AnSh Mini SS: HumSafar Thread #1 - Page 100

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

68.7k

Users

33

Likes

1k

Frequent Posters

Chahat_A_Doshi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TANTAN27

i didn't know only that you have started writing a new ss , however i read the chapters in one go and loved the story a lot .

how their mutual dislike changes to concern and how they pur out their pain to each other.

so sad what anandi and shiv suffered respectively but loving how that's bringing them together !

ananya is so cute ! without her they wouldn't have married only ! love her character a lot !

looking foward to the next chapter . awesome work 😃👏

For reading it, liking it and commenting on it

Glad that you liked it

Chahat_A_Doshi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fatema22

Still not read update ...

I read @midnight
And comment 2mrw

Chahat_A_Doshi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: apob

very emotional update... could imagine all the hurt and torture Anandi must have gone through 😭 also felt really really sad for Shiv.😭 Hope he could forget the past and move on completely in life with Anandi and Ananya.

The connection you brought between the two was the high point ... could have never imagined that it was J's fault due to which Shiv lost Ashima. Really a very nice twist to the story. Also really appreciate Shiv for not blaming anandi for his loss.

Looking forward to your next update... hoping for a romantic and happy one!😊

Thank you for the comment

The past was connected that i let it out long back but i guess no one picked up on the hint Yay for me

I did not think it would be such a high point but dekha jaaye toh isn';t he always the one who in some or the other way is behind AnSh union

The past revelations are so that ppl can put it behind them and move on


Chahat_A_Doshi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PreetiSJ

I'm listening to songs and all the songs are reminding me of ansh in terms of this ss ... Tum hi ho from aashiqui 2 and mere haath mein tera haath ho from fanaa are two of my favourites but all the songs I'm listening to are slow and calm and they're just reminding me of your ss 😊

Haye both songs are so good

I really prefer romantic slow songs or light gazals to the dhinchak type of songs

Chahat_A_Doshi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saragnya

My God chahat...finding it really difficult to put it in words after such an emotional journey..like I cried reading third chapter...

It pained me a lot to hear d hell anandi has gone through...And Shiv is such a cool dude man... After realising dat what led to accident on dat night remained rock solid pillar of strength for his wife...
I was crying😭 at shiv's monologue when he let go off ashima...heartached💔 when shiv narrated how he lost his love and unborn child... Beautifully weaved it Chahat 👏...
so Shiv & anandi had connection...connection of heart ❤️..of soul...of their child...of parenthood...of d pain...of d guilt...of d sufferings...of care...& of d rains...
They are destined to b together
They r in true sense made for each other...
Now dey need to realise dat they can connect with each other in happiness as well...
U r a rock star chahat...love u for what u do...i.e taking me to my favourite place in this universe...world of fantasy😊



For the detailed comment

For liking the update

Aww Special Thank you for calling me a rockstar I am so glad that i can be the driver to the bus that takes you to fantasy land

indian_beauty thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
Teaser abhi?
and one thing I gotta say you're one of the very few writers on IF who actually take time out n reply to your readers' comments with so much detail n interest so thank you for that...encourages the reader to comment more n be more specific n detailed😳
Chahat_A_Doshi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: indian_beauty

Teaser abhi?

and one thing I gotta say you're one of the very few writers on IF who actually take time out n reply to your readers' comments with so much detail n interest so thank you for that...encourages the reader to comment more n be more specific n detailed😳

Haan preeti asked so I have written something that i can give

Thank you so much for saying that my replies encourage readers to comment in detail

Arre nahi come to QH forum we reply to everyone sometimes the whole day can go by in conversation with one person

😊

Chahat_A_Doshi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

Teaser For Last Chapter

Shiv and Anandi followed Ananya to her room with her blanket, pillow, her mamma teddy and papa teddy. They tucked her in and wished her good night and sweet dreams. As Shiv and Anandi were leaving from the room Ananya called out to Shiv. "Papa do you know that chor came into the house in the cartoon I was watching!" Shiv smiled as he understood why Ananya was not able to sleep even after hearing two bedtime stories one from him and the other from Anandi. He came to her and picked her up in his arms and took her to the window. "Ananya look guard uncle is at the main gate. He will never let any chor come to our house. No one can steal Ananya from mamma and papa. Ok ab soi soi karte hain." Anandi came and took her in her arms while Shiv showed Ananya that the doors to the balcony were properly locked. He also double checked the windows for her surety. He also checked the washroom for any bhoo bhoo's hiding in there but there was no one. "Papa you love me very very very very very much na that is why you are scared for me and you have checked everything and everywhere in the room. But papa you know that there are monsters under the bed. You did not check there. I am not scared of monsters main toh papa ka brave baccha hoon na but I know you are scared for Ananya. If you will not see neeche bed ke toh you will not be able to sleep na so you should see under the bed so that at night you can sleep peacefully." Shiv and Anandi exchanged smiles and Shiv checked under Ananya's bed for monsters. "There is nothing under the bed. Koi monster nahi aa sakta papa ki brave beti ke paas hai na?" Once again Shiv and Anandi tucked her in. They stayed by her side till she fell asleep. They slowly moved out of her room and closed the door a bit and stood there. Shiv put his arm around Anandi's waist and she rested her head on his shoulder as they looked upon their daughter who slept peacefully with a sweet smile on her face.

Edited by Chahanya - 11 years ago
PreetiSJ thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres

ananya chahe kitni bhi chalak kyun na ho, hai to wo bachi hi, dar lagta hai use
aur shiv, wo apni beti ko khush dekhna chata hai, is liye wo bhi uski khushi ke liye sab locks check karta hai ❤️
lekin she's so cute (and clever😉)... i love how she used shiv as an excuse to get him to check for monsters under her bed, by saying that she's brave but she's only doing it for shiv's satisfaction ... sooo sweet 😃
shiv put his arm around anandi's waist and she rested her head on his shoulders! yay!! finally, i think they've confessed their love and every confusion and misunderstanding and worry and whatever else has been cleared 😃
can't wait for chapter seven (which i hope makes it's way onto thread 2 😉 )
Edited by PreetiSJ - 11 years ago
PreetiSJ thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
by the way, i would just like to point out, have you noticed the page number?? hema and i will make sure that update for chapter 7 is on next thread 😉
Edited by PreetiSJ - 11 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".