Chapter Eight FOR AN UNUSUAL SUSPECT ON PG 17

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kiddo123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Lovely update
Lukng forward fr d next part

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

OMG his last statement wanna see Priya's reaction. The way they get attracted to each other's can't let go each other from their thought in all the odds is something intoxicated.

Narration was absolutely, I feel like reading it endlessly. I always cherish Raya's eyelock and the affection, insecurity, bond, attraction they share they just show it in just one of there eyelock, one touch, one look, one gesture th s is enough to get connected to them. You making me fall in love with this couple yet again with your beautiful story narration. Each and every emotion was put in with so much care n sensibly I loved it.

Thank you dear you are one of the best writers If has.

Keep writing I m already waiting for the next part 😳😛

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

Both are stupid in love I must say
Can't they open up and confess how they feel
They are such a fool 😆
I am also hoping for the same

Yeah excitement can be hinted in your reply my dear
Same is my condition just waiting for arrival of 16 April
Between u are on FB in BALH family

when it's true love then one is more scared about their own feelings..they will discover that soon enough. Aanchal, I am on BALH family FB page par maine bhi kafi der se Sakshi ki tarah sanayas le rakha tha...I might get more active now with this KTBM

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: kiddo123
Lovely update
Lukng forward fr d next part

Thank you...I am working on the next part..hopefully soon!

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: bpatil3
OMG his last statement wanna see Priya's reaction. The way they get attracted to each other's can't let go each other from their thought in all the odds is something intoxicated.
Narration was absolutely, I feel like reading it endlessly. I always cherish Raya's eyelock and the affection, insecurity, bond, attraction they share they just show it in just one of there eyelock, one touch, one look, one gesture th s is enough to get connected to them. You making me fall in love with this couple yet again with your beautiful story narration. Each and every emotion was put in with so much care n sensibly I loved it.
Thank you dear you are one of the best writers If has.
Keep writing I m already waiting for the next part 😳😛

Thank you for such a lovely comment! This Ram's problem is that he ends up saying the wrong thing all the time and ends up pushing people away. The main base of this story is their sizzling chemistry with that soulful connection so I am trying my best to keep that essence going. Will try to update soon!

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: maira94
Nice update

thank you!😃

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan
when it's true love then one is more scared about their own feelings..they will discover that soon enough. Aanchal, I am on BALH family FB page par maine bhi kafi der se Sakshi ki tarah sanayas le rakha tha...I might get more active now with this KTBM

Their feelings are very strong which is why after so many months of separation they cannot deny the attraction between them. But one can hope only for their confession.

But why had u taken Sanyas from FB 😛 come back dear as all the fans are coming back with KTBH arrival and one more thing a good writer is also back with her writing on BALH family.

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DiehardRaYafan

@DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

Their feelings are very strong which is why after so many months of separation they cannot deny the attraction between them. But one can hope only for their confession.

But why had u taken Sanyas from FB 😛 come back dear as all the fans are coming back with KTBH arrival and one more thing a good writer is also back with her writing on BALH family.

Hey Aanchal, sorry for replying so late...have been extremely busy and it will be like this for next few months. I am hardly getting time to write and would love to read good stories on our RaYa. Regarding this story, strong feelings are certainly there but Ram has hurt her so much in the past...will Priya trust him again? Let's wait and see

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan
Hey Aanchal, sorry for replying so late...have been extremely busy and it will be like this for next few months. I am hardly getting time to write and would love to read good stories on our RaYa. Regarding this story, strong feelings are certainly there but Ram has hurt her so much in the past...will Priya trust him again? Let's wait and see

It's ok dear we all can wait for the next update take your time. I am hoping about Ram realising his mistake and feeling towards Priya.

U can read goos RaYa story on BALH family on FB