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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi all , had some free time yesterday so I decided to write this OS. I suddenly had an idea of this OS just 2-3 days ago 😅😂. Hope you all will like this simple OS 😅


Ram looks at the coupon that Priya gave him. He just had one coupon left which was no rok tok. This means Priya could not stop him from doing whatever he wanted to do. The coupon is gonna expire tomorrow and Priya won't be giving any extension again!! How should he use it?! How should he?!

Ram was thinking and just then an idea strikes his mind.

Priya was preparing the question paper for her students' exam and she was very focused! Just then she sees a coupon infront of her eyes.

Ram: Mai yeh coupon use karna chahta hoon!

Priya: Kahiye...

Ram: Priya, mere saath ice-cream date pe chalo!

Priya: Ice-cream date?! Nahi nahi! Bilkul nahi aapko thaand lag jayega!

Ram: Too bad! You are not allowed to stop me according to this coupon!

Priya: Maine bhi kya buddhu jaise kaam kiya. Mujhe extension karna hi nahi chaye tha! Kahan phaas gayi! Thik hai kab jaana hai aap ko date pe?!

Ram: Aaj ko , abhi issi waqt!

Priya: Par mujhe yeh question paper tayaar karna hai Mr Kapoor! Students ke exam hai na!!

Ram: Exam kab hai?!

Priya: Ek mahine baath.

Ram: Exam ek mahine baath hai and tum paper abhi tayaar kar rahe ho! Chalo mere saath yeh tum kaal karlena!

Priya: I have to submit this by tomorrow so that they can approve it! Exam ek mahina baath hai par preparation abhi karna hoga na! Approval mai 1-2 hafta lagta hai! Aur iss bar paper tayaar karne ke zimedaari meri hai!

Ram: Thik hai!

Ram goes away.

Priya continues to prepare the paper and as she is done, she saves the paper in her pen drive so that she can get it printed tomorrow. Priya closes her laptop and keeps it on her table and she sees Ram infront of her ready.

Ram: Chalo aab hum date pe chalte hai?!

Priya: Time dekha aapne?! Already 8 baaj chuke hai Mr Kapoor! Hum koyi aur din jayenge!

Ram: Par coupon toh kal expire hoga na!

Priya: Koyi baath nahi, aaj apne deal kar liya hum kuch din baath jayenge.

Ram: Priya tumne kahan na no rok tok, so hum aaj hi jayenge!

Priya: Aap na bohot ziddi hogaye ho Mr Kapoor!

Ram: Iss me ziddi hone ke baath kahan se aagaye hai?! Tumne hi toh kahan tha ke hume humare haq ke baare mai baath karna chaye!

Priya: Aap se na baath karna hi bekaar hai! Chaliye...date pe!

Ram gets happy as Priya goes to get ready! As Priya gets ready and she is about to tie her hair,

Ram: Priya?!

Priya looks at Ram through the mirror.

Ram nods no gesturing her not to tie her hair!

Priya listens to Ram.

Priya: (in her mind) Chalo acha hua iss bahane Mr Kapoor ke saath kuch waqt akele mai baath kar paungi.


Later,

They reach at an ice-cream parlour near Ram's office.

Ram and Priya sit down.

Priya looks around and Ram looks at her.

Ram: What are you looking for?

Priya: Mr Kapoor some of them are known faces here. Wait some are my students! What they are doing here?! Inlogo ko padhai nahi karni kya! Ek minute yeh toh Kabir hai.

Ram: Kabir?!

Priya: Meri student. Aaj iska online tuition hone wala tha , mujhse jhoot kahan ke uski tabyet thik nahi hai usko cold hua hai, par dekhiye yahan kaise ice cream thus rahe hai. Abhi iska class leti hoon.

Ram: Priya ruko na! Humara date hai na let us enjoy our date and let your student enjoy his day. Also these students need some time to chill and enjoy, har time padhai aur padhai not fair na!

