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Posted: 8 years ago

Sorry guys for the delay. It's been crazy for me. First my in-laws are in town visiting us after a long time and then there was this crazy Hurricane Irma to deal with. I have tried to update as much as I could for now. But promise, I will give you guys a lengthy and good update very soon. I am pretty sure, most of you might have forgotten where we left off earlier. So, a small recap.

Kahaani ab tak...

We learn that Ram is the one who has arranged for the entire Sid disappearance fiasco. Ayesha is packed to Paris. Krishnaji meets with an accident, so Ram and Priya are head to Delhi.

Part-14

Ram and Priya land in Delhi and head straight to the Hospital where Krishnaji is admitted.

Ram: Apeksha, yeh sab hua kaise?

Apeksha explains everything.

Priya: Doctor kahan Hai?

Apeksha: He is on rounds. Should be here any moment now. Maa was awake an hour ago, she was again asking for you Ram.

Ram didn't speak much, her just keeps mum.

After some time, the doctor comes, Ram, Priya and Apeksha go to his cabin.

Apeksha: Hello doctor, this is Ram.

Doctor: Oh, you are the Ram, whose name, the patient has been taking constantly. You are?

Ram: I'm her son. She is my mother. Apeksha is my sister.

Doctor: Ok. Good that you have come. The medicine she had been given to sleep should wear off in sometime, let's see how she responds when she sees you. She is trying her best not to forget you, she loves you dearly I believe.

Priya: How long does she have to start here in Delhi? Can we shift her to Mumbai?

Doctor: I would quantify that after her meeting with Ram.

Nurse: Doctor, the patient is awake.

Doctor: Lets go Mr. Ram.

Ram gets up and walks towards Krishnaji's room. He looks at her from the window and his unable to move his feet, with a heavy heart, he falls on the chair outside. Priya rushes to him and puts her hand on his shoulder.

Priya: Ram, aap ab himmat nahi haar sakte hai. Let's go in. You must do this. You must do this for Maa, you should do this for yourself. Maa deserves to be with her Son and you deserve to be with your Mother. It's been too long and it is time, you two get a chance to brush aside the misunderstandings.

Ram: I know Priya. But, I am feeling very guilty that I never understood my mother. I believed strangers over my own mother. I never let her talk to me to clear any misunderstandings. I didn't even give Apeksha a chance to tell Maa's side of the story. I blindly trusted unworthy people. I feel very guilty Priya.

Apeksha: Yeh sab chodo Ram. What is important is you know the truth and you are willing to accept reality. Maa needs you more than ever. Let's go in. Please.

Ram makes his way into the room. Krishnaji instantly recognizes Ram. Priya doesn't enter the room.

Krishnaji: Ram? You have come.

Ram: Yes. I am sorry. I am so sorry to have put you through this.

Krishnaji: Yeh sab tumhari wajah se thode hi hua hai. But, you have come.

Ram: Haan Maa. I have come for you.

Krishnaji: You have called me your Mother?

Ram: Haan. Aap hi ho meri Maa. I am sorry for everything.

Krishnaji: Let bygones be bygones.

Doctor: Ab aap ko kaise lag raha hai?

Krishnaji: I feel better.

Doctor: Nurse, check her Blood Pressure and other vitals.

Nurse: Yes Doctor.

Nurse checks the vitals and lets the doctor know.

Doctor: Her condition is much better, I would suggest, if her conditions remains stable like this until another 24 hours, you can to take her to Mumbai.

Ram: Thank you Doctor.

Krishnaji: Tum akele aaye ho? Priya nahi aayi?

Ram: Aayi hai na. Apeksha, Priya kahan hai?

Apeksha: woh bahar khadi hai. Woh andar nahi aayegi.

Ram: Kyun?

Then Ram remembers, the promise. He just excuses himself to meet Priya.

Priya: Kaisi hai Maa?

Ram: Woh behtar hai. Main apna waada waapis leta hoon, andar chalo. Maa puch rahi hai tumhare liye.

Priya: Lekin, aise kaise thod doon?

