Raya New SS: Falling for you (Part 5 Updated in page 7)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi All,

When like minded meet...anything can happen... above and beyond...
This is one such story, collective work of three people, who are RaYa Fanatics..!!

Part 1: Below


Part 1
Story :-

This story revolves around two people, who are tied together in marriage, waiting to be freed, whilst they were already where they were meant to be.

Part 1:

RaYa's Marriage is fixed by their parents and due to unforeseen circumstances they do not get to talk before their marriage. They have seen each other's photographs and are due to their families pressures they agree to it, but Ram is Absolutely fine as he liked Priya in the first glance, while priya is all against it.
They get married in a private ceremony and today is their first night after marriage...

Ram Waits in their decorated suite for priya..

Priya comes in..

Ram- hi priya..
Priya- hi..

Ram- how are you?? (Mentally kicking.. ram what are you asking man)

Priya-iam good...how about you.??
Ram- yeah iam good too... you want to change..??( man u are so dead )
Priya-yeahhh...thanks..
Priya in washroom
Priya just tell him how you dont want this marriage to happen...just tell him and get over things beforehand...

Priya comes out and sees that ram has already changed..

Priya- ram there's something i want to tell you.
Ram- yeah.. u want something..??aren't you comfortable.???
Priya-yeah kindoff
Ram-and what makes it??
Priya-this marriage

Ram shocked for a minute..
Ram-sorry i think i heard something else
Priya-nah..u heard it right..
Iam not ready for this marriage...i am sorry if i hurt you... but seriously iam not ready... could we do something about that now..??

Ram: Priya pls tell me it is joke... Asked with confused face.
Priya: no ram i m serious. I don't want to get married to u. Infact i don't want to marry at all.
Ram: priya can u pls explain what is the issue? Agar tumhe shaadi nhi karni toh kyu kia.. Pehle hi mana kar deti...
Priya: yes i have an issue. And i don't want to share it with u. Its kind of personal issue. And I married u because of my family's pressure.If not i don't have any interest in this marriage...
Priya said this with an reckless attitude.
Ram completely shattered with her attitude. He really liked Priya and wanted to share his life with her.

Ram- achha toh tum kya chahti ho
Priya- see ram I don't want to be rude aur na hi muje Aapko kuch jhooti umeed dilani hai... With a pause she continued... I want divorce
Ram(shockingly) - r u serious?.. Priya abhi kuch der pehle hi hamari shaadi hui hai
Priya- ram try to understand... Mein yeh rishta nahi nibha sakti and that's it... Muje abb iss baare mein koi baat nahi karni... Aap Kal subah ghar mein divorce ki baat kariye... Mein jitni jaldi ho sake iss rishte se Azad hona chahti hoon
Ram had enough of her Bakwaas and said mein tumhe koi divorce nahi Dene wala aur na hi mein ghar mein kisi ko kuch batane wala hoon.
Priya- theek hai then u will see my worst part

Ram-the worst you are...the best is my family, and dont you worry, i trust them so much they could mould you much sooner than you think.

Priya-high hopes.you weren't ready when i was being nice, not my mistake.
Ram- fine, lets deal with this... you want the divorce...lets file for it, but you wouldn't let a word out until everything is finalized, and we would finalize it once we are back from out honeymoon.
Priya-are you crazy?? Haven't you been hearing a word i was saying..??
Ram-i did... but this is a gift from my closest friends and i can't deny them.
Priya-deal your problems yourself.
Ram-this problem is triggers 'cz of you, so you should be helping me deal with it.
And if you aren't of any help in this, then trust me i am saying everything to your family, then you got just yourself to deal with everybody.
Priya- you are impossible...
Ram-iam, otherwise i wouldn't be marrying you... smirks
Priya-fine... but what will we do in honeymoon when iam not even intrested in this marriage in the first place
Ram-lets see around and comeback...
Priya-fine..and when is this scheduled if i may ask..
Ram-yeah you can...its tomorrow morning...
Priya- whattt...!!!!shocked..

