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Shiv is on round and suddenly sees some one walking on the side of mudded path...stops the jeep and check out...he is shoked to see its jagdish all in drunken state... almost on the verge of falling down...shiv catches him before he feels down and takes him to the havellii...

Evry one is shoked to see shiv carrying druken jagya who is now sleeping...his clothes tatred and like he has been bitten by some one as blood is there on the side of his lips and purple marks on the face...bhairo is quit angry and says to DS

Bhairo – yaa mera khun kaisa hou saketa hai maa saa ( how this man can be my felsh and blood)

DS – naa bhairo essa kaeen bolay hai,sab theek hou jawego...makhan...ooo makhan ( no bhairo..dont say like this..evry thing will eb alright)

Bhairo – shiv beta... mujhay samjh nahe araha hai keya kahun apsay ( son shiv i don't know wht or how to say you anything)

Shiv – nahe bapu saa...apkou kuch kahnay kee jarurat nahe hai... mai samjh sakta hun...bass sabka aur sabka khayal rakheyaga and koe bhe help cheya tou bateyga mujhay ( no papa..you don't have to say anything to me ..i can understand you and your delima well..only take care of everyone and if need any help just tell me or call me ohk)

Bhairo – sees shiv walking by to DS... and thinks...

Shiv – dadiji mai chalta hun (i have to go)

DS – aisay kaisy..dophar hai ,khan kha kai jaouga (its after non and u will go after eating lunch)

Shiv – ajj nahe dadiji maa and CM ghar pur wait kar rahe hai..kafe baar phone agyaa..tou (i cant as mom and CM waiting for him in lunch as they caling regularly)

DS – han yaa bhe sahe hai..jaa..maa nai khanay pai intazar karna achaa naa hova... acha ahai.(its also correct...its not god to let mom wait on lunch table..so go)

Shiv – smiles and bends and touches her feet

DS – takes hold of his face and lovingly says mahraa ladesurrr...

Shiv – having a slight tears in eyes and says...app apna khayal rakhengee naa and anandi kaa bhe(you will take care of yourself and anandi's too naa)

They both jsut hugs each other and shiv leaves...bhairo,tau saa tai saa and DS watching him going with so much love gratitude and pride... and bhairo says to DS... kash yaa mera beta hota(i jsut wish he was my son)...DS and evry oen just looks sad and brokenly at bhairo and tau saa gets a call and just touches bhairo shoulder and leves... gehna says she will make soem thing for jagdish...DS also says to bhiro you go she will take care fo everything and signlas basant to take bharo away from jagdish...

DS – makhan maehmaan walou kamrou theek kar deyou... (guest room have you cleaned it)

Makhan – han hokum (yes hokum)... and kothree sai chotay kawanr saa kai kapdray bhe nikal deyou ( and from store room i have taken out small kauwanr saa clothes too)

DS – from hand signals makhan to pick jagdish from sofa and take him to guest room and watches makhan doing so...with love yet repent on what he is becoming and sheen of tears in her eyes and worried when anandi will return from school in evening how to tell her and her reaction and more worried ke after so long and so much pain and evry oen effort finaly they are seeing anandi..old anandi returning back...and now jagdish here hwo will she react...and gehna understood her worry and touches her soulder and try to comfort her...

There just before school gets over anandi hears shiv jeep voice coming to halt in her school and wonder what bring him here... and just then shiv enters and all kids turns jubllint seeing him and stops studying and shiv teases anandi...now tou your last 15minutes is not yours its his with the kids and its time for masteee...and anandi wants to stop everyone but already kids run out of the classroom and goes to the play ground and gulli comes hearing so much noice and when see shiv understand and asys she will take care fo the kids and shiv smile in gratitude and turn to wards anandi who is in stern mood with hands on waist...shiv smiles and ohk hok next time he wont ...but at the moment he has to discuss with her soem thing important and he dosent have much time as at 5 he has soem meeting and he cant afford to postpone it...so ..he will leve her home also and will also get time to talk to her too...

Now anandi is quit taken back with the seriousness in shiv voice and is worried and ask immediately evry oen alright at home naa and then remember BM and asks you talk with maa regular in net she is alright naa BM too...shiv calms her down and says nah everything alright at home..and anandi suddenly turns and asys dadaji...he was complaining about geting faintness...and before she can ask more shiv goes to her and knocks her head down and asys evry oen evry where is alright...its soem thing different he need to talk to ehr about...so stop freeking about evry one and pick your things and lets go home...anandi looks confused but do as he asks and says to gulli to take care of everything and leves with shiv

Anandi looks at shiv and finally cant stop her slef and asks..

