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A manofying Ram towards Priya. Nice preview.
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Hello friends here is next part...
PART 15
Ram wake up near 2 pm in afternoon.He look at watch.
Ram : Arrey 2 bj gye Kisi ne uthaya bhi nhi kamaal h...and go to Washroom for freshnup. He come downstairs... and hug dearly Krishna ji...
Krishna ji: badi jaldi uth gye tum...
Ram : Maa...
Krishna : bs... baith ja mein tere liye kuch khane ke liye lati hu bhook toh lg hi rhi hogi...
Ram : okk ... mein dadi se bhi mil Kar ata hu...
Ram : hello dadi and touch her feet...
Dadi : uth gya Mera bacha... aj badi Der tk soya tabiyat toh thik h Teri and touch his forehead to check his temperature ...
Ram : take her and ha mein bilkul thik hu and put his head on her lap... vo toh mein 5 bje soya tha...
Dadi : 5 bje kyu...
Ram : dadi mein kaam kr rha tha 5 bje khatam hua...
Dadi : Ane de aj Amar ko mein puchugi is se mere bache ko itne kaam kyu deta hai ki vo so bhi nhi pata...
Ram : immediately get up... No...No dadi ap Papa se kuch Mt bolna...
Dadi : kyu na khu...
Ram : please dadi... please
Dadi :ok nhi bolugi kuch...
Krishna ji : ram first you call your Papa unhone phone Kiya tha pr tum so rhe the...
Ram : okk Maa...
Ram call Amar ji...
Amar ji : Uth gye nawab Sahab...
Ram : yes...
Amar ji : ye puchna toh tumse waste of time hi hoga ki office kyu nhi aya tum aur ab ane bhi nhi wale...I knew it...
Ram : ji...
Amar ji : toh mujhe ye bta do tumhe 5 crores rupees Ka Kya kiya...
Ram : shopping ki h Papa...
Amar ji : 5 crores ki... Kya ap mujhe bta skte hai Kya shopping ki...
Ram : sorry Papa mein abhi nhi bta skta... bus ap vo bill pay kr dijiye...
Amar ji : ha kyu nhi mein toh hu na.. inhi sb me liye bs tumhare bill pay krta rhu...Kuch khyaya ya nhi...
Ram : ha ja rha hu...
Amar ji : after 1 hour I want in my office.
Ram : but Papa...
Amar ji : I want you here is that clear...
Ram : yes... and hang up the call.
Ram : to himself ufff ye Papa bhi na...ab office jakr Kya kruga...chalo Priya se mil luga... Vaise madam ne ek Baar call krke bhi nhi pucha kyu nhi aya aj mein... ahh... why she will ask ???? Papa hai na bta diya hoga ki so rha hu...
Krishna ji : Ram... aa jao...
Ram : ya coming...
KI
Ram : to Amar ji sec...Hi...Papa Apne cabin mein hi h ...
Sec : yes sir ..
Ram : mood kaisa h unka...
Sec : abhi tk toh Shi h...
Ram : Dara rhi ho mujhe...
Sec : No sir... I am just telling you...
Ram : okk, wish me luck...
Sec : best of luck sir ...
Ram nodded and leave.
Ram knock on door...
Amar ji : without looking yes come in...
Ram : hi Papa...
Amar ji : Arrey ap aa gye... kitni Der ke liye...Vaise ye toh socha hi nhi hoga Tumne ki chalo kuch kaam bhi kr luga... let me tell you Tumne socha hoga ye Papa bhi na ab bulaya h Kya kruga jakr chalo Priya se bhi mil luga...
Ram : shocked exactly but how do you know...
Amar ji : if you are bad I am your dad I know you very well my son...
Ram : hmm...
Amar ji : 5 crores Ka Kya kiya...
Ram : Papa mein baad me bta duga na...
Amar ji : kb ???
Ram : after my marriage...
Amar ji : chalo itne wait krte h...Vaise mein jan skta hu aj itni late tk kyu soye...
Ram : vo mein kuch kaam kr rha tha Jo Subha 5 bje khatam hua...
Amar ji : kamm ??? chalo mein ye nhi puchne wala ki aisa kya kaam tha kuch toh h Jo Tumne complete Kiya.