Priya: How can you say this Mr Kapoor?! Aap toh bohot hard-working hai na?! This was unexpected. Agar inlogo free time chaye thoda thik hai, but what was the need to lie?! Kabir should not have lied!

Ram: Hehe you really think if Kabir said Priya mam mujhe aaj tuition nahi karna kyunki mujhe ice-cream khaana hai, tum jaaane dete usse?! No chance!

Priya glares at Ram, Ram becomes scared and changes topic. He looks at the menu.

Ram: Let's choose what flavour we want to order.

Ram happily looks at the menu, and Priya looks at it too.

Priya: (in her mind) Yeh ice-cream ka price hai ya main course ka?! Kitna menga hai!!! Do one thing choose the cheapest flavour?! Yahan toh sabse saasta wale flavour bhi 300 ka hai! Haadh hai!

The waiter comes to take the order.

Waiter: Madam aap ko kya chaye?

Priya: One Vanilla Scoop.

Waiter: Okay. Sir mujhe paata hai aap ka butterscotch scoop with m&m toppings and black forest with strawberry sauce!

Ram: Right!

Priya: (in her mind) Yeh saab toh menge flavours hai?! Upar se Toppings bhi?!

Priya looks at Ram.

Ram: Priya tumhe bhi apne ice-cream mai toppings dalne chaaye!

Priya: Bilkul bhi nahi!!

Ram: Okay fine...

The waiter goes.


Priya: (in her mind) Oh God Mr Kapoor ne apne ice-cream ke peeche hi 1200 kharach kar diya! Aur meri wali bhi 300 ka hai bohot expensive hai! And he comes here frequently!!!

Priya: Mr Kapoor mujhe ice-cream khaane ke man nahi kar raha, aap mere order cancel kar di

jiye!

Ram: Aise kaise maan nahi kar raha! Aur haan aaj no rok tok so u have to eat ice-cream with me! And also when you take one bite you will love it anyways!

The waiter comes with the ice-cream scoops and serves them.

Priya: (in her mind) Ice-cream ka scoop kitna chota hai! Isliye Mr Kapoor ne 2 scoop maanga! Ab mai samjhi! Totally not worth coming here and why are my students spending so much on this! Kal hi mujhe apne lecture mai iske baare mai baath karna chaye!

Ram happily eats the ice-cream and loves it. Priya takes a bite.

Priya: (in her mind) It tastes fine but not worth the money! I have had better than this!

Ram: Toh kaisa laaga ice-cream!

Priya: Theek thak hai, par not worth the hype.

Ram: Mere wale toh awesome hai, taste karoge.

Priya: Nahi it's okay.

Ram takes a spoon of butterscotch.

Ram: Baas taste karo na. Please...

Priya tastes the ice-cream.

Priya: Yeh wala better hai. Toppings ke bina bhi thik tha.

Ram: Mujhe M&Ms bohot pasand hai na isliye... What do you think about the place? Sach kehna haan.

Priya: Sach sunaa chayoge aap?!

Ram: Of course! What do you think about this ice-cream parlour?

Priya: Sach kahoon yeh jaga na meri husband aur students ko loot rahe hai. Itna menga ice-cream aur itna chota sa scoop. Aur taste itna khaas bhi nahi.Yeh log ice-cream bhej rahe hai ya sona?!

Ram takes a spoon and feeds it to Priya and she eats it.

Priya: Yeh na inlogo ke marketing strategy hai.

Priya talks about a big essay of how this ice-cream thing is not worth it and how the company is minting money. Ram feeds Priya and she continues eating the ice-cream as she is so engrossed with ranting about the ice-cream shop.

Priya: So isliye iss jageh ko boycott karna chaye.

Ram: Agar boycott karna chaye toh tumne pura ice-cream khatam kaise kar liya.

Priya looks and sees she just finished an entire scoop of not just her ice-cream but also some of Mr Kapoor's. She also had some traces of ice-cream on her lips.