Ram: haa kal paanch baje tayyar rehna... 5am
Priya: kyaaa...!! Impossible... I don't even wake up before 8am any day.
I can't compromise with my sleep.
Ram: oh cool!! Then start compromising from tomorrow itself. I don't like lazy bones. And u don't have any option. Get ready by 5am tomorrow sharp.
Priya: oh crap!!!
Ram: let's sleep now.
Ram occupied his side on his king size bed.
Priya: oh hello!! Where i m going to sleep? . I m not going to share a bed with u.
Ram: I don't mind sharing a bed with u. If u have any problem i can't help it. Bye good night. He wished her n slept.
Priya: looks here and there and finds no couch. She left with no option and go to bed and sleeps on the other side.
Ram in mind... Ye kya horha mere life mai... Jo b horha hai mai priya ko uski decision badlne k try karunga. Uski dimag mai kya chal rha pata b nhi chalne deti... Ram you are going to have a hard time ahead, dealing with your crazy wife.

In the morning:
4am
Ram: priya uthooo... 4 baj gaya... Hame jaana hai Airport.
Priya: in sleep... Hey bagwaan...!!! Ye kya musibat hai...

Let me sleep for sometime... Plsss ram
She slept again covering her head with duvet.
Ram: uthooo... Rukooo mujhe pata hai kaise utana hai... Ram alarm on karke priya k kaan k paas rakta hai...
Priya : ohhh goddd... Priya immediately grabs him with collar and push him towards her...
Stop this nonsense... Go get a life.. Don't disturb me.

Ram for minute just lost in her. She is holding him by collar and that too very close to her face. She released his collar in sleepy mode.
Ram just stood there awestruck by her beauty.
He is thinking how can someone look so cute in their sleep.
He checks time and realized it is already 4.20.
Oh my god... We have to rush.
Ram: priya utna.. Raaste mai gaadi mai sojana plz... Late horha..
Priya: with irritated face... finally she wakes up and walks with her closed eyes.
Ram: careful girjaogi
Priya: When you care so much, y don't you file for divorce
Ram just smiles...
Sighing Priya somehow manages to get ready and

As Ram and Priya are about to leave for airport, Neha and Vikram Reach Kapoor Mansion.

NeVik-Sorry guys Late hogya...
Ram-No Problem, hum chalejate we are not kids...
Neha-Dekha Vikram, He wants all the Privacy

Ram mentally kicks himself - Ram soch smjhke baat kar, Neha hain yaha...
Ram-Uh..!!! Priya, ye hain mere BestFriends, They Gifted this trip
Priya-Oh...!! Hi..neha, vikram
Neha- Chalo priya, hum chalty. your macho man will get the bags and his friend will help him...

Vikram- hein mein kyun..
Ram- chal be utha ab...

Vikram-Subah Subah isi ke liye aaya hoon lagta...aur waise tu mujh eye bata...roz toh subah 8 tak sota hain,,,, aaj itni jaldi kaise uth gya,,,ya ise kahoon... raat bhar soye nahi.. ???? slyly smiles and winks...

Ram-itna mat soch vikram, neha ke sath rehkar tu bhi waise hi baatein kar rha... hum ache se sogay... tera gift hain toh mana kaise karun...

Vikram-Pata hain tu man hi man laddu kha rha hain... priya ke sath time jo spend karne wala hain...winking...

Ram-haa...mann toh kar rha wo laddu tujhe bhi khiladoon (Mujse jyda mere first night ka excitement baki sabko hain...uff bhagwan bachale )

they all leave for airport.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very interesting Jo...
Priya full of attitude...
Very eager to read their journey...

Give fast updates... I mean u know what I say...

Thank you for informing... Read about RAYA after a very long time... Thanks...

Waiting for the next update. 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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jiyo...jiyo ...jiyo...Jo and other two writers. really it is a treat to read about RaYa. i was desperately waiting and wanted k somebody should write a beautiful RaYa story. and u come up with this. long live RaYa. long live RaShi . long live RaYa/ RaShi k fans.
pl. update jaldi jaldi karna. thanks for pm. RaYa k saath hum bhi honeymoon enjoy karenge. thank u once again Jo for writing after long time. pl continue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: lalmadhu

Very interesting Jo...

