Originally posted by: aparnauma
Anjy - I loved this.I really hope CVs read this.Because this is what most of are wanting to see.
You brought out the differences in A and J with respect to their relationships with their respective partners so well.
A and S relationship growing stronger and stronger with each passing day as opposed to deteriorating relationship of J and G.
A was forced into a relationship with S but she embraced the relation for the love of her family and found happiness and contentment in that relationship.She found liberation in her relation with S
J on the other hand broke every relationship of his to be with G and now finds himself chained to G in a relationship that offers no love no trust no happiness but only a life of discontent and despair.Baby Dukhia is definitely an icing on their cake of misery.
Other than this I don't think I need to tell you what I think of this story of yours.😊