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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali_


not on this day- checked the video- aditi are all these scene uploaded in the vimeo- this one- and the chole batura??yellow ghagara and blazer


nahi nahi...


Manshu also asked to upload...I will 😆I will 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

me got scared 😆

what happened to shiv and his parvati- close up is really 😲😆
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Following is a short commentary of the period between Amol's recovery and Amol's parents rushing up to their room after discovery of the lipstick stain. It is not a story. Just events being related as may have been seen by a child.😃. I wanted to pen this down before the next phase of BV began in earnest.

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Kabhi parents kabhi kids - From the eyes of a child

It had been over a week since Ma and Papa rescued me from the clutches of Amma. The moment Papa scooped me up from that car and held me in the circle of his arms and Ma covered my dirt smudged hand with kisses, all my anxieties and fears vanished. Within the protection of their arms no one dared touch me. I became their brave son once again. Feeling re-energised I reassured them that I was fine. They smiled and nodded but I don't think they believed me.

The next few days Ma would not leave me alone. She kept a constant eye on me though she pretended not to. She would suddenly look away the moment I turned towards her. And she was everywhere. She left no opportunity to caress my cheeks, ruffle my hair and hold me tight at the slightest chance. Ma and Papa would both drop me not only to school but inside my classroom. First day after the incident they took lots of presents and chocolates for my classmates. Both thanked them for being such good friends and taking care of me. I think that day Ma waited the whole time for me outside the class. I could see glimpses of her bright orange odhni fluttering now and again. Even though I was surrounded by friends, sensing her presence gave me comfort.

The night after my return I couldn't sleep. I would wake up every few minutes or so to reassure myself of my surroundings. Only to find either Ma or Papa sitting beside me on my bed holding my hand. Each time they patted me back to sleep. They did not leave my side for a minute. This repeated night after night. It was as if they had put their lives on hold. They wanted to erase the slightest memory of those times when I had nearly been lost to them. I knew I had lucked out to get them as my parents.😊

As days flew by, things stated getting back to normal. The fear of Amma lessened and Ma began taking some interest again in her social work. Laughter once again filled my home.😃

One evening after I returned from school Ma had to go to Bhaili for some important work. I was enjoying with Big Daddu when papa called. He spoke to Dadi and then talked to me. He told me that he had to take Ma for some work and they would be a little late. That I should eat and sleep. I bravely told him that I would be OK with Dadi and Big Daddu but I did not like it. I already missed them.💔

Ma called later to check whether I had eaten. She told me they would be home soon and to sleep with Big Daddu. They would carry me up later.

Dadi tried very hard to put me to bed but sleep wouldn't come. I wanted Ma and Papa. I could not sleep without them. I craved for Papa's presence and Ma's soothing voice that would ease me to sleep.😔

I kept asking Dadi when they would return. Each time the answer was 'soon'. Though she cajoled me, I stubbornly refused to sleep. Seeing my agitation she took me to the main hall to wait for them. Big Daddu kept me company. I was getting sleepier, angrier and grumpier by the minute. I stared at the clock. 9, 9:30, 10. How could their work take so long. My face grew sullen and tears welled in my eyes.😭

Just then I heard sounds of laughter. I got excited. It was Ma and Papa. Then they came into view. But what was this. Papa was trying to catch Ma and she was trying to run away. I became even more agitated. How could they be laughing and why were they playing catch-me-if-you-can at night? Suddenly seeing me and Big Daddu, they came to an abrupt halt. Both glared at each other. Then they came towards me and hugged me. But I had also decided not to relent. I puffed up my face even more. Ma and Papa cajoled me. Papa promised to take me for a boat ride and Ma just kept hugging me and saying sorry. Finally papa apologised by holding his ears. My anger lessened.😃

I was about to smile and hug him when I saw a red stain on Papa's collar. I pointed it out. Papa said it was juice. Big Daddu and Dadi seemed to find it extremely funny. But not Ma and Papa. Ma freaked and Papa's face grew as red as the colour of that stain. I could'nt care less what it was. I just wanted him to pick me up and carry me to my bed. I wanted to sleep. But before I could say another word or lift my arms to be picked up Ma got up and ran up the stairs to our room mumbling something. And a moment later in front of my bewildered eyes, Papa too ran after her. Was he once again trying to catch her?😡