Priya full of attitude...
Very eager to read their journey...

Give fast updates... I mean u know what I say...

Thank you for informing... Read about RAYA after a very long time... Thanks...

Waiting for the next update. 😃


Thanks for ur comments.
Yeah updates will be regular.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

jiyo...jiyo ...jiyo...Jo and other two writers. really it is a treat to read about RaYa. i was desperately waiting and wanted k somebody should write a beautiful RaYa story. and u come up with this. long live RaYa. long live RaShi . long live RaYa/ RaShi k fans.
pl. update jaldi jaldi karna. thanks for pm. RaYa k saath hum bhi honeymoon enjoy karenge. thank u once again Jo for writing after long time. pl continue.


Haha thanks for ur lovely comments. Updated all three writers name.
Updates will be regular.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yet another story on raya...
It's superb and interesting...
Please continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Dhamaka 😆😆
Wah kya baat hai ,suhagraat bahot spl hai,unlike stupid romantic scene, without even knowing each other.

Priya bahot zyada rude n arrogant hai, itna hi shaant n mature ram
Khoob jamegi ye Jodi jab ram ,Priya aur unke beech ye fight 😆😆

Continue soon writers
Thx for the pm jo
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi dear
After long reading story written by you and as usual it's awesome.

From this point seems Priya is seem to be arrogant who doesn't care about others feeling especially of her new wedded husband and Ram will surely do everything in his power to make this marriage work unlike his wife.

Thank you for the pm dear.
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Part 2

Airport,

Ram- flight 3 gante late hai

Priya- Aapko confirm Karke nahi hota... Kaamakha muje itne jaldi utha diya

Ram- mujhe notification mila tha

Priya- Matlab aapko Pata tha flight late hai phir bhi aapne muje tang karne ke liye yeh kiya

Ram- yeh sab chodo tum kuch logi

Priya- Haan aapse divorce

Ram- woh mein tumhe honeymoon se aakar de dunga... Abhi bf mein kuch logi

Priya- just go from here

Ram- achha toh teek hai jaa raha hoon... Kuch chahiye toh bol dena

Ram left...

Priya(self) mein divorce tak inhe kaise sahungi.

Ram gets himself some food...

Seeing him eat priya's stomach growls..

Priya- where am i stuck... doesn't he know...people get hungry when they wake up unusually early... there's no use asking him now...he's eaten everything he has got...

Priya takes her laptop and starts doing her work...

Ram-what are you doing??

Priya-minding my own business...

Ram-are you always like this??

Priya-what do you mean...

Ram-nothing...i just noticed you don't smile often... or do u mind if i ask are you on PMS..???

Priya-will you just get lost..?. Or should i do the honors..??

Ram-fine i am leaving...

Iam sure she must be seeing somebody else...otherwise why would she reject me...i am not that bad to look at...am i?? Looking into the mirror..!!

Nah..!! i am good enough..!!

Ram-sure she's having an affair...must find out and lead her to him...this will solve the issues... hope i can get him through on this honeymoon

After some time...

Ram-uhhh priya... kuch puchunn??

Priya-now what ...???

Ram-tumhe ye shadi se itna problem kyun hain..???

Priya- i am just not ready...

Ram- now that u r married... y don't u give it a try..??

Priya- trying to take advantage...?? Look mister...I am neither interested nor wanna give a try...!!!

Ram- u have had a bf..???

Priya- y are you interested...??

Ram-just curious

Priya doesn't reply...

Priya- how much more time before we board the flight...

Ram-20mins...

Priya-you wanna eat something..??

Ram-nah...iam full..

Priya-okk...i'll get something fro myself then.

Priya goes to the counter...

Priya-one choco lava please...

Rajat- something's never change... do they???

Priya-excuse me..??

Rajat- hello to you...

Priya- heyyy hello how are you ...priya hugs rajat...

Rajat- i am fine... how about you???

And ram just then comes to see what is taking priya so long...and is shocked seeing this...

Ram-priya...

Priya-ha ram...