Ram : only smile... ab mein jau...
Amar ji : of course tum sunte kha ho kisi ki jao...
Ram : leaves and call Priya...
Priya see his name flashing on screen but didn't pick up the call.
Ram : Arrey phone bhi receive nhi kr rhi...
Ram come in training area.
Ram : hey Vikram and hug him.
Vikram hug him back...
Vikram : kaise aya...Priya se Milne mujhe pta h training mein toh tujhe koi interest hai nhi... Vaise let me tell you Priya is upset from you.
Ram : Acha aisa h...chal mein mil kr ata hu...
Vikram : best of luck ...
Ram go to Priya .
Ram : hello...
Priya look at him but didn't respond...and move from there.
Ram : Arrey i said hello...
Priya rudely : Hiii
Ram : Kya ho gya yr kyu naraj ho...
Priya : tumhe toh koi fark padta nhi krte toh vhi ho jo tumhara man kre hai na... and move from there.
Ram following her... Arrey Kya kr diya aisa Meine...
Priya : kl call Kiya Tumne mujhe ????
Ram : kB ???
Priya : leave it...
Ram : no tell me...
Priya : Meine bola tha na Ghar pauchne ke baad call kr dena...
Ram : Acha raat Arrey mein late paucha tha...
Priya : phir bhi krna toh chaiye tha I was waiting for your call...
Ram : Acha sorry next time se jarur kr duga chahe kitna bhi late ho...fir Mt bolna distrub kr Diya...
Priya : kbhi nhi...bolugi...
Ram : ab toh gussa nhi ho...
Priya : hu...
Ram : ab kyu????
Priya : why didn't you come office today???
Ram : smiling ab kha hu toh????
Priya : very funny I am asking for training.
Ram : I know...
Priya : you are not serious about anything in your life...
Ram : kisne kha hu na very very serious for YOU darling...
Priya : baate kra lo tum se kitni bhi...
Ram : ha but mein tumhare sath hi krna Pasand kruga...
Priya : you are wasting my time now... bye...
Ram : hold her hand Arrey where are you going leaving me here...
Priya : vo Kya h na ye company mere Papa ki nhi h mujhe kaam krna h...
Ram : kisne kha tumhare Papa ki nhi h AI mean hamari shadi hone wali h meri family tumhari family tumhari family meri family mtlb mere Papa tumhare Papa... hue na...
Priya : uff ... bs kro yr... galti ho gyi...
Ram : yes...
Priya : jau ab...
Ram : ha jao mein bhi ja hi rha hu...
Priya : kha ????
Ram : khi nhi tumhare sath training section me... Papa toh khush ho jayege mujhe Dekh kr...
Priya : you r impossible... and both leave.
After office hours Ram drop Priya SH.
KM
At dinner time
Everyone is on dinning table...
Dadi : Meine pandit ji se baat ki h Ram ki engement ki...
Ram : (excitedly)Arrey wah dadi... toh batao na jaldi se...
Dadi : bta rhi hu ruk ja .
Amar ji : Ji maa boliye...
Dadi pandit ji ne 2 date batayi h 1 toh aj se 6 days baad h aur dusri 15 days baad.
Amar ji : Ok...but ram cut him in middle...
Ram : ha toh thik h na aj se 6 days wali thik h... what say.
Amar ji : chup rahoge tum hum baat kr le...
Ram : ji... and sit quietly...
Amar ji : hum phele Sudhir ji se baat kr lete h akhir unhe bhi toh kuch tayyari krni h...
shadi sirf hamare bete ki nhi h unke Ghar mein bhi pheli shadi hai...
Krishna ji : ha Maa ye Shi bol rhe h...
Dadi : thik h tum baat kr Lena ...
Rishabh : slowly to Ram Kya bhai bade bechan ho rhe ho...
Ram : chup baith...
Amar ji : chalo ab sb dinner kr lo... aur ha ram kl office aa Jana...
Ram : jarur Papa...
After dinner...
Amar ji talk to Sudhir ji and engement will be after six days... both engement and marriage will be in 1 month both families are happy with it and marriage is
Amar ji call Ram in study.
Ram : yes dad...
