A short anandi-shiv OS :P

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Time:4pm,Dadisa's room... Bhairon n dadisa taking about shiv anandi marriage...

Dadisa:dekha Bhairon main na kehti thi Shiv is d best choice 4 Anandi,remember how he disagrees to go to doctor but asks 4 anandi's nuskha..lagta hai he starts falling 4 our chodi

Bhairon: yes masa I also noticed that.. but don't do any hurry,give them time

Dadisa: ha aur is chakkar mein choda hat se nikal jaye... nahi main yeh nahi hone de sakti

Anandi : (with tea 4 them in tray) kya nahi hone de sakti dadisa?

Dadisa: no no nothing u go,make foods 4 shiv,I invited him today?u forgot?

Anandi: in annoying face leaves...


Bhairon: so masa today ur going to propose Shiv to marry Anandi?

Dadisa: yes..I think Shiv definately agree to mary Anandi

Anandi coming back to question something about the food but heard last sentence of Dadisa. She was so much in shock..how can her family can do such things to herself.she frustratedly confronts them. "how can u dadisa? How can u Bapusa? Am I now like a bojh to urs?don't want anyone to soothe me..im happy with my loneliness and runs away to her room.

Dadisa:she should not know all this at this time

Bhairon:I'm going to talk with her

Dadisa:no Bhairon..leave her alone 4 sometime...let all her pains to come out.

(cut outdoor_shiv entering badi haveli)don't know y dadiji called me today?anandi what may she doing now?is she aware of my arrival..no one is in d ground floor..oh here is nandu
Nandu:are collector sahab? aap to 5 baje aanewale the na?Dadisa is in her room..let's go iam showing u..

this is anandi bhabisa's room n dat is dadisa's..hav to go 4 play wid frnds...bye
anandi's room! what is she doing now?god knows y am I so anxious to know how is she where is she?(after hearing d sound of crying)is she crying?😭

After reaching beside anandi.Shiv: Anandiji?kya hua?r u alright?

in shock hearing Shiv's voice,Anandi: u ? y did u came here? i don't want any1's support please leave me alone in my sit
uation..

shiv: what happens to u? please tell me?

Anandi: what u will do to hear all this?what do u think of urself?I dont want ur consolation ...anger,pain blusting through her voice

Shiv:anandi ji(he cant see her in such a pain,oh God please give me all sorrows,all pains of her,he says in mind)


Anandi:please go away

shiv hurt in his heart about to run back to circuit house,when Bhairon sees him n calls him to Dadisa's room..there they make clear everything..y anandi reacting like this...

Shiv is happy to hear d proposal but also he knows it is hard to make anandi convinced,but he will definately do his level best and will wait for Anandi for his whole lifetime...And till then, he will try to remove all her pains away..


this is my first try to create any OS with soap's character...please give ur valuable comments,which worth 4 me..😊

P.S. I think the song kuch iss tarah teri palke of Atif Aslam will be gr8,if u read it with the song😳


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preity_d thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please readers give comments..wheather it is good or bad ..criticise it...I know it is not good,but its the 1st try...if u guys help with ur valuable comments I can improve in writing... love Shivan😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hahah thats cute... and so much possible.. u never know !!šŸ˜‰

bas i want A ka dil nahi toote and wo Shiv se gussa nahi ho even if it means waiting for a few more weeks to get them together...

But well done !! You gave wings to my imagination :-)šŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice os. I started to like this couple.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nicely written.. :)
But, I hope it does not happen this way. Dadisa should give Shiv and Anandi time to develop feelings for one another especially after all that Anandi has gone through. Not another forced marriage for her.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful OS ,,ur attempt to it was nice,,,i could visualize the whole scene,,,lets see what cvs have planned for us...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey just read your OS.. Nice one dear! Loved it. Though dunno what CVs have in store is similar to this or not.. but still I like it! Great attemptšŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yes very nice attempt and in character. As the other member said, I could also imagine the entire sequence.
Great try ...please continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey that was cute😊😊... Nice attempt... But yes even I wanted them to get some timešŸ¤”...Atleast so much time for them to 'realise' their love for each otheršŸ˜ Phir to dadisa ka haath chahiye hi našŸ˜‰Good workšŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys thax 4 Ur lovely comments...I'm overwhelmed...šŸ¤—šŸ˜ƒ

yes I also think they should get time to realize their love 4 each other and I want shiv to first and madly in love with her...that the arrival of Jagya shouldn't hamper their relation 😊

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