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Song name: Adi penne

Language: Tamil ( with English subtitles)

Do listen to the music attached with this story atleast once. This is an Tamil song with subtitles. I personally feel there is no language barrier for music. Do share your views..
Song credit: YouTube.

It's been more than 8 months into their marriage. They have still not named their feelings for eachother. They respect and trust eachother,they both share everything with eachother but haven't understood their feelings as love yet.
Anyone by seeing them together for 2 minutes can understand the love between them but they both were so obtuse when it came to love. Their friends and family stopped playing cupid between them as they felt both Ram and Priya will find the way on their own.
It's a random Sunday, Priya was busy in preparing questions for the upcoming exams while her husband was busy in a conference call.
After finishing their work,both went together to have their lunch.
Priya got back to their room after completing her lunch, Ram just kept observing her. After completing his lunch Ram came to their room with a fresh juice in his hands.
Ram: Priya have this juice
Priya: Mr. Kapoor why did you bring this, just now I had my lunch right.
Ram knelt beside her as she sat at the foot of their bed.
Ram: you know,you can share anything with me priya,what is keeping you bothered and you didn't eat anything properly in lunch.
Priya just kept looking at him,while he forcefully made her to drink the juice.
Ram: Now tell me priya what is bothering you.
Priya: I don't know Mr.Kapoor but I don't feel good. I strongly feel like something unpleasant is going to happen.
Ram: like a premonition
Priya: yes Mr.Kapoor and I don't feel good about it.
Ram: you are just overthinking Priya, you should get some sleep. Everything will be alright once you get a good sleep.
Saying he made her lie in the bed and covered with a quilt.
Ram: close your eyes and sleep Priya. Everything is fine and I will be near you. Call me if you want anything.
Priya just nodded her head in yes and closed her eyes but she can't shake off her gut feeling. She dozed off thinking about this.
Ram got a call a from his assistant asking him to attend a meeting at hotel as their foreign client whom they had to meet tomorrow is getting back to his country today due to some family emergency.
Ram agreed to it and asked his assistant to confirm the meeting.
Ram got ready and was about to exit the room when Priya woke up startled and came running to him.
Ram: Priya kya hua
Ram kept on asking her but she kept looking at him with tear filled eyes.
When Ram shaked her, she came out of her stupor.
Priya: where are you going Mr. Kapoor?
Ram: There is an emergency meeting Priya. I will be back in 2 hours.
Priya: No..
Ram: what
Priya: Don't go anywhere Mr. Kapoor, I don't feel good.
Ram: Priya this is an important meeting,just for two hours. You get some sleep while I will be back before you can wake up from your nap.
Saying so he was about to move,when her hold on his right hand tightened.
Priya : Then I will come with you Mr. Kapoor. Drop me in any temple nearby your meeting place.
Ram: but Priya
Priya: Mr. Kapoor please, I insist.
Ram : okey get ready and come. I will wait for you in the car.
Priya: Thank you Mr.Kapoor.
Priya went to get ready while Ram got confused with her actions as she is not the one to have any superstitious beliefs, thought of asking her once the meeting got over.
Soon Ram went to attend the meeting after dropping Priya in the temple which was opposite to hotel where his meeting was held.
After finishing his meeting,ram called and and informed about him waiting outside the hotel for her.
Priya who came out of the temple searched for husband,that's when she noticed him playing with small baby girl.she stood adoring him seeing his funny ways to make the toddler smile. That's when the toddler threw her bunny toy in the road and cried for her toy. Seeing her crying for the toy, Ram immediately turned to pick it up while talking to the baby girl in which he missed to see a fast approaching car towards him which Priya noticed. Seeing him carelessly bending down in the road Priya shouted his name and started running towards him.
Hearing her shout, he straightened to see her and then within a fraction of second everything happened. Priya came towards him and pushed him safely away from the car at right time but got hit by the same car. He stood there rooted to his place seeing the blood flowing out from her body. He came out his stupor when she tried to call him through her hand.
He immediately ran to her and hugged her close to his hearts and started blabbering.
Ram: Priya you can't leave me alone, nothing will happen to you when I'm there. Be with me priya Don't close your eyes, see me priya
Saying so he tapped her face to keep her awake and simultaneously shouted at everyone to call an ambulance.
Priya gave a tired smile listening to him.
Ram: Nothing will happen to you Priya.
Priya: you should have listened to me Mr. Kapoor.
Ram: don't strain Yourself, be quiet and just look at me.
At the same time, an ambulance came and soon Priya was admitted in the ICU.
Ram just stood outside the ICU lifelessly seeing his Priya struggling for her life.
Adi and Brindha were the first one to come to the hospital,as Ram's driver informed adi about the happenings.
They both tried to make him speak,but he just stood lifelessly.
After few hours, everyone from their family and friends crowed around the ICU.
Few moments later, doctor came out of the room and informed them Priya still being in critical condition and they have to wait for 24 hrs before coming to any conclusion.
This made Priya' s mother and sisters to wail loudly. Ram went and saw his wife in vulnerable condition, just kept looking at her pale face for few minutes,then turned around and started walking outside the hospital without saying anything.
Adi,vik, Kunal followed him but he asked them to leave him alone for few hours. They understood his situation and allowed him to do what he want.
He unknowingly walked to the tea stall where they both had their first roadside tea. He smiled remembering her teaching him how to eat the bun maska along with the tea. He sat in the bench of the tea stall without uttering a word.
He sat there in silence with a blank mind when the music played at the near by shop hit his ears..

