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Hi guys🤗

I am back with another work of mine. Hope you guys will like it. And if you have any ideas or wishes for the next part then you can give. I will try to include them.

Happy reading😛❤️



Raya TS : I Promise...

Part 1


It was Ram’s birthday and as usual no one from his family wished. And he had no expectations from this lady sleeping on the other side as well. Although he wanted her to wish him but how can he complain? When his own family didn’t bother to wish him. How lonely he was. Sighing he tried to sleep but felt his wife move.

‘Aap soye nahi?’ Her voice came.

Priya acted, she was wide awake all this while. She had his birthday surprise ready, she was expecting his family to come with a cake and surprise him but nothing of that sort happened which literally saddened her. She could imagine how much it had hurt him, she could feel him awake so decided to make him feel special.

‘Tum uth gayi? I am sorry I didn’t mean to wake you up,’ Ram said.

‘Nahi nahi. Mujhe sapna aaya or usme main kuch bahut acha kha rahi thi and now I am starving.’ Priya said, patting her back for making this excuse.

‘Salad khaogi? Ya sandwich?’ Ram asked, making faces.

‘Noodles or biscuit mug cake khane ka man kar raha hai.’ She spoke.

‘Are you serious? Tum or junk food’ Ram asked shockingly.

‘Rehne dijiye. Main hi kha lungi’ she spoke and started walking towards the kitchen knowing well that he will come after her.

‘Are nahi na. Aa raha hu main bhi’ Ram spoke and rushed after her. Priya smiled.

Priya kept noodles boiling and Ram stood with her. ‘Main kya help kru? Veggies katu?’ Ram asked not knowing even a single thing about cooking.

‘Aapko katni aati hai?’ Priya asked.

‘Aa...aati hai na.’ He spoke nervously. Priya didn’t trust him but still gave him the veggies. Meanwhile she picked some biscuits to grind.

Ram tried cutting the veggies and in that process he cut his finger and winced. He didn’t scream to not get any taunts from her. But Priya heard him and came to him ‘Yeh kya kia Mr. Kapoor.’

She took him and put his finger under running water to stop bleeding. Ram was looking at Priya, she was way more in pain than him which surprised him.

‘Kyu karte hai aap aisa? Nahi aata toh bol dete na’ Priya said.

‘Tum phir taunt karti’ Ram said.

Priya just glared at him and he kept quiet.

‘Ab chup chap baith jaiye’ she said to him. He obliged like a good boy.

Priya resumed her work and Ram just looked at her and thanked God for this moment. He didn’t want to be alone on this day and here he was with her, he was grateful.

After a good 15-20 minutes Priya served him the noodles and kept the batter for the cake in the oven.

‘Wow Priya yeh kitni yumm hai’ Ram said, relishing the noodles.

Priya smiled, Adi was right, feed him good food and he is sorted.

Priya then brought the cake and purposely took a spoon full of it and fed him and spoke in her mind ‘Happy birthday Mr. Kapoor'

She asked ‘kaisa hai?’

The cake melted in his mouth getting a moan from him ‘umm. Wow Priya. Har raat aise tum yeh sab banao toh maza aa jaye.’

‘No. Yeh toh aap…. I mean meri neend khul gayi toh mil gaya. Daily daily itna junk nahi.’ priya said.

‘Ha. Par yeh meri marzi se nahi bana. Toh tumhe ek din meri marzi se banana padega, vo toh waste na ho isliye kha raha hu.’ Ram said dramatically.

‘Acha ji. Toh abhi mujhe dedo phir’ Priya too played along.

‘Nahi. Ab toh main kha leta hu. Par tum yad rakhna’ Ram said, clutching his plate tight and gobbling his food.

‘Acha aram se khaie’ Priya said, chuckling at his antics. But his speed didn’t diminish.

‘Chalo ab chale?’ Priya asked when both the things were finished.

Ram felt emotional so he held her hand and said ‘thankyou Priya’

Priya knew why he was thanking her but she just squeezed his hand in acknowledgment.