One day I would get them to teach me this new style of catch-catch with pauses in the middle. But for the moment, I could do nothing but wait patiently hoping that my parents turned kids would finish their game soon and remember to come back and take me to bed!!😉



Anjujag, angel3, LauraM, Chit15, umam, Russhme22, anshurg5, dixie123, pandeypriya03, aparnauma, __Neha__, adi2512, nandita_bVian, blushing,

Thank you all for appreciating the maze of emotions a child has to wander through in this big bad world😃

Originally posted by: blushing

Arti 🤣 🤣 superb

Amol ke mumma papa playing catch me if u can at night 🤣 🤣


Thanks Aditi.😃

Originally posted by: aparnauma

Arti 😆

Amol totally pissed off with his parents' childish behaviour that explains it😊


Thank you Aparna 😆

Originally posted by: adi2512

Arti,

So cute 😳 ❤️

you top at penning down such emotions and such humor ⭐️


Thanks Uma. Really enjoyed it.⭐️


Thank you Nandita

Originally posted by: anshurg5

Arti,

🤣🤣 Fabulous.

Hope mummy papa will not teach this game of catch-catch to their sunny boy any time soon.😉


Thanks Anshu. They don't even know what they are doing.😉

Originally posted by: pandeypriya03

RTee nice one yaar

❤️

Thank you Priya

Originally posted by: dixie123

@Arti: Awesome POV from Amol.. 😆 Catch me if you can 😳

Waise, I liked the way you have written about lessening the fear by AnSh and also them being by his side. Seems very realistic.. 😊


Thank you Nivi for appreciating this aspect.⭐️. A scene on this would have been nice. But well, we will manage.

Originally posted by: Russhme22

Aarti.. So sweet 😳 Poor little man is totally confused about his parent's catch-me



Thank you Rashmi. Poor tyke is too young...⭐️

Originally posted by: __Neha__

Arti i just read your writing 😆😆

"One day I would get them to teach me this new style of catch-catch with pauses in the middle. " 🤣 🤣 🤣

Fab one ⭐️

I am still laughing 😆😆


Thank you Neha. Poor bewildered kid. Just wanted to sleep...😆
Edited by RTee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
GM AT
AT Killing going on⭐️

Want new name: "TESTING TIMES"
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Posted: 11 years ago
While I enjoy Anandi vs HethSingh and J vs HethSingh in the current track
I want this dadibua to be entirely for Shekhar parivar excluding AnSh and Amol
I want Daddu take on Dadi bua and defend his family and their life style to her.After all it is his wish that the women in his family don't cover their heads and go out and work or have fun as per their wishes.So he should be the one.
I want this to be a solid track for Senoir Shekhar parivar sadasyas .Don't care for the characters but the actors.They need something substantial to justify their existence in the show and for once contribute positively to the show.

While both A and S can defend themselves about their equation with Singh parivar and J.
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As for JaAn equation and it's repercussions on AnSh and JaGan it should be dealt seperately and should not be made into family drama it should be just a track for the couples.

Gauri felt insecure in her relationship with J which was natural and even Shiv at the begining wanted to know what the equation was which again is a natural thing.

But this grwoing friendship between them how does that affect AnSh and JaGan should be shown.
Because both Shiv and Ganga are shown to be much more mature and understanding than Gauri while sense of insecurity is narural how will the couples deal with that is wht shud be shown.
Edited by aparnauma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RTee

GM AT

AT Killing going on⭐️

Want new name: "TESTING TIMES"

👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RTee

GM AT

AT Killing going on⭐️

Want new name: "TESTING TIMES"

Yes me too for this name- Chahat already suggested -

Arti-me yet to read story- i missed it-
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: blushing

true plz no umeed aasha in nst AT name


why 😕 all umeed aasha lost 😲
how about something related to anniversary of kashmir

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Posted: 11 years ago
totally Dadu shd say told his sis

he treat his Bahu and pota bahu as his own daughter...



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali_

Yes me too for this name- Chahat already suggested -

Arti-me yet to read story- i missed it-


It is not a story Anjali. Take your time. ⭐️

Will post it again in New AT if I am feeling 😈 with Amol's parents.

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