Adi pennae oru murai nee sirithaal
En nenjukullae mazhai adikkum
Adi pennae oru murai nee sirithaal
En nenjukullae mazhai adikkum

Oh dear women you smile at me once and it rains in my heart.(2)

Ram smiled listening to the first line of the song,his Priya..her smile is what made him alive.

Yen enadhu idhayam
Thudikkum isaiyil
Kavidhai ondrai ezhuthinaai
Adhai vizhiyil korthu uyirin ullae
Paarvaiyaalae solgiraai

why did you write a poem according to my beat of my heart?
Effortlessly conveying it just through your gaze.

He remembered her telling him, how she never needs to say anything to him as he always understands her unsaid words with his single gaze at her.

Unnodu naanum vaazha
Unnodu naanum saaga
Un madi saayava
Un madi saayava

I want to live with you, I want to die with you,
Right now,I just want lie down on Your lap.

He smiled remembering their bickering, about how she will haunt him even after his death and she didn't speak with him for a day as she got mad at him for talking about his death.

Un paarvai ennai kolla
Saindhenae naanum mella
Neethan en mannava
Neethan en mannava

Your eyes kill a little, I can’t stop but fall,
You are the king of my heart

she stood up for him infront of everyone and made them shut up when his siblings talked rubbish about him. That day she promised him no one will ever hurt him till she was there as they have to face her first.

Oh unadhu sirippinil
Sitharum azhaginai
Pookkal rasithae vaasam pirandhatho

Did flowers gain their smell when they adored the beauty of your smile.

She is the only one who smiles for his stupid jokes and when she smiles,her face will look like a fresh red rose. He started liking red roses and often bought them as that freshness reminds him of her happy face.

Vervai thuligalum
Theertham pola
En mele padugaiyil paavam azhiyudho

Even your perspiration is so pure that when it touches me,it washes away my sins

She took care of him for a week when he was down with viral fever.Never once showed any displeasure to take care of him. His mother came to see him only once and asked him to take care of himself . His mom asked doctor to provide him a nurse to take care of him. It was his Priya who took the matter into her hand and asked everyone to get out politely as she can very well take care of her husband. The next one week she went out of their only to cook for him, otherwise she will be near him talking about anything,she even read for him. He even asked her to allow someone to give him a sponge bath as he felt she will feel uncomfortable since he haven't had his shower for more than 3-4 days,he felt dirty himself with all the perspiration.
But she strictly asked him to shut up as she didn't feel any uncomfortable and Taking care of him is her rights. He smiled thinking about her authorative tone which indirectly asked him to shut up.