Ram: Jab main khud keh raha hoon, toh kya problem hai?

Priya: Aap ko yaad tha about promise?

Ram: Isiliye toh aaya hoon. Ab andar chalo.

Priya doesn't say anything and enters the room to see a teary eyed Krishnaji.

Priya: Kaise Hai aap Maa?

Krishnaji: Main bahut acchi hoon, tumne mere Ram ko mujhse milaya

Priya: Aapse door rehke Ram bhi khush nahi hain Maa.

Krishnaji: Tumne woh kar dikhaya, Jo maine karne ki koshish hi nahi ki. Tumne Ram se pyar kiya aur usey pyar ka ehsaas bhi karvaya. Jaise maine us din kaha, Waise hi Aaj Ram ke liye pyar ka Matlab Priya aur Priya ka Matlab pyar ho gaya Hai.

Priya: Aap ko kaise?

Krishnaji: Nahi toh Aaj mera beta mere saamne nahi hota Priya.

Ram is listening to the whole conversation with tears. But he was glad that at least Priya understood his mother.

After some time, nurse asks them to leave as the patient needs to rest.

Apeksha: Ram, tum aur Priya niklo, I'll stay for tonight, kal kaise bhi discharge kardenge, so I need to figure out a way to go back to. Australia.

Ram: Australia? Tumlog Mumbai Chal rahe ho. No discussion on this. I'll arrange everything.

Priya: Haan Apeksha, we will take care of everything.

Ram: Kuch bhi chahiye toh, please call me.

Apeksha: Sure. Can I call you bhai?

Ram: Permission kyun le rahi ho? Haq se bulao.

Ram and Priya walk out of the hospital.

Priya: Hotel aas paas koi hoga na?

Ram: Hotel ki zaroorat nahi hain, I had a discussion with my friend before coming to your house and he had made it clear that we are staying with him and his family. So let's head there.

They get into a car.

Priya: Kaunsa dost? I didn't think you had friends other than Vikram.

Ram: Hahaha. Very funny. His name is Rajat, mera do saal junior hai MBA mein aur pehle Dubai mein rehta tha, recently shifted to Delhi. He has been insisting on meeting, but Meri shaadi hogayi aur mein meri biwi ke saath busy ho gaya.

Ram: But, in all honesty, thank you for not doing the same mistake I did with my mom. Thanks for keeping in touch and helping me. Agar, kuch ho jaata unhe toh mein apne aap ko maaf nahi kar paata.

Priya: Why are you talking like this? We have a task ahead of us. How will we take them to Mumbai and where do they stay until everything is under control?

Ram: I have to speak to Vikram. Anyways, we have reached.

They head in to be greeted by Rajat and his family consisting of parents and wife and a daughter.

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Vikram gets in touch with Rathod and devices a plan to get Sid out and show it as how Ram has put in efforts to get Sid out safely.

Vikram: Rathod, time aa gaya hai. Let's sticks to Plan-A for now.

Rathod: Ok sir. Don't worry.

Vikram: Take care and keep me posted.

Rathod goes inside the make believe Police station.

Sid: Sir, please aap mujhe ek call karne ka mauka toh dijiye na. Please.

Rathod: Nahi, par tu kis ko call karega?

Sid: Mere Bhai ko.

Rathod: Tera Bhai Ram Kapoor hai Kya? Itna uchal raha hai?

Sid: (thinking, the inspector would get effected by Ram's name) Haan. Ram Kapoor mera Bhai hai.

Rathod: Shinde, isko theek se khana nahi de rahe ho kya? Behki behki baatien kar raha hai.

Sid: Main sach keh raha hoon sir.

Rathod laughs it off.

Rathod: Tujhe yaad hai na kahan se mila humko tu? Brothel se. Ram Kapoor. The Ram Kapoor ka bhai, brothel mein? Kamsekam jhooth toh dhang ka bol.

Sid: Mujhe pata nahi ki main wahan kaise gaya? Yeh sab koi saajish hai sir.