She is side hugs Rajat... while ram looks on...

Ram-can you come here for a sec.???

Priya-haa ek min..let me introduce you guys...

Rajat..this is ram... my husband...

Ram..this is my best friend...rajat

Ram/rajat-Hello shake hands...

Rajat-Congratulations Priya, Congratulations sir

Ram-priya...

Priya-yeah...

Ram(dubious) - who is he..??

Priya-i just told you..

Ram-yeah fine.

Rajat- hello sir,

Ram looks at him curiously as he addressed him as sir ...

Rajat-Mein aapko bahut regularly follow karta hoon...who in the business world doesn't know you... and your winning streak..!!!

Ram-uh... Thankyou...!!! smiles..

Rajat, being only audible to priya- Great Catch..!! winks..!!

Rajat again-Toh ..where are you guys headed to..???

Before priya replies...

Ram-Australia..our .honeymoon...

Priya- fake smiles...

Ram-and what about you..??

Rajat- congratulations..same country...different purpose...sydeny mein ek business meeting hain ...

Priya-yaayyy hum bhi wahi ja rhy...let's see if we can meet... ..we will have lots of fun then.

Ram senses how much excited she is when speaking to rajat. He doesn't like rajat. And here priya is making plans to spend time with him in their honeymoon as well.

Ram: priya.. Chale... Flight ka announcement hogaya. Bye Rajat.

Priya: haa sure. She bid Bye to rajat and hugged him.

Somehow ram doesn't like her closeness with rajat.

Raya boarded the flight... Raya in business class... One by one passenger enter into the flight when they saw Rajat also boarding the same flight.

Priya become super excited:-Tumne bataya nahi tum bhi issi flight se jaa rahe ho

Rajat:- isme batana kya hai yeh flight Australia jaa raha hai

Priya:- iska Matlab hame aur saat mein time spend... They were stopped by a airhostess... Sorry sir.. Ma'am... Pls have ur seat sir

Rajat:- Priya baad mein milte hai

Though ram wanted to believe they were mere friends, his brain defied and had a hard time keeping his face straight..

Ram:- economic class

Priya:- what?

Ram:- tumhara dosth economic class mein baitha hai

Priya:- so what! Flight Australia hi jaa rahi hai na...chalo mein bore nahi hone Wali hoon

Ram:- what do you mean... Tum janti ho ki hum saat mein honeymoon ke liye aate hai... Right

Priya:- ram... I already told you mein iss rishte ko nahi manti

Ram:- Haan mein janta hoon muje baar baar batane ki zaroorat nahi hai

Priya:- ram I don't wanna talk with you

Ram said nothing but he was upset with her behavior.


Flight takes off


Continuous marriage rituals and unseen surprises has had Ram Mentally worn out, as he immediately fell asleep...while Priya split her time between sleeping and reading her books


She got bored after a point of time..and thought she'd find rajat and catch up on him...


Priya wakes up Ram.

Ram:- Haan Priya bolo... Tumhe kuch chahiye

Priya:- muje kuch nahi chahiye aap pls hatiye... Muje Rajat ke paas jaana hai

Ram:- kyun tumhe kyun wahan jaana hai

Priya:- mein bore ho rahi hoon toh socha Rajat ke saat thode der baith jaau

Ram(controlling his anger) - u r supposed to be with me

Priya:- so what Ram... Mein chaubiso gante(24*7) aapke saat chipakkar nahi reh sakti... Aap pls hatiye.

Priya requested one man who is sitting beside Rajat to exchange her seat.

Priya:- hii kya dekh rahe ho... And they continue their talk.

After sometime

Rajat:- Tumhara Pati gussa nahi hoga... Tum honeymoon mein aayi ho aur mere saat baithkar baat Kar rahi ho

Priya:- Nahi he will understand

Flight was about to land when Priya came back to her seat


The flight landed in Australia...


Rajat-chalo bye guys... see u later...

Priya-kal lunch pe milty...

Ram- haan join us for lunch..

Rajat- yeahh okk...
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nice concept... going on well...
RaYa closeness should come soon...

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