AnSh FF ~Shadows~ Cmpltd 9/5 NOTE -100 - Page 32

Originally posted by: masin

Oh dear! There seems to be a slight misunderstanding...Shiv understands that he was rude but Anandi feels that she called his rudeness upon herself... uh oh! I'm definitely not liking the sound of that!

Hopefully the fog between them clears up soon! Loved the way you described Shiv's feelings...I could literally imagine his actions and his facial expressions throughout the entire part!

I'm a little confused though..what exactly did Shiv say that set things off? I re-read the part before the last one and from what I gathered, the last thing he said was "We each have a life to get back to" ...was that the highlight of his rude behaviour or is there something else that was said and done on their way home that we (as readers) don't know about?

Loving the story thus far, keep up the great work Pal! Oh and...any updates on your new story? Have you decided whether to write it or not..?

Originally posted by: umam

Brilliant Pal 😊

I could the feel the pain and struggle that both Shiv and Anandi were going through and the words that you chose to describe silence -welcoming and torturous -Admirable!!

Originally posted by: debumonty

Abb ayega maja...its easy to hurt people...in fact we hurt the people most we love, not realising the outcome. now let the kadak kadak CS go down on his knees and asked for forgiveness...I am enjoying this as never before...and want MOREEE

Originally posted by: blushing

Pal...

I am BIG fan of ur writing story & YOU 🤗

Originally posted by: Kurup

Pal...

I dont know if I missed reading any chapter in between or u r yet to unfold the story which happened in the past...

coz the last chapter u illustrated Anandi's feelings and she taking the blame on her and in this chapter u illustrated shiv's feelings and he taking the blame on himself...Did i miss something as to what they both are referring to...

Main pagaaal ho jaoongaaa...mujhe sach mein kuch samaj mein nahi aaraha haiii...yaaa toh tum mujhe samjhaooo yaaa agar if its not updated then update it so that i can understand what actually happened between these two after their talks under the tree in the rain near the temple...

Originally posted by: rdjha

hey Pal...great update...u really brought out the pain in both of them really well. i hope Shiv gets a chance to apologize soon and anandi also accepts it and their journey again starts on the right track 😉 waiting for the next 😃

Originally posted by: adi2512

Pal...

Beautiful update...

You are back in your element totally in this update...⭐️

Frankly speaking., I Loved this chapter more than the last...b'coz I could experience those emotions., (w.r.t to both Shiv & Anandi ) you wanted to convey thru' your writing...😳

Originally posted by: HemaG

its sooo nice

ur language is the best😊