Priya: Yeh maine khaaya!! Kaise?!

Ram: Tum iss bechare ice-cream pe taunt marne pe itna busy the ke tumne sach mai iss ice-cream ko hi khaa liya! Haaaahaaa!! Bechara ice-cream!

Priya: Aap ko joke laga yeh! Gaanda joke tha!

Ram takes out tissue,

Ram: Dekha pocket se tissue bhi nikla, let me wipe your mouth now.

Ram wipes Priya's mouth and she looks at him.

Priya: Mr Kapoor I am soo sorry maine aap ka ice-cream kha liya! Sooo sorry!!! Ek kaam karte hai yeh meri treat hai, coupon maine diya so treat bhi meri!

Ram: Nahi treat toh mera hi hoga. I brought you here! I know you don't like spending so this is on me. But I am glad you had the ice-cream. Admit it you loved the ice-cream!

Priya: Acha toh tha par itna menga !

Ram: Ab aur ek lecture shuru maat karna!

Priya and Ram laughs.

Priya: (in her mind) Yeh sahi mauka hai Priya, Mr Kapoor se baath kar le.


Just then one of Priya's student comes to her.

Student: Mam aap aur yahaan?!

Priya: Mishti tum yahaan?

Mishti: Oh toh aap Ram sir ke saath date pe aaye hai! How cute!

Priya: Mishti tum na in saab pe dhyaan kam dena aur padhai kaise chal rahi hai next month exams hai!

Mishti: Haan chal rahe hai, voh aaj Kabir ka birthday hai na isliye hum saab ko leke aaya yahan treat ke liye!

Priya: Aaj Kabir ka birthday hai!

Mishti: Yes mam!

Mishti goes!

Priya: Yeh Kabir bhi na agar mujhe kehte ke uska birthday hai, I would have allowed him to not do today's class!

Ram: Maybe he did not want to listen to your lectures on how birthdays are a waste of time.

Ram laughs. and Priya laughs sarcasticallly.

Priya: Aap bhul gaye maine aap ke birthday ke liye kitna acha surprise tayaar kiya tha! I am not that bad. I do value birthdays!

Ram: Haan voh toh hai! And trust me Priya, in this 39 years of my life, this was the best birthday I ever had. Once again thank you so much for those beautiful moments Priya!

Priya and Ram smiled looking at each other.

Ram: You value birthdays right?! Let's go and wish your student.


Soon,

Kabir looks at Priya.

Kabir: Mam aap aur yahan?! I am so sorry...(scared)

Priya: Tumhe jhoot nahi kehna chaye Kabir mai,

Ram gestures Priya to be nice to him.

Priya: It's okay...Don't do this again! Happy birthday Kabir!

Kabir: (smiles) Thank you Mam! Maam please stay back with us for some time, I will cut the cake now!

Priya: Par mai tumhare liye koyi gift nahi laaya na.

Kabir: It's okay Madam! Aap ne mujhe aaj chutti diya yeh hi gift hai!

Priya smiles.

Kabir: Mam please join us with your husband too!

Priya: Alright!

Priya comes to Ram.

Ram: Wish kar liya?

Priya: Haan but he wants us to stay for cake-cutting. Maine koyi gift bhi nahi laya.

Ram: So what's the big deal?!

Ram takes out his cheque book and goes to write some amount.

Priya immediately makes him keep it back.

Priya: I won't let you spoil my students like this.

Ram: I was just getting him a gift, just some money.

Priya: You won't even mention about this!

Ram: Okay fine!


Later Kabir cuts the cake and everyone claps for him. He gets the cake served to everyone.

Ram: This cake is really tasty! Dekha Priya ice-cream ke saath yahan cake bhi mil gaya! Amazing!

Priya nods no.


Later,

Ram and Priya were about to go!

Ram: Ek second I forgot something!

Priya: Ab aap kya bhul gaye?!

