SidYusha FF: tera mujhse hai pehle ka.. LAST PART!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is written with the wonderful Pratyusha Banerjee in mind. I suggest you don't read it unless you can visualize her.

Part 1: Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye

A young girl was standing on the side of a lonely road in a hot, baking village. She had never felt so foolish before! Nursing her bruised arm, she rebuked herself.

"I never should have tried to get here on my scooty! Romeo can't handle these roads! Ek pothole aaya nahi ki Romeo ka handle bhi gaya aur mera hand bhi! Maa-Bapusa don't even know that I'm coming and cell isn't working! What am I going to do! Hey bhagwan, koi gaadi bhej do!"

Squinting in the dust, Anandi could see an open air jeep coming towards her. A young guy that she had never seen before was driving it.
Shiv's attention was diverted toward a girl who was waving at him.. A hitchhiker! In Jaitsar! In his last 6 months as Collector of Jaitsar, this was a sight he had yet to see. Most of the villagers travelled by foot or on cycle. Who was this little princess?
The man stopped his jeep right beside her. To put it precisely, he was a total stud! She was wondering how Mr Handsome had come to be in her village and how had she not known? Surely Gulli should have told her that a Greek God had descended into Jaitsar. Who was this man?
Disheveled and bruised, with her damaged scooter lying in the dust, she looked tired. But even in such a state, she looked beautiful.. Radiant.. The kind of village beauty his brother Mahi teased he would find someday. Who was this delightful vision?

Sorry for the short post but I just wanted to set it up. Do you like it? Lets get them talking next time!


Index-
part 1- page 1
part 2- page 2
part 3- page 3
part 4- page 3
part 5- page 5
part 6- page 5
part 7- page 7
part 8- page 9
part 9- page 10
part 10- page 12
Epilogue- page 13
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start. Loved it and want to read more šŸ‘ šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Michelle šŸ‘
Nice and interesting start. Please continue
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michelle please do continue dearšŸ˜› very well written
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Good going Michelle..I am hungry for more..
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much needed at this time...keep going...it s a wonderful start...
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plz continue...it gv me a grt relief wn i see prats fan.
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😊Beautiful beginning of the story 😳 Please, do continue, and update soon.😊
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Hey nice beginning ...update soon...
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Part 2: Hum hai raahi Pyar ke

"Um.. Aapko kaha jaana hai? Kya aapko lift chahiye?", Shiv was overcome with shyness. This seldom happened, but then again, it was unusual for him to meet such striking women too. She was dressed in a simple white and blue kurti and jeans but she looked absolutely enchanting.

"Ji, haan, mujhe Jaitsar jaana hai.. Aap agar uss taraf jaa rahe hai toh please mujhe lift de deejiye.. Aapki bahut meherbani hogi." Anandi was unnecessarily blushing. She hoped he wouldn't notice. It was a rather new experience for her, but then, it wasn't like she had ever met such an attractive man before. Dressed in a light blue shirt, he had this unconscious confidence and style about him.

"Main Jaitsar mein hi rehta hu. Aap jeep mein baithiye, main aapka scooter back mein rakh deta hu." He began to move towards the scooter.

"Arey nahi, iski kya zarurat hai! Main baad mein kisi ko bhej dungi..", Anandi tried to stop him.

"Dekhiye its alright. Aap please gaadi mein baith jaiye.", Shiv said in a stern voice.

Anandi immediately sat in the jeep. She smiled to herself. She was the Teacher Ji of Jaitsar. Who was this man who could order her.. And how come she was listening to him?
After placing Anandi's scooter in the back of his jeep, Shiv sat in the car and began driving towards the district. Both of them were feeling a little awkward and ill at ease.

"Aap Jaitsar mein kaha tehri hai? I mean, main aapko kaha drop karu?" Surely she was visiting someone here. If she lived here, he would have met her or at least seen her before.

"Ji aap mujhe Badi Haveli chhod dijiye. Main wahi rehti hu."

"Dadi Ji, I mean Kalyani Ji ke yaha?", he asked, surprised.

"Aap jaante hai unhe? Woh meri Dadisa hai."

"Singh family ko kaun nahi jaanta! Main Jagdish ka bhi achcha friend hu."

"Oh." Why did she feel so weird to hear him say Jagya's name? She wanted to change the topic.

"By the way, I'm Shivraj Shekhar, Jaitsar ka-", Shiv put out his hand.

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