KTBM: SS: Bawara Mann... Part 16 & epilogue pg 20 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update... loved Arika nokjok
Hope karan mother will accept Tirupu soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Karan is prankstar having fun on Tipsy expanse but on time he called her to avoid any harm. So sweet of her after so many things sad by Karan mother she did things to make her feel good. Hope Madhuji realize Tipsy goodness.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Loved it n Love AriKa but y karan mom hate tirpura awww hope future like karne lage n waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Nice story
Moving great
But dear plzz don't put separation track plzz
It just awesome
U can give their love story how they fall for each other
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awww omg loved the update I so enjoyed it so Karan' s mother don't like Tirupoo much but once she know she surly will love her... she is not having mother so she knows the value of mother this days this looks rare but Tirupoo is different & down to earth girl KK is lucky to have her so as she... KK loves & supports her a lot which I loved the most waiting for next do post the. soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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KTBM: SS: Bawara Mann.. part 5


Next day on set, Tripura do her work for next script, Tina came there..

Tina- tipsy..

Tripura full busy in writing- hmm.

Tina- you know na what's the tomorrow..

Tripura- Yaa I know that, but you know him na so much care for me..

Tina- so you will..

Tripura- one time i asked him, if he say no then..

Tina- you will no..

Tripura- who say I will, if he say yes then it's ok, he say no then also it's OK.

Tina- how much he care for you..

Tripura- I know that..

Tina- by the way, all the best jaan..

Tripura- hey don't called me jaan, that's only one person called me jaan, that's only him..

Tina- he have copyright on that..

Tripura-yes, in proud tone..

Tina- you both arev unbelievable..

Tripura- we know that very well and she smiled..

Karan came there- hi Tina..

Tina- hi, you both carry on, I'll be back..

Tripura- Tina you can stay here..

Tina- no we talked later and she went..

Tripura- mad girl..

Karan- what about you talked..

Tripura- tomorrow morning you will know about all..

Karan- I feel some fissy what's the day tomorrow..

Tripura- that's good you don't know about tomorrow day..

Karan- tell me what's the day tomorrow..

Tripura- think for sometime, I finish my work then you finish your, after that at night I will tell you..

Karan- jaan plz tell me..

Tripura- no, and she stood up from there, went with smile..

Karan thought- I m sure she think something fissy like, I m going to oppose her, tipsy don't do any wrong...


At night, Karan reached home & found she is humming her favorite song, she look at him n smile- seat I'll get some water for you..

Karan- no needed plz you do your work..

Tripura- what work..

Karan with smile- humming your favorite song..

Tripura- but you didn't asked me why I m humming my favorite song..

Karan- I know that you happy for tomorrow..

Tripura- then tell me why I m happy for tomorrow..

Karan- don't go for another serial na jaan, how can I survived jaan..

Tripura- it's just 2 hrs jaan..

Karan- it's 12o minutes, I can understand it's great opportunity for you but my heart..

Tripura- plz and it's web series, not a daily soap..

Karan- but Tina & Rohan also there na, they are also best, why you..

Tripura- coz they like my story, that I can't help..

Karan- OK but you connect with me through Bluetooth..

Tripura fold her arms and glaring him..

Karan- what..

Tripura- I m far from your set it's only 15 minutes distance..

Karan face dull..

Tripura came near him and put her palm on his cheek- OK I m connect with you through Bluetooth but when my work done OK, I completed my work with in minimum minutes..

Karan- don't stress yourself, I can handle with little confidence..

Tripura- why you behaving like a child sometimes..

Karan- coz you pampered me a lot, what could I do..


Next day, Tripura woke up first and saw Karan still sleeping, his arm on her waist & his chain touched her shoulder, she smile & softly kissed on his lips & without disturbing him, went for fresh up and doing her Pooja and make breakfast for her & him and make a note for him and put on one note on breakfast table and other one stick on note board and she live home..

Karan woke up from his sleep and found Tripura's side empty..

Karan- ohhh! She have early morning call not done, how much time I said you jaan don't work these much, after you came home you again started your work, and he checked his mobile, Tripura's message indicating, he open it and read- jaan breakfast on table and your lunch also pack plz take it with you, don't forget, woke up from bed, don't talked with my imagination figure, now go & fresh, be fast, love you jaan, take care & plz safe drive, he smiled..

Karan to himself- I m going to be mad soon..


Karan driving the car and think about there first meet, at rented room, Tripura was owner of rented room but she can't afford to give rent so she search for room partner, Tina & Rohan knows about Karan and they gave address to him, he reached there and found a girl in black top with three fourth shorts, tied her hairs by hanky and she eat something.

Tripura- yes!

Karan- hi, it's Karan, Tina & Rohan give me your address..

Tripura- oh, KK!

Karan- Karan Khanna..

Tripura- in short KK, plz come in..

He entered in home, it's one room kitchen with two beds both are another sides, very clean room...

Tripura- this is your bed, she indicated bed and you put your all stuff's in cupboard, half shelf is mine & half yours, only 3 rules is here you have to follow..

Karan- which, in little low tone..

Tripura- 1st no smoking, no drinking...

2nd you have to eat home made food, by me I m not taking for that other money coz I don't like that..

3rd you know that i am script writer and in my mind lots of things running always like flood, and sometimes I can't sleep peacefully at night so I m on the lights and doing my work..

Karan- 1st I don't have any bad habits only one bad habit that I don't have any habit..

2nd I can't afford out side food, is that nice ke you didn't take money of food, it's your big heart..

3rd one lights at late night on, I will manage when you on lights, is that OK.

Tripura- OK then welcome home..

Karan- by the way what's your name...

Tripura- it's so long, may be you burst into laughter, so you can call me tipsy only OK..