Amar ji : I need to talk to you.
Ram : ji boliye ...
Amar ji ab 1 month ke andar tumahri shadi ho jyegi aur abhi tk tum kaam se itna dur ho mein chatha hu tum KI smabhalo ab completely... mujhe pta h tumhara excuse tayyar hai... pr tum kl se roj aaoge chahe 4-5 hours kyu na aao...
Ram : pr kyu Papa...
Amar ji : beta tum samaj kyu nhi rhe ho ab tumhare sath Priya ki bhi jindagi judne ja rhi h aur ab tum bade ho gye ho mujhe bhi Acha nhi lagta tumhe is tarah se datna...
Ram : ok mein try kruga...
Amar ji : ok jao ab...
Ram leave.
Amar ji smile to himself mujhe pta h ram in sb ka tum pr koi farak nhi padega koi nhi... I have better plans for you my son.
Ram call Priya
Ram : Hello darling...
Priya : Kya baat h bade khush LG the ho...
Ram : Khushi ki toh baat h bs 1 mahina aur fir tum hamesha ke liye mere pass hogi... Fir mujhe ye raate akele nhi gujarni nhi padegi...
Priya : Acha ji...
Ram : Vaise akele toh ab bhi nhi Hoti roj tum mere sapno me ati ho and teasingly aur mere sapno mein hum Kya Kya krte h...
Priya : cut him in middle...ufff.. bs kro ab...
Ram : laugh... at her reaction. Acha honeymoon ke liye kha chalogi...
Priya : first you wait mujhe Papa bula rhe h...
Ram : ok kl milte h office mein. Bye , Good night.
Priya wish the same and hang the phone.
Priya : smile remembering his talks Pagal h... but bhaut pyara hai...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update.
But jaldi Ram ko responsible Nama do.
Thanks and continue soon
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Ram is getting married but still he is not responsible only dependent on his father hard earned money with all this Dadi too pamper him.
Priya is only factor in his life which can change him good with making him responsible man.
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Ram I complete spoiled brat of big rich family still have good heart but not responsible... still want to live teenage free bird life... but loved Priya dearly & the only thing which abt he is serious in life... Amar should make plan with Priya to bring Ram on right path to make him responsible hope they can do... I m enjoying story a lot it's really cute... marriage is on board now can't wait for next do post soon...


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First of all A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MY SUPERSTAR RAM KAPOOR may God always bless you and your family. Stay Happy and Healthy for forever.You will be always in our Hearts as our Superstar.

Hello friends, here come next part. Hope you will like it.Sorry for upcoming errors.
PART 16
Next Morning, Sharma House
Priya is getting ready for office.
Shipra ji : priya after 1 week is your engement and you are still going to office.
Priya : Maa engement hi toh hai, and your all are here to do prepration aur vaise bhi Amar uncle ko acha nhi lagta agar koi bewajha apne work ko ignore kre.
Sudhir ji : priya shi bol rhi hai shipra aur enegement mein abhi waqt hai Amar ji khud priya ko time de dege.
Priya : right papa, Maa jaldi se breakfast ready kr do mein abhi aa rhi hu.
Shipra ji : ha thik ha.
IN KM, 8'o clock.
Everyone is sitting on dinning table. Except our dear Ram.
Amar ji : ye Ram kha hai...
Dadi : abhi aya nhi hai so rha hoga.
Amar ji : angrily shadi hone wali hai lekin koi farak hi nhi padta kl se agar 8'o clock tk vo dinning table par hai toh hi usko breakfast milega nhi toh koi jarurat nhi hai.
Krishna ji : ye ap kya bol rhe hai...breakfast ni milega bhooka rhega kya mera beta.
Amar ji : agar ek din breakfast nhi krega toh agle din time pr ayega ko value hi nhi hai usko time ki kuch krta hai vo kabhi time par...
Dadi : tu kyu uske piche pda rehta hai.
Amar ji : kyu pda rheta hai shadi hone wali hai uski mein nhi chatha us se shadi kr ke Priya ki life barbaad ho. Kbhi kbhi toh ram ki harkat dekh kr sochta hu khi mein apne bete ki khushi ke liye priya ke sath toh galat nhi kr rha hu. Aur sb sun lijiye aj se mere aur ram ke beech koi nhi ayega.
