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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
its great...wonderfully written and sooo sweeet...waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
WOW Aditi your second update came pretty fast,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,and this part is also very sweet and touchy😃 very nicely written👏,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,and really I am waaiting for the Mahahdhamakedar SR😳,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,so do update soon and thanx for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Hey Aditi, thanks for the PM😊
Read both the parts together😃😃😃 Its really cute😳😳😳
Kitna maza aata agar serial me bhi they show this "bichadna"😉😉
Okay waiting for the update with "patience"...jo hai nahi but still...
update soon😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Aditi...
Wonderful update...
Loved this more...😳
am' sure I'll like the next update "morer"...😆
waiting...patiently...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Anandi please rona band karo. Shuuuh'.bass'.Shiv clams her down. He broke hug & wiped her tears. He cupped her face with his hand. Baitho''yahan pe baith jao. He made her sit on sofa & give her glass of water.

Ab thik hoo he asked her.

Ji'''..main thik hunn. Sorry''.he put his finger on her lips.

Shuuuh. No sorry.

Anandi smiled & put her head on his shoulder. Shiv wraps his arm around her. 🥳Maine aapko bahot zorse daant diya na. Pata nahi kya hoo gaya mujhe aap dopehar ko aap ghar pe nahi aaye toh main bahot naaraz thi aapse.

Lekin meri bhi galati hain na. Mujhe batana chaiyeh tha aapko Shiv said.

Nahi'..nahi. Koi jaroori kaam hoga isse liye warna main janati hunn aap kabhi isa nahi karenge.

Shiv smiled. Itana yakeen hain aapko?

Haan khud se bhi jayda. Aapki chai thandi hoo gaye hain main phir se banake lati hunn.

Shiv nodded. Anandi goes to kitchen. Shiv was thinking about what happen.

Anandi ne kaha ki woh mujhese pyar karti hain. Mere bina reh nahi sakati. Kya sach mein unhon yeh kaha ki emotional outburst mein isa keh gaye. Kuch samjh mein nahi aa raha hain. Kya main unse directly jake poochon? Lekin agar isa nahi hua toh bekar mein Anandi aapne aapko dosh degi. Oh god in aurtonko samjhna kitana mushkil hain.🤣 Kuch dinon se main dekh raha hunn Anandi mere sath kafi comfortable hoo gaye hain. Jab mian unhe dekhta hun unki aakhon mein ajeeb kashish dekhti hain. Shaam ko jab ghar lauta hunn jis tarah se woh mujhe dekhke muskurati hain. 😳Isa lagata hain ki unki aakhon mein mere pyar hain. Aur aaj kitana emotional hoo gaye thi woh mujhe dekhke.☺️ Maine chidhaya toh chid gaye mujhe par.

Aap kya sooch rahe hain? His thoughts were interrupted by her voice.

Ji''.kuch nahi.

Lejeyeh aapki grama garam chai.

Yah. Thanks.

Main toh poochana hee bhool gaye. Aapki trip kaise rahi?

Haan. Acchi thi. Lagata hain sare kaam ab jald se jald hoo jayenge.

Haan waise se bhi aap koi kaam than lee aur use pura na Karen isa toh hoo hee nahi sakta.

He smiled. Main jara fresh hoke aur change karke aata hunn.

Haan. Bilkul.

At dinner Shiv was happy to see all his fav dishes. Anandi served him. Heasked her join too. But she refues.

Aapko aaj main khud parosungi. Apa mana nahi karenge.

Lekin mujhe accha nahi lagta''

Nahi aaj meri baat manne padegi. Chaleyh suru keejeyeh.

Anandi ji.

Collector sahab'.accha main khud aapko khilati hunn. Chaleyeh mooh kholiyeh.

She feeds him. He enjoyed it her dominance over him. He finished his dinner.

Ab toh khaa leejeeyeh. Chaliyeh main khilata hunn aapko.

Nahi'''main khaa loongi. Suddenly Shiv's phone rings. He left from there. Anandi ate food from same plate of Shiv. She was smiling while eating. Shiv comes back & stunned to see Anandi is eating with his jhoothi thali. He looked at her but she was smiling alone.

Yeh Anandi ko aaj kya hoo gaya hain? Meri jhothi thali mein kyun khaana khaa rahe hain. Anandi finishes her dinner. She finishes her kitchen work too.

Shiv was in bedroom thinking about Anandi. Kya main unse seedhe pooch loon?

Aap phir se kuch soochne lage? Kya hua hain Collector sahab?

Nahi kuch bhi toh nahi.

Chalieyeh soo jaye. Aap thak gaye honge.

Haan'..he try get up from chair. But felt pain in his back. Ooch''he screamed.

Kya hua? Anandi goes near to him.

Kuch nahi. Meri back'.

Hey bhagwan'.mian Lal singh ko call karti hunn.

Nahi main pain killer leta hunn. Kalb hi liye thi.

Kya? Aapne mujhe bataya nahi. Aur pain kiler jayada nahi lene chaiyeh. Bahot dard hoo raha hain kya?

Nahi ab thik hain. Main medicine leeta hunn.

Nahi jayda antibiotic lena thik nahi. Apa rukeyeh. Main abhi aaye.

Anandi goes to kitchen comes back with some oil. Chalyeh let jaye aur aapani T shirt nikaleyeh.

Ji...???🤣

Haan. Main maalish kar deti hunn. Chalyeh...