Iruvar vaazhum ulagilae
Unnai anaithu kolven uyirilae
Iravil theiyum nilavilae
Naam sernthu vaazhvom arugilae

In a world that's meant just for the two of us..
I will always embrace you soulfully.
We shall live all our nights under the moonlight together.

Whenever either one of them feel low, the other would be there to cheer their mood. They used sit in the balcony and chat till the wee hours of morning. They have even slept in the balcony due to their late night chats.

Adi unnodu vaazhum ovvoru naalum
Iragai pola parakkirean

Every day with you, I feel like I'm floating like a feather


Ram realised how much he started enjoying his life with Priya. He let out a small chuckle thinking about their bickerings.

Naan unnodu vaazhum nodiyil yeno
Meendum mudhal murai pirakkiren

Every moment with you , I feel like I'm born again

En anbae oru murai nee rasithaal
Ennullae yedho pudhu mayakkam
En anbae oru murai nee rasithaal
Ennullae yedho pudhu mayakkam

Oh dear when you look at me like that, I’m high on love

His wife started wearing saree more often as she came to know that he loves to see her in a saree eventhough she don't like to wear saree.

Enadhu piraviyin artham unaravae
Unnai enadhu vazhvil thanthatho

You were given to me to realise the reason of my existence


She became the reason for him to come home everyday. He started living for her. Her small smile will make him feel the luckiest man alive in this world. Unknowingly she became his world.

Dhegam theendum dhooram irunthumae
Unadhu vizhiyilae jeevan tholaiyudho
Mazhaiyil kaadhal un madiyilae
Nitham anaithu kollada uyirilae

Despite the distance between us,
It's always in your eyes my soul gets lost
Love me on rainy days,have me on your lap

what’s more, embrace me nearer to your soul

Vizhigal pesum mozhiyilae
Ini mounam kooda pizhai illai
Anbae unnodu vaazhum ovvoru naalum
Iragai pola parakkiren

when our eyes talks through the love,
Even silence is beautiful,
Every day with you , I feel floating like a feather


Even the silence between them will be very comfortable,they never needed words to convey their thoughts. They have spent most of their time in the balcony of their room. He enjoyed the head massage she gave him after a longday at his work. She will read her book silently while he will sleep beside her. They had a comfortable rhythm in everything they do.


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Naan unnodu vaazhum nodiyil yeno
Meendum mudhal murai pirakkiren

Every moment with you , I feel like I am born again


With her he felt like toddler,teenager,friend and most importantly husband. He felt like his wife entering his life made him to live again.she made his life worth living.

Adi pennae oru murai nee sirithaal
En nenjukullae mazhai adikkum
En anbae oru murai nee rasithaal
Ennullae yedho pudhu mayakkam

Oh sweet heart , you smile at once
and it rains in my heart
Oh sweet heart when you look at me like that , I am full on love

Nee iraval uyira
Uravin veyila
Mazhaiyin vaasam neeyadi
Nee kavidhai mozhiya
Kavingnan vazhiya
Uyirin swasam neeyadi

You are my life,my light in the dark , the smell of the rain,
You speak the language of poem,always by the poet.
You have become the breath of my soul

He now realised the depth of their relation,she did everything for him ,she smiled for him,she always celebrates even his small achivement like her victory,she was there for him silently at his every step providing the support he needed. She was his angel who lit up his life with her innocence,smile and love. Yes, now he understood that he can't live even a second without her. She is his lifeline. She is the love of his life and he will make sure that she lives happily.

Unnodu naanum vaazha
Unnodu naanum saaga
Un madi saayava
Un madi saayava

I want to live with you, I want to die with you.
Right now I just want lie down on your lap.

He felt that everything will be alright once he lied down in her
lap.

Thinking so he started walking towards the hospital when the heavy downpour started.
The rain made him more vulnerable with the thoughts of her.
she always chided him for getting wet in rain but she started enjoying the rain with him. When he realised how close he is to lose her forever made him breakdown completely he shouted her name with all his might and cried loudly by kneeling in the middle of the street.

He want to live with her and he can't live without her. She is the only reason for his existence in this whole world. He can't lose her. With that determination he started running towards the hospital.