Ram calls another waiter and he orders strawberry ice-cream with ferroro rocher and to get it parcelled.

Priya: Aap aur ice-cream khane wale ho kya?!

Ram: Nahi nahi yeh Shivi ke liye hai. It's her fav

Priya: But won't the ice-cream melt?!

Ram: Tum iska chinta maat karo! There is an portable freezer in the car which I keep for storing ice-cream.

Priya: Aap bhi na!

Priya decided to talk with Ram now.

Man: Ram Sir Aap?!

Priya: (in her mind) Mr Kapoor ne toh yahan sasural bhi basa liya!

Man: Ram Sir aap kaise ho!

Ram: Mai bilkul thik hoon!

Man: It was great to see you with Mam!

Ram: Priya yeh ice-cream parlour ka owner hai!

Priya greets him and he does the same too.

Man: It's great I met you here let me give you some discount!

Ram: There isn't any need for discount!

Man: Bilkul nahi! You come here after soo long! I am giving a discount no matter what!

The man goes.

Priya: (in her mind) Acha hua discount mil gaye inhe.

Ram completed his payment and comes back.

Ram: Let's go.

Priya: Ek minute Mr Kapoor! Mujhe aapse baath karni hai. Voh actually...


Just then a girl comes to them, this time Priya gets frustrated!

Girl: Aap dono toh RaYa hai!!! The best couple!

Priya: Sorry maine aapko pehchana nahi!

Girl: Hi I am Mansi! Ram Sir aur Priya mam mai aap dono ke bohot baadi fan hoon , especially aap ka Ram sir! I am a Raya shipper. Aap dono yahaan date pe aaye ho. How cute!!

Ram: Haan (smiling)

Mansi: May I take a selfie with you both?!

Mansi takes a selfie with Ram and Priya.

Mansi: Aap dono yahan kab aaye?

Ram: Hum baas 2 ghante pehle.

Mansi: You both are soo good can you tell me how you both met?!

Ram: You can watch our navrati interview vahan jawab mil jayega.

Mansi: I meant aap ko kaise laga jab aap pehle baar Mam se mile?!

Priya is getting annoyed with Mansi.

Ram: Sach kahoon bohot daravni.

Priya glares at Ram. Ram gets scared.

Mansi laughs.

Mansi: Aap mazaak ache karte ho sir!

Ram: Hai na! Meri wife ko bolo she doesnt agree!

Mansi: Did you both come here before?

Ram: I have came before Priya did not.

Priya: Ab yeh bhi batau kaunse flavour ke ice-cream khaya hai!

Mansi: Yes please Mam!!

Priya gets annoyed with Mansi, and Ram notices this.

Ram: Mansi, we both have to go now! We need to wake up early, so bye bye.

Ram takes Priya away!


Ram and Priya are inside the car now.

Priya: Haadh hai kaise kaise sawaal kar rahe hai!

Ram: Priya relax...Just breathe...

Priya: Kya breathe breathe! Mujhe yahan aap ke saath thoda privacy chaye tha aur interruption pe interruption!

Ram: (gets naughty) Oh toh yeh baath hai! Tumhe privacy chaaye the. Pehle bolte the. I know better places for privacy(winks)

Priya: Nahi nahi vaise wali privacy nahi. Kya kya sochte rehte ho Mr Kapoor!

Ram: Kya soch matlaab kaise soch batau mujhe Priya?

Priya runs out of words.

Ram: I get you mean by which privacy?

Ram comes close to Priya and her heart starts to beat faster. He comes even closer and Priya closes her eyes.

He then adjust her seatbelt and Priya takes a sigh of relief.

Ram: Voh safety ke liye seat belt baandna parta hai, tum khud bohot rules follow karte ho na.

Priya: Aap ne acha kiya.

Ram is smiling and laughing inside and he enjoyed teasing Priya. Just that he wants to do it for real soon!!

Ram is driving the car.