Nahi rehne deejeeyeh. Apa kyun takleef

Takleef mujhe nahi aapko hoo rahe hain. Jaldi aaye aur lete jayeh. T shirt utharne mein madat karu?🥳

Shiv was stunned. She goes near & helps him. He lay on bed on his stomach. Anandi sats near to him & start giving massage on his back. He felt good when she touches his back. Anandi is doing fab job Shiv is actually feeling good.

Arre wha aap toh kamaal ki maasagist hain.😆

Hain na'.aaram lag raha hain na. Dekheyega ab aapko gehari neend aayegi. Kal subah tak ekdum acche bhale hoo jayenge aap.

Yah. He closed his eyes. After sometime Anandi turn him on his back. She covered him with quilt. She sits near to him & caresses his hair. Shiv had smile on his face. He slept peacefully. In middle of night Shiv felt some weight on his chest. He slowly opens his eyes. He was surprised to see Anandi's hand on his chest & she is sleeping very close to him.☺️ His heart skipped beat. She was so close to him for first time.☺️ Her hair was open & pallu dropped. Infact her dupatta was off her body. Her head is near his shoulder. Without jewelry also she is looking absolutely stunning. He put a side her hair from face. He tries to move his hand she mutters in her sleeps'..

Haan''''..Shiv soo jaye. Main hunn aapke pass. She moved close to him again.🤗

Shiv smiled at her. First time she called him by his name that too in her sleeps. He put his left arm around her. He placed soft kiss on her hair.☺️ They hugged each other.🤗

Early morning Shiv slowly opened his eyes. Anandi is still very close to him. He turns her side. She holds his right hand with her hand. He freed his hand. He caresses her hair lovingly. He put his hand around her waist & kissed her forehead.

Anandi is in deep sleep. She smiled & mutters ''.Sone deejeyeh Shiv.😆

He was shocked.😲 He goes near to her. She is indeed sleeping. He laughed slowly. He smirked & kissed on her left chick. Anandi just made face but still not awake. Shiv kissed her on her right chick.

Shiv''sone deejeyeh mujhe Anandi said. She turns around. Shiv loved her sleep talk.😳 He bends on her & placed kiss on her neck.☺️ Anandi gets irritated & turns around.

Kya kar rahe hain Shiv? Abhi mujhe sone deejeyeh. Pyar karne ke liye poora din pada hain. Waise bhi aaj Sunday hain. And she goes back to sleep.😆

Shiv was shocked to hear this. He pinched himself.🤣

Ooch'he shouted. Anandi soo rahe hain ya jaag rahe hain He mutters himself. He goes near to her. Anandi Anandi ji aap soo rahe hain ya jag rahe hain?

All of sudden Anandi turns around, she pushed Shiv. Now she is on top of him. Aap kya lagata hain?

Shiv's eyes popped out.🤣 He was looking at her with disbelieve. He was indeed in deep shock to see Anandi's bold avatar.😆

Ji he whispered.

Arre abhi abhi aapne kuch pocha na mujhse?

Ji maine nahi toh''he mutters.

Anandi put her both hand on his bare chest. Accha''jhooth mat boliyeh. Maine sab suna.

Kya suna aapne?

Joh aapne kaha.

Shiv is observing her new attitude. 😆Anandi is looking different today. Her boldness frankness with him, he simply enjoyed it. He holds her hand & pinned her down on bed. Now he is on top of her. Anandi is staring his deep intense eyes.😳

Haan toh aap kya pooch rahe thi shiv asked her mischievously.

Kyun bataun?

Arre batana toh padega. Warna main''..

Warna kya?

Warna yeh'he started tickling her. Anandi is rolling on bed with laughter.

Bass'.Shiv '..bass'Shiv''. Shiv. She holds his hand start ticking him too. He rolled down too.

Anandi bass karoo'..Anandi

Ab'..kyun'..

While tickling each other they accidently rolled down from bed. Anandi is on top of him. Their lips touched each other while going down.☺️ Anandi looked at him. Shiv was equally shocked. They shared intense eye locked. Anandi's hand were on his bare chest & she was completely on his body. Anandi felt bit shy since he was not waering his T shirt & her dupatta was no where in picture.😉 She tries to gets up but vain. She drops herself on him again their lips touched.😳 He asked to stop. He rolled her on his left side. Anandi gets up quickly & Shiv too. Anandi grabs her dupaata from bed ran towards washroom & Shiv stands there with smile on his face.

🤗

Edited by blushing - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Wat a bhondu why did he let her run away...he shld hav caught her n finished the job ;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nniks

Wat a bhondu why did he let her run away...he shld hav caught her n finished the job ;-)



thoda sabra rakho sare icchain poori hongi balike...😆

Ishq ka maaza dheere dheere aata hain my dear...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Wow! its worth wait😃 Anandi sleep talkings... cho cute😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
🤣bhondu kahinka🤣
and anandi 😲
Edited by khusi_* - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Haaaye such a sweet update...I turned diabetic yaarooonnn...Anandi was bold here atleast to express her feelings and this SHiv bas naaam kaa colllector haiii...isharooon ko bhi nahi samjhtha haiii...
arrey isss buddhu ko koi samjaho tat a female eats from her husband's plate only when she has accepted him wholeheartedly and he noticed her smile yet he could not guess it...
feel sad for anandi kaise insaan se shaadi kiyaa...next time shiv ko bold banaooo,,,

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