Amar ji get up from his seat.
Dadi : ab kha ja rhe ho tum.
Amar ji : apke pyare aur nalayak pote ko uthane.
Krishna ji : aap rukiye mein jati hu na..
Amar ji : meine kha na aj se koi beech mein nhi ayega.
Amar ji come in Ram room.
Ram is sleeping peacefully.
Amar ji : Ram... Ram get up.
Ram : (in sleep) Maa sone do na waise bhi papa toh gye hoge.
Amar ji : take the water jug and throw it on his face.
Ram : immediately getting up, ye kya kr rhe h ap.
Amar ji : get ready in 15 mins and come downstairs.
Ram : but.
Amar ji : 15 mins and left the room.
After 15 mins Ram come downstairs.
Amar ji is ready to go to office only waiting for Ram.
Amar ji : do your breakfast and come office after 1 hour. Aur ha kal se agar 8;'o clock tk tum dinning table par nhi aye toh tumhe breakfast nhi milega.
Ram : open his mouth to say something.
Amar ji : hear me out first, 8'o clock tk dinnig table par aur 9 : 30 am tk office mein mil jana mujhe.
Ram : ok.
Here I am introducing 1 new character, Geeta : Amar ji sister and Shidhant is Geeta's son.
Amar ji : krishna tum Geeta ko call kr ke Ram ki shadi ke bare mein bta do aur usko aaj ya kl hi yha ane ke liye bol do tumhari help ho jyegi.
Krishna ji : ji mein kr dugi.
Aamr ji left for office.
Ram sit on sofa leaving a deep sigh.
Ram : kya ho gya hai papa ko aur apne bhi kuch nhi bola Maa.
Rishabh : ab Maa apko aur nhi bcha payegi bhai papa ne aj hum sb se bol diya hai ki apke aur papa ke beech koi nhi ayega.
Ram : sadly, Mera kya ho ga ab.
Krishna ji : filhaal toh breakfast kro aur office jao.
Ram : ha ja rha hu aur kr bhi kya skta hu.
Ram left for office.
Krishna ji call Amar ji's sister.
Geeta : hello bhabahi. How r u ??
Krishna ji : i am fine what about you.
Geeta : i am also fine.
Krishna ji : Acha tum ek kaam kro sidhnat ke sath yha aa jao ek good news hai.
Geeta : areey wah bhabhi kya baat hai good news kya hai ???
Krishna ji : ha vo Ram ki shadi fix ho gyi hai engement aj se 6 days baad hai.
Geeta : bhabhi ap ne Ram ki shadi bhi fix kr di aur mujhe ab bta rhe ho ap not right vaise vo maan kaise gya kaun ahi ladki kya naam hai???
Krishna ji : arrey ruk jao Priya naam hai sb aur baki ki batte ane ke baad kr lena aur tumhe toh pta h Ram ka aur apne bhaiya ka.
Geeta : ok ok hum log aj sham tk aa jyege aur viase bhi kitni sari shopping krni hai abhi toh ya vo bhi kr li.
Krishna ji : arrey abhi kuch bhi nhi kiya hai. Sab kaam baki hai abhi toh.
Geeta : ok bhabhi hum aa jyege.
Krishna ji : ok bye
Geeta : bye bhabhi.
IN KI ,Training section, 8 : 45 am
Vikram : kya baat hai aj tu aur vo bhi time se phele.
Ram : ha tujhe pta hai mere liye bhi ek hitler hai mere DAD.
Vikram : laugh..
Ram : aur Neha kaisi hai Dekhi emin hi hai.
Vikram : ha vhi hai yr.
Ram : tu bhi shadi kr le ab.
Vikram : abhi kha yr phele mein apne carrer toh bna lu jis ke ki mein Neha ko ek achi life de sku aur mujhe pta vo jarur hoga bs thoda time lagega and i dont mine waiting if it is for good. amein teri tarah lucky thodi hu.
Ram : tu bhi na ab isme lucky wali kya baat hai.
Vikram : dont get me wrong. but tell me what do you do????
Ram : means ???