Rathod: Tumhe kya lagta hai? Main koi Ekta Kapoor ke serial ka writer hoon? Jo tu jo marzi aaye story bata raha hai aur mein likhte jaoon?

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Rajat: Hi Ram, Thanks a lot for making it. Its been so long!

Ram: Haan yaar. This is Priya, my wife.

Priya: Hello!

Rajat: Namaste Bhabi!

They introduce themselves to one another, they have dinner and go to bed.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful part n pls take care of urself n waiting for long update n pls take ur time
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi, Namrata, me first !!!!
How's your hand?
Waiting for your update for a long time
But this is short but sweet.
Finally Ram has got his real family.
"Ram ke liye Pyar ka matlab Priya and
Priya ka matlab Pyar hai".
These were absolutely beautiful lines from the show but
Never gave Justice th these lines.
But you've used this Phrase beautifully..
Take a bow.
Rajat new friend??????
Thanks and waiting eagerly.
Please continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
After long time a good update
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Posted: 8 years ago
With mother son duo meet after long wait happiness is around so is the Priya effort also get paid with they are now happy family along with Apeksha.
As an mother Krishnaji was so right on her instinct about RaYa love and they will be united forever.
Another entry with Rajat and family but it seems interesting about Sid who is still in illusion created by awesome foursome.

Thank you for the pm dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakshiashu

Hi, Namrata, me first !!!!

How's your hand?
Waiting for your update for a long time
But this is short but sweet.
Finally Ram has got his real family.
"Ram ke liye Pyar ka matlab Priya and
Priya ka matlab Pyar hai".
These were absolutely beautiful lines from the show but
Never gave Justice th these lines.
But you've used this Phrase beautifully..
Take a bow.
Rajat new friend??????
Thanks and waiting eagerly.
Please continue soon..



hey Anu, thanks. My hand is better.

thank you for the comment. I felt that Ram should have known what Priya and Krishnaji spoke about him. So.

will update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

With mother son duo meet after long wait happiness is around so is the Priya effort also get paid with they are now happy family along with Apeksha.

As an mother Krishnaji was so right on her instinct about RaYa love and they will be united forever.
Another entry with Rajat and family but it seems interesting about Sid who is still in illusion created by awesome foursome.

Thank you for the pm dear


hey thanks for the comment. I felt they completely ignored the discussions that should have happened between Ram and Krishnaji during the five year leap. It was so crazy when Ram was still angry with his mother during the peehu custody episodes.

I didn't want Rajat angle in any way. So the boundaries have been established. Priya is Bhabi for Rajat and he is married. So, I am glad, no Rajat loving Priya drama.

:D
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Posted: 8 years ago


awww awesome the way mother son duo meet & clear all the misunderstanding was mind blowing I enjoyed little relief moment in story Ape & Ram's bro sis duo also loved it a lot enjoyed fully... now Did is out so some action must be on... but now Rajat is doing here hope he is married don't want his bad eye on Priya now... waiting for next do update next part soon...

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Posted: 7 years ago
yaaar...it is so awesome.u really made my day n night(lol).I'd read all parts in one go..even my eyes had given up to look at the screen but my heart didn't.The way u build up the story n showed every emotion of raya...the different sides of their personality which they r hiding from the world for so long is really applauding.
pls..update the next part soon n do pm me
N here im getting little greedy pls send me link of ur other ff os,ss on raya if u'd written n u have enough time to do.so

N update soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
The things i like :);):*
1)I love the discussion between ram nuts n priya kartik about their personal life...n nuts n kartik telling abiut their grief n guilt whtever it is to force their siblings into a forced/convenience marriage i so wanted that in the show
2)ram loosing some weight...n our nevi teasing him for that...but i wanted priya to confess that she know abt that by teasing n more romantically but it was nice
3) want more ram n apeksha unlike in the show
4) the conversation between dam n krishna g was damn emotinal yr rula diya
5)yipppiieee rajat id devar for priya...but we like our jealous ram...he look so cute
This is my ever so long feedback cmnt explaining things i like or want...i hope u don't mind it

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