Chahanya's AnSh SS: Fault In My Stars Completed!!! - Page 68

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow amazing ss i completely loved it u are always rockstar in writing diferent stories on ansh but keeping ansh essence intact
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update chahat you do lengthy updates.

Loved the way Shiv handles Anandi 👏

Just one thing i did not get from where did Jagdeesh appear and disappear or did i miss something? 😕

You are a nice writer keep writing 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
i'm speechless now exact mixing of all emotions such a super update this is the reason u differ from others and the most favourite writer of mine that "a man understanding his woman's feeling without the trouble of her telling to him "
always u handled this very carefully and neatly
once again i'm addicted for ur writing
pl keep rocking like this always and dont break this atleast for the sake of readers like me jo tuje aur teri writing ko bahut pasand karthi hai

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Posted: 11 years ago

res

unres

I loved the update

As ususal and it is very unique how you show Shiv understanding Anandi and frankly talking about intimacy without any high voltage drama

Loved the ladoo chor ki story Man prasad ke dabbe se chori

I loved the way she told him that she loved him The way to a mans heart is through his stomach eh Anandi

I loved their little nok jhok and it was especially to make the other comfortable

Just loved it

Anandi was right when she said that her future hubby would make sure that she would see and Shiv made it possible

So the girl with J was obvio Gauri but the twist ka tadka is that she got married to someone else

J had left A to get her but she was unavailable and he did not know of it

K is a B J when will you understand what goes around comes around

I loved the sweet and simple way you shoed them becoming main aur tum se hum

Just loved it

You are a fabulous writer Keep on writing You think you don;t get enough likes n comments but why don;t you get it that they are reading your story nahi toh itne hits nahi milte It is not your Fault it is theirs who don;'t want ppl to know that they are reading the stories you write on (Toral n Sid) AnSh

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww this was so sweet !! Sucha perfect couple in every way ! ❤️ Loved this story veryyy much !! Do write more stories like this 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sushma89

wow amazing ss i completely loved it u are always rockstar in writing diferent stories on ansh but keeping ansh essence intact

Thank you so much for commenting

Glad you liked it

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: onlinebuddy75

Nice update chahat you do lengthy updates.

Loved the way Shiv handles Anandi 👏

Just one thing i did not get from where did Jagdeesh appear and disappear or did i miss something? 😕

You are a nice writer keep writing 😊


Thank you

I am famous I should say for giving longest updates in BV forum

Thank you for commenting and also liking the update

Jagdeesh was Anandi's childhood friend he accidentally blinded her was supposed to marry her but did not turn up on the wedding day

There was a part I wanted to write but then I would have been really longer

The girl Shiv had seen Jagdeesh with in Udaipur on Daddu's Bday was Gauri; He was his classmate n then his colleague ; They both work at the AdityaJyot Eye hospital in Mumbai where Shiv got Anandi for her treatment which Dr. Amar Gujral was going to do; Jagdeesh was in dilemma about facing Anandi and Shiv because he knew Shiv saw him with Gauri n he had on that day lied to Anandi; He dumped her on the D day and also had send photos of AnSh which also Shiv figured out; He had also dumped Anandi for Gauri but he did not know at the time that Gauri was in love with their senior and had secretly gotten engaged to him; When he came back to Mumbai he came to know about Gauri, he could not go back to Anandi as she was with Shiv

So one girl he dumped and one girl he never got both happy with their hubbys and then there he is Who all his life thought that there was a fault in his stars that he was being forced to marry a blind girl tried to run away from that thinking he could change his stars by getting Gauri but in the end he was left alone

So I basically with him wanted to say that it is not always the Fault in Our Stars we are at fault too

I hope this cleared your doubts about disappearance and reappearance of Dr. J

:-)

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Posted: 11 years ago
End was sooo super cute ...
And one more thing i liked in your ff was that
Shiv got her eyes site back ...
It was so touching ...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: devi117

i'm speechless now exact mixing of all emotions such a super update this is the reason u differ from others and the most favourite writer of mine that "a man understanding his woman's feeling without the trouble of her telling to him "

always u handled this very carefully and neatly
once again i'm addicted for ur writing
pl keep rocking like this always and dont break this atleast for the sake of readers like me jo tuje aur teri writing ko bahut pasand karthi hai


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Posted: 11 years ago

Har jagah par what you have ressed a post 😡

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