The Promise - Short AnSh OS

VerboseG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Thank you, Muku, for this realistic piece of writing.

Loved it!

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Manshi

@Mithi_vani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Its lovely...superb os...U show exect convo of Ansh...they will surely given such promises to eachother...I hope I can see such heartly talk of Ansh in actual bv... Thank u for this lovely-sweet os... 👏 👍🏼

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anshurg5

@anshurg5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

malika amazing
you captured their spirit so beautifully,
their care and commitment towards each other is really touching.
well done👍🏼

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malika

@_symphony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: 5cents
Mallika, Bravo beautiful!! Absolutely loved it!!! 👏
Such deep thoughts and meaning conversation only Anandi & Shiv can have. This may actually happen in the show also.
The 3 c's cooperation, commitment & communication are so important for the relationship to flourish. I'm sure AnSh will manage to find out way back into each others hearts even after disagreeing on a particular subject.

Aww thats so sweet Tina...so glad u liked my effort.THanku 🤗

@red: I so agree...and that for sure is the essence of AnSH 😳

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Amrita

@Maahzabeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Hey I liked it very much... i started liking BV after shiv entered the show!! Love the OS..wanna see some scenes like this in BV...

Great Work :)

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umam

@umam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hats off to you Mallika ⭐️, the way you portray A and S: their emotions, feelings, thoughts, and words 😊

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Kurup

@Kurup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Wowww Mallikaaa...this was so yummmylicious...I think many of them might have gone to the hospital to check their postprandial and preprandial bloos sugar level to know whether they have turned diabetic after reading this...

superbbb workkk...do continue this one with the next chapter...dont just stop here.

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malika

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Posted: 12 years ago

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