mouth for a very faint smile.
And so for a number of days in the M-mansion this tussle of wills played out between Mr and Mrs Mahiyavanshi. The portrait and haar became a symbol of said struggle, and it was only a matter of time before one of them broke. The question was who?
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Posted: 15 years ago
😭roula diya mujhe - DM ko sad mat karo
LOVED THE WAY YOU WROTE IT!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Like ur FF akka.super.Keep continuing
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Posted: 15 years ago
Such an emotional one!M speechless!👏Very well written Rakhie!Kudos!👍🏼

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