‘I will try to make your birthday special Mr. Kapoor’ Priya said to herself.

***

Sun rays fell on Ram’s face and for the first time he didn’t feel like going to the office. He wanted to spend this day with Priya so he spoke.

‘Priya!’

‘Aaj chutti le sakti ho? I mean aaj main apna ek Voucher yani Priya ke Vaade mein se ek vada use karna chahta hu.’ Ram spoke hoping that she would agree.

Priya had some other plan and she didn’t want him to use any voucher for today. She said ‘aaj nahi Mr. kapoor aaj bahut important classes hai meri. Main chalti hu. Aapko building mein hi milungi’ and before he could say anything she rushed out of the room disappointing him.

To say Ram was hurt would be an understatement.

‘Sorry Mr. kapoor. Sirf kuch der.’ Priya thought to herself and sat in Auto to go to the office.

‘Sab ho gaya na?’ Priya asked as she reached the office.

‘Ha Priya. Vo bhi aane wala hai meri baat hui usse.’ Adi replied

Ram entered the office, he didn't know why but for once he wanted to celebrate his birthday the whole day with someone. The best part was that this time he thought he had that one person but the worst part was she was busy.

He entered his cabin ignoring every single person on his way ‘Adi yar aaj ka din bahut hi kharab hai’ he spoke, rubbing his temple.

‘Kyu’

This voice made him head shot up, eyes wide and that’s the time when he saw his cabin decorated.

‘Priyaa… tum yaha? Yeh sab kya hai?’ Ram bombarded her with questions.

‘Pehle btaiye din kyu kharab hai aaj ka? How dare you Mr. Kapoor mere pati ke birth day ko aap bekar kaise keh sakte hai?’ She said dramatically.

He was overwhelmed, ‘tumhe pata tha?’

‘Of Course’ Priya answered. ‘Happy birthday Mr. Kapoor.’

‘Priyaa’ he just hugged her. Priya was taken aback.

‘Aap ro kyu rahe hai? Acha nahi laga surprise?’ Priya asked, still in his embrace.

Ram broke the hug with a jolt ‘pagal ho kya tum? Khush hu main bahut. Thank you’

Priya just smiled. His friends too entered screaming and hooting.

Ram cut the cake and fed the first piece to Priya, he will never forget the smile that adorned her face on his day. Priya too fed him and wished him again.

His friends fed him and they had a mini party.

After almost 1 hour everyone got back to work.

‘Chale Mr. Kapoor?’ Priya asked.

‘Kidhar?’ Ram asked.

‘Aap hi ne toh kaha tha chuti lelu, toh chalo.’ Priya replied.

‘Par tumne kaha tha ki tum busy ho.’ Ram said.

‘Nahi. Aaj ka din main khushi se apko dena chahungi naki kisi vaade ki vajah se. Vo voucher aap kabhi or ke liye bacha ke rakhiye.’ Priya told him.

‘Tum bahut achi ho Priya’ he praised her.

But as usual she couldn’t take it ‘chaliye isse pehle hitler vapis aa jaye’ she spoke sternly.

He chuckled and extended his arm for her to hold and then walked happily when she held his arm.

***

So, how was it guys? I hope you guys will like it.

Will see you soon❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It was lovely, very beautiful and simple 🥰. How I hope they get some ideas from this forum and zoom in on the good moments that they can create, rather than devoting all time for scheming and plotting villains.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was soooo cute, love 🤗❤️ Ram got his best birthday ever. Gave me butterflies.😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow!

Kaash show mein bhi aisa kuch mile😳

This was so simple subtle yet endearing❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It's very nice❤️) So similar to Ram and Priya, please continue. There is a small wish - for Ram and Priya at the end of the day to be under the stars on the roof of a tall building. Completely alone, ready to say and do whatever they want)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is sweet! Please continue.

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Loved it !! So beautifully written :)

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Too cute.

Can we get a part 2 pl

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