When ram entered the hospital, everyone were present. Everyone tried to speak to him but Ram didn't utter a single word. Bri made him change his dress by explaining how Priya would get infected from him if he went to meet her. Hearing her explanation he silently did as he was asked and again started waiting outside the ICU.
Doctor came and informed them that her condition is stable but it is very important for her to gain conscious in next 16 hrs.

Ram stood rooted to his place, it was bri who made him sit in a chair. They don't know what to do as they have never seen him in this way. His eyes were very dry and there was no hint of tears which made them very edgy.
Later when nurse came informed that only two people can stay there and others can get out. Everyone left leaving behind Ram and Priya's mother with her. Adi asked brindha to stay with them as they both can't handle themselves while he,vik, Kunal will wait outside in the car.
Brindha nodded and sat beside Ram. She tried to make him talk to her but he was in his own world,so silently sat with him offering her support. After sometime brindha made Meera ma to lie down in sofa placed in the corner forcefully as she looked so tired.
After that she went and sat beside Ram , and she never know when she dozed off in the chair.

It was adi who came in the morning woke her up, they turned to see ram who sat frozen in his place without any movement. They tried to make him talk but he didn't utter a word.
Later both the family and friends started pouring in.
Doctor came and told any one person can meet Priya for few minutes without disturbing her. Adi talked with doctor and got permission for two people,he asked Meera ma to first go and see priya. After few minutes, Meera ma came out crying seeing her daughter's condition. Then he asked Ram to go and see. He just nodded and went inside.

The sight of his wife made his heart numb.She got injured majorily on her head along with a fractured right leg and sprained right hand. Some scratches on her beautiful face. When the car dashed her, she fell on her right side.
That should be him with all those equipments hooked up to him if his wife didn't take it on herself without a second thought. Getting dashed by a car seemed a better option for him than seeing her in this condition.


He went near and knelt beside her. He very softly touched her forehead and whispered into her ears,' Please Priya,come back to me. I can't see you like this. I will do whatever you ask me to. I will never tease you. I will take care of you.please come back to me priya' saying so he started wailing. After few moments,he again started talking to her,' I will do anything for you Priya. Just open your eyes and see me priya. I accept that you are always right and I am the one who always wrong'. Saying this he started crying by bowing his head when he heard a voice in a very low tone.
Priya: wahi I am always right Mr. Kapoor.
He got shocked and straightened himself to get a clear view, that's when he saw his eyes who gave a tired smile for him while the tears flowed from corner of her eyes.
He can't believe, finally he got to see her love filled eyes.
Ram: Priya...
That's it he can't control himself anymore, he can't continue his facade anymore. He got up and jumped into her left side of the bed burying his face into her chest careful enough to not to hurt her and started wailing like a baby.
He started saying everything he want to say without wasting a second,yes you are right I should have listened to you. Sorry Priya. I can't live without you, I will die without you. You are my lifeline Priya. You are my world. I can't even breath properly without you. I love you so much Priya. Don't you dare to do this to me ever again. It will better for me to die than seeing you in condition. I want you with me forever. I will not allow you to go anywhere. You are everything. I am nothing without you... Saying so he whimpered hugging her.
Hearing Ram shout Priya's name everyone came to see what happened that's when they noticed THE RAM KAPOOR Clinging to his wife crying his heart out while his wife caressing his head softly with her left hand, eventhough she was in pain.
They have never seen him this broken. Even at his father's sudden demise, they all saw his vulnerable state but it was nothing compared to the state he is in now. Everyone know both loved eachother but looking at them like this, the bond between them is much more than love. It's like they are single soul.
Adi moved forward to make Ram get down as they can see priya is visibly in pain. Eventhough he laid down without touching her injuries, her body was still tender due to the accident.
When Adi started moving towards Ram, Priya showed her hand and asked adi to stay where he is. Adi nodded in response. Everyone gave teary smile and left the place giving the couple their privacy.
After everyone went out, Priya whispered Ram which made him look at her in shock. This is the first time she used his first name. That's when he realised their position.
He immediately got up & kneeled beside her and started asking her sorry as he forgot Everything listening to her voice.
Priya gave him a tired smile
Ram: Priya don't do this to me ever again.
Priya: I love you Ram...
Which made him to cry all over again. He kissed the lone tear escaped from the corner of her left eye. She closed her eyes in relief feeling his touch. He then placed a soft kiss on her forehead and whispered her ears I Love you more..You are my everything priya...
She gave him a teary smile which he reciprocated.
while at the same time doctor came and gave her sedation after checking her vitals. Soon she slept due to the sedation.
Doctor asked ram to come with him,while Ram nodded and placed a softkiss on his wife's forehead before moving out.
Dr: Mrs. Kapoor is stable now as she gained her consciousness at the right time but she will need atleast 2 months of bed rest.
Ram: I will take care of her doctor, she will not get out of the bed before recovering completely.
Dr: That's good Mr. Kapoor. She will discharged after one week as it will be better for her health.
Ram: No problem doctor, will do whatever you say. I just need her Hale and hearty. Thank you so much doctor.
Dr: good day Mr.Kapoor.
Ram: thanks doctor.
After speaking to doctor, ram came to their family and told about her gaining conscious as he never know about their family witnessing his breakdown.
Everyone just smiled in response while bri came forward and hugged him in relief as they can see Ram becoming to his normal self.
Later he asked everyone to go to home while he will take good care of his wife.
At night, he sat beside his wife holding her hand looking at her face.
Even in sleep she tightened her hold on his hand. He smiled seeing her face which looked so peaceful now and placed a soft kiss on her hand. He was glad that God gave him his angel.
She is his everything... With this thoughts he slept in the chair while holding her hand.
When life offers us a person who loves us unconditionally, we will be never in need of anything again. It's the true love which keeps us alive..

