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seetha74

@seetha74

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sidra08
@Seetha ... This is such a beautiful gift from you to us Ever since Jagya won the elections we were wishing , dreaming some this kind of scenes in show but cvs disappointed us by not showing any such scenes but you just fulifilled our wish I read it three times before commenting I was just lost in your beautiful portrayal of JaGan in your OS . I can totally visualize all this OS in my mind I loved it
Thank you so much dear friend for your taking your time out and writing this OS This is really very nice Totally worth of my excitement ever since you told me you are writing an OS on JaGan I really loved it

Wish creatives could show some such scenes to us in serial too

I Want to see a good serial with all characters in happy mood and there is no traces of negativity in between them ...but BV CVs are continuously thinking that negativity is a must to push the story further ! While doing so they are missing the great opportunity to show the beautiful relationship between the family members and their interrelated facets and feelings in a happy mood .

Dr Sidra ...love your words...cooling my senses in this oasis ! At least few people appreciated my work ...that is enough for me dear !

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seetha74

@seetha74

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Tulasi14

Hmn ... thank you my dear friend for ...tracing my movements and for these kind words ! Yes coming back by tomorrow ...at present acknowledging from Airport .

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Arul97

@Arul97

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Seetha an excellent OS, you had written it very well that i can visualize every scene in my mind. Thanks for the OS. Very well written.

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seetha74

@seetha74

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: saba113
Very beautiful OS Seetha Loved it

Saba thank you very much 😊

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seetha74

@seetha74

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: santhiyaa_J
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tellygeek

@tellygeek

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Hi Seetha, simply superb story, read it 2 - 3 times already.

Such celebrations for Jagya's victory were kind of missed in BV but could visualize through your OS.
You mentioned Suguna, and the kids conversation is a treat to read, wonderful lines:

"The sky, the moon, the stars , the clouds and the rainbow ...the entire galaxy are appearing as mere toys for these kids, the future mankind !"

Superb framing of meaningful sentences:

"'then I will paint on the clouds with a rainbow, a beautiful life painting and adorn it with the frame of full moon's light and present it to you !''

Ganga decorating flowers for AnSh, that's such a meaningful gesture, you could bring out Ganga-Anandi's beautiful bond very well..

"A small cloud moved towards the moon and was swept aside by a gush of wind! "

Finishing lines on life are a pleasure to read, a cheerful beginning to my day 😊 !

Your friend inspired you to pen down this lovely OS, and my friend Seetha has inspired me to write something on JaGan today.

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Tulasi14

@Tulasi14

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

A ray of hope lifted the spirits,

Still not happy,but have to take what we get.

I see the rainbow in the sky,

Where all the seven colors looked so happy,

Painted an arch of VIBGYOR,

Under the arch I see so many friends,

Enjoying each other's company,

Forgot there friend,a pat on back is a great encouragement ,

This journey of writing ,started long time ago,

Please keep writing and don't stop,

This brings solace,comfort and joy ,

To many people...

They say a sunset is an artist's pallet,

The colors are so intense,it became

A dream of the photographer,

Every time he want to capture ,

Something used to go wrong.

But never gave up.

This is life people come n go,

Only few people stick with us,

Memories we carry thru generations,

My dear friend to night ,

I see all the colors of autumn,

Reds,yellows,oranges,green

And many more .

Enjoy the Mother Nature ,

The best place to find solace,

Keep writing and bring us the uniqueness ,

Which you already have thru your writings.

Edited by Tulasi14 - 11 years ago

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vibha

@vibraj

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Beautifully conceptualised and written OS. I liked the way you involved every character, the sharing of confidences between Anandi and Ganga, the conversation between Sid and Jagya, the bed of romance and constant imagery of the sky, stars, seems like you are fascinated by the sky!

Kudos to you, keep it up!