Anandi – kuch batengay bhe baat keya hai ( will you tell me what it is)...abb tou ghar bhe agyaa ( nwo tou home is also almost there)

Shiv after travelling from some time stops the jeep on the lonely lane near the havelli... turns to anandi

Shiv – apkou pata hai mai ajj jaipur sai aarha tha... (you know today i was returning from jaipur)...and jab jaitsir mai enter karnay kai thodre daer baad hee mujhay rasatay mai koe milaa...( after entering to jaitsur on the way to home he meet soem one on the road)...mai uss insane koe aisay akela nahe choudr payaa rastay mai(i cudnt leave that person on raod like that)...mai usay ghar lai gaya apnay satth...(so i took the man to home with me)...

Anandi – yaa tou apnay bahut achaa keya...(that tou you did good job)... pur samjh nahe ayaa ess mai serious kaun see baat thee...(but cant understand whats so serious about it)...oh!kahen usay chout tou anhe lage hai..app bolay tou hospital sail ala singh kou bulana hai keya..(oh you mean to say the man is injured so you need lal singh help..let me call hospital)

Shiv - nahe anandi yaa baat nahe hai (no anandi tis not that)

Anandi – now really confuse and looks at shiv...

Shiv – he is totally broken and don't know how to say,and anandi cant belive what she is seeing...his akdru collector all broken and she cant stop her self

Anandi – she gets down from the jeep and goes to shiv and takes his face in his hands and evry calmly says to him...apnay mujhay hamesha sahaar nahee sath deya..wou sath jou mujhay kabhe nahe mila..aisa dost jou mere ankhay padr leta hai..mere har baat mujhay samjh anay sai paehaly wou samjh leta hai... mera wou dost kahan gaya...jesnay haesha bina jegjhkay apne har dil kee baat mujhsay kee...( you always never gave me suppprt but always stood by me ... the need to equailt which i never get form any one and oyu only gave me that... the man who always reads my eyes and understands my need and everything even before i can myself understand what i want...where is that friend of mine who always talked to me about everything without any hesitation in him as his heart is always pure)

Shiv – shiv touches her hands and get down of the jeep and very calmly asks anandi...dont oyu wana know who that man was???????

Anandi - now she is worried and and confuse too as she cant imagine nor can understand what is shiv saying...

Shiv – its jagdish

Anandi – complete shoked to hear jagdish name from shiv

Shiv – bahut mushkil sai apaky chehray mai hasee aye thee...Dadi ji ..papa hum sab ke mahnat apky cheray mai dekhnay lagee thee ... (it tool so much effort form evry one to amke you smile and finaly effort could be seen in your smile and now

Anandi – aura bb keyaa?????????... kuch nahe hua... abb bhe mai hans rahe hun...daekheya mere taraf and bateya kahan hai udase...bateyaa... (who said i am sad...see..look at me...look at me and tell do i look sad to you)

Shiv – just smile at the effort and determination in her face and tears roll down his eyes

Anandi – she is so moved by the care, understanding,her pain and false effort to show shiv yet he knew she was in pain listening jagdish in havelli now...so moved..ke shejust went in his arms and very silently put her head on his chest and hands above his heart,like gently massaging the pain there...

Shiv – he just hugged her back very lightly and silently prayed ke he can keep his promise to keep his anandi always happy ...

Anandi – she could feel his tension his hesitation the need to protect her so clearly ke automaticly smile came to her lips and she hugged him with both hands... and her eyes turned some what like disbelief ...she was loving being in his arm...the security of being there... the emotions in him were so strong yet so full of gentel care,the strong hold of his yet so holding her like she is china doll and might break if he huged her tightly ...she just beholds this moment in her heart and huged him back more tightly and geting more close to him and senced shiv tension geting away and he relexing being there in her arms and the hug which was comfort hug turned into romantic hug and anandi dint wanted to let go the feel of shiv's strong and protective arms and closed eyes and just feel the love ozzing out of his hug and the way he was holding her so delicately yet with so much love and care...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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sep 14 ko online jarur rehna payal
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful ... waiting impatiently for an AnSh hug in the serial too ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sweeett OS Payal!! 👏 👏
Loved it! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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why sur
whats on 14th swetuuu???????????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh wow so cute payal.. that os is so awesome...
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Awesome OS. Loved every bit of word and every bit of emotion they are sharing...

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