Naan unnodu vaazhum nodiyil yeno
Meendum mudhal murai pirakkiren


Every moment with you , I feel like I'm born again.

Their togetherness gave a new birth to them,to their relation,to their feelings,to their love.....❤️

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Ok this was really emotional , and heartbreaking💔.

Really really heartwarming !!!!!! Loved and felt every single emotion!!

I badly wanna see this onscreen.

Have u seen raja rani by any chance?

This reminded of that accident scene.... 💔

Also that song in that movie

Paniyil moodi pona paadhai

meedhu veyil veesumo

Idhayam pesuindra vaarthai undhan

kaadhil ketkumo

This goes so well with Ram and Priya...

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I have only one word.... beautiful 😍

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Loved this so much ❤️

I really felt bad when Priya met with an accident 😭

But I m glad she recovered and Priya confessed her love

Ram’s emotions were also beautifully portrayed!

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Originally posted by: vaidharbhi95

Ok this was really emotional , and heartbreaking💔.

Really really heartwarming !!!!!! Loved and felt every single emotion!!

I badly wanna see this onscreen.

Have u seen raja rani by any chance?

This reminded of that accident scene.... 💔

Also that song in that movie

Paniyil moodi pona paadhai

meedhu veyil veesumo

Idhayam pesuindra vaarthai undhan

kaadhil ketkumo

This goes so well with Ram and Priya...

Thank you for the comment yaar..☺️ ofcourse I have seen that movie and that will be one of my favourite song.

It does suits Raya..💖

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Originally posted by: RitikaS99

I have only one word.... beautiful 😍

Glad you liked it..

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Originally posted by: RandomWaliLadki

Loved this so much ❤️

I really felt bad when Priya met with an accident 😭

But I m glad she recovered and Priya confessed her love

Ram’s emotions were also beautifully portrayed!

Thank you yaar😍

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Heyyy beautiful OS.. loved it :) Realization of Love after scare of loss ... Always pinches more... Loved it !! Take care :) please continue writing ... Eager to read more..

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Originally posted by: Supercool30

Thank you for the comment yaar..☺️ ofcourse I have seen that movie and that will be one of my favourite song.

It does suits Raya..💖

So glad to find a mutual to drool over RaYa over soulful Tamil songs 😍

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