AnSh FF - That Golden summer last updt 51,note-52 - Page 41

Thanks for the update dear...I felt both happy & sad. Happy for my daily dose and sad as its over 😒

Coming to the analysis part here it goes... I have read your previous works and though this story was contemporary but somehow I feel "Stranger on the hill" is the one which is closer to my heart. As you already know, you are great at narrating hot stuff, but I would suggest you to concentrate on the emotional side bit more. In "Stranger on the hill" with complete submission Shiv explained Anandi each and every move of his beautifully which I liked the most.

If you analyse timeless classics (Jane Eyre, Gone with the wind, farewell to arms, P&P, Cleopatra & Mark Antony, Paris & Helen etc) most of them are written either with an ongoing war in background or got immense pain associated with the story which captures the soul.

The last episode seems to be ending all a sudden unlike the flow of the story. But hats off to your spirit, you could manage to write to chapters even after this prats replacement jhatka. You do have potential to be a good professional writer...Please PM me in case you write any further stories in future Ansh or not ⭐️

love

Debbie

thanks debbie for ur comment n analysis...I m an amature writer...i just startrd writing coz ansh were cute...thry inspired me to imagine.I had many twists n turns planned but didnt hav heart to go through it.
I will continue writing but not on ansh.
N as for being professional writer let me see wen i get enough time for that.
ur right i m not very good at emotional things..i m more into erotica ;-)
i wil def PM u if i start something new :-D

Dear Neha, I am glad you finish it today ,because today is the day I am leaving BV for ever ..maybe not IF ,I will see..but BV for shure..your update will be the last thing I will remember about AnSh,because,they doesent existed for me enymore. I will never ever belive in farytaile and its time to grow up..Thank you for the beautiful clousure you give to my dream..

Please, a small request ... if you ever thing considering writing on sidyusha -- plz PM me.

Great FF!! I loved it all the way and am very sad that it ended.. But I understand the reasons behind it and I support them.. For me too, Ansh was Sidyusha only.. The magic is certainly gone now with Prat's exit.. Thanks for making the AnSh even more magical with your FFs.. I'll miss your writing 😭

One more point i personally felt n wanted to suggest to shiv is ---- not to even try lifting new anandi,,,,

wow... m dancing right now...superb... and awaiting ur next story on Ansh

Thank you very much Neha for this beautiful story...I'm crying all over again 😭