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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjanaYYZ

Jagdeesh has left Mumbai and Gauri after discovering how manipulative she is and learning of her affair now marriage with Dr. 33 Khanna. He's now assisting Lal Singh and Dr. Abhishek at the hospital in Jaitsar. But, he's not happy as they constantly belittle him and are considered senior to him. Still he is trying to make amends with them and his family. Sometimes he goes to Anandi and Shiv's place to vent to Anandi. She being the only soul, who still gives him the time of day. Shiv's irritation with their renewed childhood friendship was an unexpected bonus.


Today Jugdeesh was particularly frustrated because Lal Singh had yelled at him for ordering an expensive branded medicine for a patient when a generic version was available. It was only a few hundred rupees more but, Lal Singh had created drama like he had gambled thousands. Maybe Anandi could make Lal Singh back of a bit. She was afterall still the hospital's chief administrator. With that hope Jugdeesh walked over to Shiv and Anandi's house near Circuit House.

It was still early morning and it took a few minutes for Anandi to open the door. She had flour on her cheeks. Before he could tell her about it, Shiv called from their bedroom.

"Anandi mera watch khidhar hai? Dresser par nahi hai" Anandi turned visibly red before Jugdeesh's eyes.

"Woh...woh ... aap.. aap kal raat wohi bathtub ke pass khule te...shayad wahi hai" She slowly stammered out.

"Haan wohi chhoda - milgaya... shukkar karo mein apne ghadi ko uttara tumhein bathtub mein deknhe ka baad bhi!" Shiv shouted back unaware of their guest while Anandi turned redder with embarrassment.

"Shiv - Jugdeesh aa aaya hai!" Anandi stammered back to stop Shiv from getting more graphic. These days he was far too naughty... always whispering things that made her shiver and blush. She secretly loved it, but, not now especially not infront of Jugdeesh!

Oh what was he doing here so early in the morning anyway? Though she shouldn't, she couldn't help but feel sorry for him. He had nobody and mistook her politeness to be friendship. Shiv kept telling her to tell Jugdeesh to get lost, but Anandi didn't have the heart to be that cruel. He was harmless really... besides it was fun to see Shiv get extra possessive around Jugdeesh.

Speaking of time, she had to finish making breakfast fast this morning. They were planning to drive to Udaypur to visit Shiv's family later that day and time was of the essence. With that thought, she signaled Jugdeesh to follow as she headed back to the kitchen.

In the kitchen, she quickly tried to pull the now nearly burnt roti from the tawa that she had forgotten while rushing to open the door. The tawa was, however, too hot and in her hurry Anandi burnt a index finger and thumb. She let out a gasp of pain just as Shiv entered the kitchen. He immediately rushed to her side grabbed her hand and placed it under the cold tap.

"Tum sabki khayal rakhti ho sevai khud ki!" He then proceeded to scold her uncaring of their audience. Seeing her smiling in response, he got madder and frustratedly asked.

"Ab haas kyun rahe ho?"

"Mein sabki khayal rakhti hu aur aap mera!" She responded with an even bigger smile, which he found simply irresistible. Totally oblivious to their audience he kissed her hand and whispered

"Hamesha"

Jugdeesh who had come over hopping to ruin Shiv's morning suddenly felt rather queasy.
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Y'all now owe me one heck of a short story back!

You absolutely made my night!⭐️ I had a horrible weekend and you managed to put a smile on my face. I am going to start writing one in kind. Will have it up by tomorrow for you. Thank you :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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''Anandi !!anandi utho utho anandi plz plz!!!''cried Shiv While patting Anandi's wet face !!

It had been raining heavily in jaitsar and surrounding areas for past one week !! so much rain was never seen for so many years ..Most of the village got flooded and immense loss of property!!Today the sky had cleared up briefly and Anandi had gone to her school to check what was the condition there !! She had been trying to save the school from much damage .. Although DS told not to go alone she went alone and nw its almost late evening and rains have again started pouring Heavily ...
DS being worried that anandi hasnt returned yet and even her phone wasnt responding .Being worried DS decided to call Shiv and Informed him about the situation ..

Shiv quickly hurried to the school using his jeep when he reached there he saw the area was heavily flooded he left his jeep and waded through knee deep water and entered the school premises !! Their he saw Anandi floating in water and unconsious the school roof has got damaged and water was pouring in ...

Cut to present :

He had learnt mouth to mouth resuscitation and was thinking whether he should do it or not he was in great dilemma !! but no it was about someone's life and no thinking about wat everyone else will think i have to save Anandi ab jo hoga woh dekha jayega !! and he proceeded putting his lips above hers and blowing in air !! Common anadi wake up plz tumhe jagna hi hoga !!

''Cough coughhh!! ''
''Anandi tum thik ho na thank god anandi ek pal ke liye mujhe laga i will loose u forever ''said Shiv and hugged her out of happiness..
''Collector saab app yahan mujhe kya hua tha mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahin aa raha''

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Specially dedicated to anjana for her superb OS
This is my very first fiction writing in IF hope u Guys liked it i know its not that good But i tried my best
Edited by ritzi12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: ritzi12

oMG wats dis 🤣🤣🤣Very outlandish i mi8 say🤬

See... had you laughing!😃😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh I am dead ☺️
what are you doing? this is so hot...plz write more and make me dead ☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey anjana.. that was awesome.. lekin is mai bhi hamare shiv kitna pyara hai ye dikhai deta hai. .tu to se manipulate karke besharam prove karna chahit ho.. par besharam to yha par jaghead hai jo dusro ke ghar mai muh utha ke chala aata hai.. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: DonIsback

hey anjana.. that was awesome.. lekin is mai bhi hamare shiv kitna pyara hai ye dikhai deta hai. .tu to se manipulate karke besharam prove karna chahit ho.. par besharam to yha par jaghead hai jo dusro ke ghar mai muh utha ke chala aata hai.. 😆


Prati - Jugat toh hai hi besharam...par Shivji kuch kam nahi!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: AnjanaYYZ


Prati - Jugat toh hai hi besharam...par Shivji kuch kam nahi!😛


oye nahi yaar mera shiv to bhola hai.. pyar mai naya hai na.. isliye kuch nahi samjta.. dekha yaha par bhi use samj nahi aaya tha ki jaghead sab sun raha hai.. bhola bechara... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ohh man I was just wondering remaining outside that whats in thsi post that the pages are flying..LOL.Now I know whats in.I must say terrific ideas all🤣

@Anjana
I loved ur prediction😆...mann to nahin karta mera to give this sweet title to him but I have to say...Bechara Jagiya🤣

@Shaista33
Dear evrything else is fine but plsss ashi with Jagiya🤢 NO NO NO!!
She is such a sweetheart u know...I love her like anything!!Just bcoz her first love couldnt be hers doesnt mean she will get someone like stupid jughead!!She deserves someone as good as shiv or even better!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: DonIsback


oye nahi yaar mera shiv to bhola hai.. pyar mai naya hai na.. isliye kuch nahi samjta.. dekha yaha par bhi use samj nahi aaya tha ki jaghead sab sun raha hai.. bhola bechara... 😉


Haan tumhari bhola ram bhoolgaya uske baare mein😛 Casanovasaab ko toh sirf apni Anandi hi nazar aata hai ☺️... okay ... we better cont this elsewhere... varna Shaista will beat us! And everyone else will be kanphused.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok.. anjana khushi said is we should make thread on it.. i mean ek hi thread mai continue karenge.. tin group baneyga.. bechara.. casenova aur bechara casenova.. kya kehti hai..

aur ha note mai likh bhi denge only for fun.. isliye dont come with serious post and discussion..

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