Vikram : tell me what do you do??? tum party krte ho jo man mein ata h kharid lete ho chahe itna bhi expenisve vo.
Ram : yes , then.
Vikram : kha se krte ho tum ye sb apne Papa ke paise so mujhe koi ek aisi chij batao jo tumne khud ki earning se ki ho.
Ram : look at him without blink and then laugh loudly. Oh mere bhai dost hi reh ye aisi baate na kr tu mujhse.
Vikram : yhi teri problem hai Ram.
Ram : dekh aya toh hu office time pr kr rha hu yr time lagega mujhe bhi,
In mean time everyone come and Priya also.
Priya : Hi vikram
Vikram : hi...
Ram : hi priya
Priya : oh hii tum yha sach mein ho mujhe lga meri imagination hai,
Ram : very funny na.
Priya : No aj tum time pr thats why.
Ram : ab se mein roj time pr ane ki koshish kruga ok.
Priya : good.
Training section start.
Amar ji call Krishna ji
Amar ji : hello
Krishna ji : ji
Amar ji : Geeta se baat hui tumhari.
Krishna ji : ji vo bol rhi h ki aj aa jyegi.
Amar ji : okk toh tum log agar time ho toh thodi bhaut shopping kr lena amein aj decoration aur catreing final kr duga.
Krishna ji :okk, Krishna ji apke lunch ke sath meine Ram, Vikram aur Priya ke liye bhi luch bheja hai unko bta dena khi bahar ka khana na kha le.
Amar ji : ok bta duga ab rakhta hu.
Krishan ji : okk.
Training is going on when Ram's phone ring.
Ram : sorry sir i will be back soon and come out.
Ram : Hello choti.
Nuts : Bhaii... congralution... ab finally mujhe bhabhi mil h gyi.
Ram : thanks choti, Thanks se kaam nhi chalge abhi apni aur Bhabhi ki pic mujhe send kro meine abhi tk unko dekha nhi nhi bs naam suna hai Priya.
Ram : ok kr duga..
Nuts : abhi...
Ram : ha baba kr duga ye bta tu kb aa rhi hai.
Nuts : mein apki engement se do din phele augi.
Ram : okk, mein tujhe baad mein call kruga.
Nuts : ok but pic send kr dena i am waiting.
Ram : ha kr rha hu.
Ram click one with priya and send it to Nuts.
Now its Lunch time Amar ji send Lunch to Ram Vikram and Priya.
Amar ji call Ram and Priya in his cabin.
Amar ji : Priya beta ye decorator hai agar tum kuch special chathi ho toh inhe bta do ye sb kr dege.
Priya : arrey nhi uncle mujhe apki choice pr pura bharosa hai akhir ap best hi choose krege ab kuch.
Amar ji : smile thats why i like you.
Amar ji : turning to Ram Ha ji nawab sahab apki koi farmish.
Ram : Nhi papa jo bhi apko theek lge vasie bhi jo mujhe chaiye vo toh mujhe mil hi rha hai look at Priya.
Amar ji also follw his gaze.
Amar ji : vo toh mein dekh hi rha hu.
Ram : smile.
Ram and Priya come out.
Ram : You sure tumhe koi change nhi chaiye,
Priya : of course not Ram kaisi baat kr rhe ho, dekha na tumne uncle khud hi kitne ache se decoration plan ki hai.
Ram : Acha ye baat hai.
Priya : Ha ji , ab chle.
Ram : chalo.
Geeta come KM with Sidhant.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Me first...
Will be back after reading
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Wow... nice going.. good that AK is getting strict and Vikram is acting like a good friend trying to make Ram get responsible.

But
But
Ram is still ignorant.

Hope priya will be able to make Ram realise his responsibilities and hopefully this would happen without a sad/separation story line

But anything is welcome (even if included sadness and separation) as long as it has raya romance and happy ending

Update soon
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Nice update.
I'm really irritated with Ram's behaviour.
When will he realise his responsibilities?
Sid?????????? Hope he's not negative...
Please don't separate raya...
Thanks for pm and continue soon...
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Nice update...
Waiting for Ram to become a more responsible person..
Please continue soon.
Thanks for PM

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