SY FF : Affairs of the heart - Ch 28 updt pg 143

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malika

@_symphony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

*uhoo uhoo* so the man comes hun!😉...

loved how maturely anandi handled the situation...composed and calm...looking forward to how she meets and gets along with mr handsome profile!😉

neha will w8 for the next update with a bated breath...cont soon

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lishu_

@lishu_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Neha's FF !!
SidYusha FF!!
Shiv's Entry!! ☺️

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Blukitten

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Btw for the intrested
The tall handsome profile is no one else but Shiv 😉

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malika

@_symphony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: nniks
Btw for the intrested
The tall handsome profile is no one else but Shiv 😉

🤣 Ye bhi koi kehni ki baat hai 😆

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saviani

@saviani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Awesome update dear,

Plz update the next part soon...

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Priya901

@Priya901

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Here comes Shiv...our hero..

pls pls update soon...the story has become too interesting now...i wish someone make a serial out of this FF😳 😳

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debbie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Dear Neha,

I always like your stories, they are so dreamy and we all love to dream especially romantic ones.

However I do appreciate you coming with a more realistic one. Here the characters are more natural. So Jagya was nearly cheating on Anandi. However I appreciate him clearing the stuff rather than taking further advantages of her. In real life people are even worse, many love to play double lives. DONO HATH ME LADDU 😡🤢

I would appreciate if you show a realistic Shiv with small vices. This might be your nth FF and with each FF you are evolving as a writer. A real writer is one who can take criticism as well and can work on them. Great job, and waiting for more.

❤️

debbie