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ic_2000

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Beautiful & interesting ..
Waiting for next part.

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umayal

@LuvSSever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: noddiye

Thanks for your detailed feedback and for actually encouraging me to write this. Its your feedback which actually motivated me to write this and complete other FFs as well. So a big thank you and i will complete all the pending FFs and this story too.

Neha

Oh dear,what shall i say...

You are an amazing writer and one of my favourites...and your writing speaks of your works..

I am so glad and happy that i could stimulate you to continue the FF's.

I just expressed the feelings on reading your stories..so credits to your stories...

Infact i am so happy that you continued, bcoz all were my fav stories and i wanted to read full story..

Pleasure is always mine to read your stories and since u decided to continue,its only ended in my favour..:) lol.. So thanks to you and your friend for doing so...

And again this story of yours also hv unique plot and i am eager to read more..

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umayal

@LuvSSever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Hi dear..

Another lovely update from you..

So start was simple,criminal arrested, trio friends apologised, Ram was ok with it and about to go..

But now comes the destiny part that had plans to join Raya..

Ram's car tyre punctured..thnks to hard road...lol

So ram had to stay overnight..

Now Raya got a chance to be introduced and knw each other too..:)

Ram a struggling writer,priya financial analyst, ur leads profiles are interesting too every time...:)

So Ram believe in love with a stranger,love at first sight,it seems he had one seeing priya..:)

Priya doesnt want to believe all this due to hurtful past..

So then now its interesting to know how their love life starts..

And saviour priti is there i think to initiate all..lol

The way you write your leads scenes always interest me more..you write those emotional nuances beautifully..

So eager to read further parts.

Thnks for the update.

Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago

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iluvusakshi

@iluvusakshi

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+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

marvelous. superb writing. waiting for next part eagely.

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contactcharu

@contactcharu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Very nice

Waiting eagerly for the next part...

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abhishekpanchal

@abhishekpanchal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

superb!! hats off to you...yaar... seriously...its really fresh... something new and never imagined before... their characters are so different...just amazing...ram a writer her being financial analyst... superb...the story moving slowly and mills and boons...never heard of...but ur small description gave an idea... :-D but all we need and want is raya...as long as they will fall head to toe...in love wid each other its not an issue :-P disturbed past...??? hmmm must be something huge...well do pm me... :-) and really amazingly penned down

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Wow lovely part n ram is the writer cool waiting for raya love story

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Ramdewaani1345

@Ramdewaani1345

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Hey plz updare your ff far or near also.I love that story of urs.waiting for next part eagerly...

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reshak

@reshak

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Read both parts in a go... Beautiful n interesting story..
so raya met in unique way.. Ram is writer..interesting waitin for next part..

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leena

@leena04

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: noddiye

Thank you for your messages to get me back and thanks for liking the story too.

I actually needed to do you msg either how we had got such super hit plot in story OMG this is going really awesome I m going to love it all the way for sure this is going to be the amazing one ... please is all mine for sure...

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