Karan- why would I laughed, plz tell me..

Tripura- Tripura Sundari Nagrajan..

Karan- it's nice name, can I called you trirupoo..

Tripura only smile & nodded in yes..

They started there relation from room met to friendship then love then love in relationship..

On fine day, Karan back from audition..

Tripura doing her work..

Tripura- hi buddy, what about audition..

Karan- again rejection, it's 25th time yaar, I m fed up now..

Tripura- can you do me a favour..

Karan- what favour..

Tripura- for me can you..

Karan- why would I favour for you, you are my only friend..

Tripura- actually I wanted 2 pet in my home, I m giving them mother love can you give them father love, will you..

Karan- you proposed me..

Tripura- yes I proposed you..

Karan- I don't have anything, I m zero, most important, I am always borrow money from you when month end..

Tripura- so what..

Karan- Tripura it's real life not reel, OK..

Tripura- yes or no..

Karan- no..

Tripura- think once..

Karan- plz listen to me..

Tripura- you listen to me first, you are zero but these zero have lots of value, really now don't think that ke I have write new script & you listen about it, it's really mean I said these from my heart, I don't know when I started like you, and I m also agree with you, but yes I m love with you, you think that tipsy gone mad, but yes I madly love with you and I m believe on god you will surely get opportunity, you will be superstar, don't give me answer now but don't refused your feelings for me and she give him one card and say..

Tripura- came here for audition, I m script writer and also a cast director, I mean assistant, I was writing a new script and producer, director like so much and they wanted making new serial on that you came there and give your audition they choose one actor but his demand is very high so they decided new actor, a new pair in serial, you came there and give audition, you will be select there then, it's good..

Karan- but..

Tripura- no if, no but, for sometime you started your career for serial and and also give side by side movie audition, is it OK with you, don't think about my proposal but think about these serial audition, OK I waiting for you tomorrow morning at audition place, OK..

Karan only nodded..

Present: Karan reached his set and started his work..

6 month she waited for my reply, she never asked me about my reply but she care me always before proposed & after proposed, she never change her behavior for me, never..

I started doing serial, and I won 1st award for best male actor, because of her, she force me to do serial and I won the award, after that my par day demand also increase then I buy own flat on 21st floor, she didn't know about anything, I took her with me..

Tripura- who is these house..

Karan- you like it..

Tripura- if course I like it, see the view of sea & sun, it's nice..

Karan- Yaa, what do you think about here evening coffee..

Tripura- it's good..

Karan- then you make my regular coffee and spend every evening here with me in my arms always for long time..

Tripura look at him blank..

Karan- you asked me na you want 2 pet and you give them mother love but father love, I will give them father love for long life, will you accept me as your pets father..

Tripura's eyes filed with tears..

Karan- don't cry I can't handle your tears, I want your answer, to would be my girl, my wife &..

Tripura- and..

Karan- my daughter's maa, in my life I always love 3 ladies, in my life no one replace their place from my heart, maa, you and our daughter's will you accept me..

Tripura- I don't have family, I m orphan..

Karan- I m your family, don't you dare say again your self orphan, it hurts me a lot..

Tripura- I will not say that word ever again..

Karan- here after we both shift to our home..

Tripura- our..

Karan- yes this is our home..

Tripura- are you serious..

Karan- yes..

Tripura- you told your maa about me...

Karan- no but I will, you trust me..

Tripura- a lot and she kissed him softly on his lips but that kissed turn into a positive one..

After broke the kiss..

Karan- here after we share everything OK..

Tripura- no..

Karan- why..

Tripura- we share everything but after marriage..

Karan- kiss! My power bank plz..

Tripura- you are so mean..

Karan- I know that, now sign on these papers..

Tripura- what papers..

Karan- sign it and he show paper, but only sign part show her..

Tripura- what's in that papers..

Karan- jaan plz sign it..

Tripura- but jaan..

Karan- you trust me na..

Tripura- yes..

Karan- then sign it and Tripura sign that papers..

Present: karan- jaan don't you want believe which paper you sign, very soon you got latter jaan, on our 5th love anniversary, I wanted to propose you for marriage but maa, she is not ready and you want ready coz maa not ready, after marriage I am going to be a outsider..


Karan back to home early and make coffee for them and waiting for Tripura in home, he called her but her phn busy..

Karan- who is that person she talked so long and listen door open sound, tipsy enter in home with talking on phn, and saw Karan is came early, she got surprise, she give surprise smile and look Karan asked her sign language, who..

She signal him 5 minutes more..

And she went for fresh up with phn..

After she came out from room in her sleeveless & short's and seat on floor, her back touched to Karan's leg and say- it's so much headache day jaan..

Karan caressing her hairs and given little massage on her head- I said you jaan don't do that project, give them some excuse, but you..

Tripura- now only 5 days more..

Karan- these Sunday we both are not go any where you will take full rest don't argue on that..

Tripura- OK..

Karan- and you will not doing any work, I will do everything..

Tripura- OK anything else..

Karan- no..


Next 2-3 days Tripura got busy in her work, she didn't take care of her, she didn't take her breakfast, lunch properly, she ignores all her schedule and the end result, she faint on set, and got hospitalized...


Continue soon..


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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Awww sooo beautiful part n love the way u wrote present n past wow its soo beautiful n AriKa proposed eachother aweee but end mein yeh kya hua Tipsy fainted hope she is fine now waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Cute and sweet update.
What happened to Priya?
Please change ram's mothers view about Priya.
Thanks and continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Some beautiful remembrances of past and present scenario where Karan and Tipsy met. They both are thinking if some surprise for each other.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
awesome
waiting eagerly for the next part

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