Ram: Tum mujhe kuch kehne chahte the na. What is it Priya?!

Priya: Voh actually, baath yeh hai ke I was rushing to complete preparing the exam papers. Actually the deadline is 2 weeks later not tomorrow. I wanted to do it earlier.

Ram: Okay....

Priya: The thing is my annual leave is not taken up yet, I still have 5 more days. So I was wondering to take 5 days leave next week since students are having break week that time anyways . But I don't want to waste it, so I was wondering if you and me...(closes her eyes) both of us could go on a holiday together, just the both of us....

Ram stops the car immediately!!!


Ram: Ek minute! Priya..Priya Kapoor ko mere saath holiday par jaana hai! Voh bhi akele!!!

Priya: (making excuse) Aisa kuch nahi hai. Voh Sara Dii nahi jaa sakti cause she has to handle cafe, Sandy cant either because she has report submission due. And I don't want to go alone!

Ram: Hmmmm I need to check if I am free.

Priya: No no it's okay. If you don't want to go , it's okay I will tell Nandini Mom to go with me! Let me ask her!

Ram: Nahi Nahi there isn't any need for that! Aur mom bohot busy hai aaj kal! She has some work! And you don't take tension I just realized I don't have any meetings next week, I mean I have but they are not important! I will tell Adi to shift the meetings.

Ram knew there is no way he could lose this chance to go on a holiday with Priya alone!

Priya: Are you sure? Are they really important meetings?!

Ram: No, no, deals are not signed much this month usually.

Priya: Chalo acha hua aap free ho. We both can go together.

Priya: (in her mind) Acha hua Mr Kapoor maan gaaye. He really needed a break he works sooo hard. I don't like to travel much but I am doing this for Mr Kapoor, so that he can get the break he deserved.

Ram: Priya hum Europe chale?! London?!

Priya: (in her mind) Iska matlaab yeh nahi itna kharcha karne dungi Mr Kapoor ko!

Priya: Nahi nahi. Itna dur nahi jaana mujhe!

Ram: Maldives chale?

Priya: Mr Kapoor aap toh aise keh rahe hai jaise London Maldives yeh saab aap ke ice cream parlour ke paas hai!

Priya is drinking water.

Ram: Toh phir ek kaam karte hai hum farm house chalte hai vahan hum dono ko kuch privacy bhi mil jayenge.

Priya starts choking hearing this. Ram helps her by rubbing her back.

Ram: Sorry...you say where we should go?

Priya: Hum out of town kahi chale?!

Ram: Thik hai. Phir Shimla chalte hai?!

Priya: Haan yeh acha rahega.

Ram: Okay I will get the tickets booked once we reach home.

Ram continues driving and Priya smiles.

The end


Thank you reading this OS. Hope you all will like this OS too, just came up with a simple OS.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

Loved d story

U naturally showed d essence of their characters

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🤣

It was too funny.👍🏼

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Such a sweet story with ice cream flavor, Ram and Priya are still themselves in your picture, but their relationship has taken a step further)

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Originally posted by: Dewdrops1995

Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

Loved d story

U naturally showed d essence of their characters

Thank you! Glad you liked it 😁
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Originally posted by: RitikaS99

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It was too funny.👍🏼

Glad you enjoyed it! It was meant to be funny 😆
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Originally posted by: SEA05

Such a sweet story with ice cream flavor, Ram and Priya are still themselves in your picture, but their relationship has taken a step further)

glad u liked the story! ❤️
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The story was great, thanks)

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This was so cute! I hope Ram uses his last coupon the same way as your story.


Please do continue for when they go to Shimla.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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You showed typical raya2 here.for ice cream too priya doesn't want to spend money.but while complaining ram feeding her ice icecream n without realizing it she eating it was so cute.ram saying that kabir doesn't want to hear her lecture on how birthdays are waste of time was funny.priya saying that they can go for holiday together was unexpected.finally a shimla trip.cute os.

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